{"id":11481,"date":"2024-09-25T12:00:01","date_gmt":"2024-09-25T12:00:01","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2024\/09\/25\/narrative-structure-humor-science-nature-journalism\/"},"modified":"2024-10-16T17:46:55","modified_gmt":"2024-10-16T17:46:55","slug":"narrative-structure-humor-science-nature-journalism","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2024\/09\/25\/narrative-structure-humor-science-nature-journalism\/","title":{"rendered":"Daring to bring humor and wonder to serious subjects"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p class=\"has-drop-cap\">Tom Whipple\u2019s recent story in the Times of London about the&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.thetimes.com\/uk\/environment\/article\/beavers-are-thriving-in-devon-a-decade-on-from-rogue-rewilding-7jmqst2p8\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><strong>reappearance of beavers in Devon, England,<\/strong><\/a>&nbsp;could have been a deeply serious science piece, laden with facts, numbers and jargon, except for the fact that it was Whipple who wrote it. The&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.thetimes.com\/profile\/tom-whipple\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">science editor at The Times<\/a>, Whipple is known to readers for his lively and engaging writing. And so his story about the beavers was, yes, a deeply serious science piece, but one written in an inviting, entertaining way.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>How did he do that?<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>TONE.<\/strong>&nbsp;Whipple respects the reader. He doesn\u2019t over-explain. He lets readers in on the joke, when there is one. He writes as though he is writing to a friend. He surprises the readers with word choice and sentence structure.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>STRUCTURE<\/strong>. In this piece, he moves from narrative to background\/context to narrative seamlessly. The story is lively, the tone is warm and witty. \u201cIt\u2019s beaver o\u2019clock,\u201d he writes, as a group of people wait for the beavers to emerge from their den. He uses the word \u201cbeavery,\u201d which might not be a real word but which is perfect in this context. He brings in mythology:<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Like the nearby Beast of Bodmin Moor, the beavers were spotted in Devon in fleeting glances, glimpsed in implausible sightings \u2014 and dismissed as otters.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>VOICE.<\/strong>&nbsp;Whipple\u2019s voice doesn\u2019t change between narrative and background; it remains approachable and slightly humorous. He dares to make reference to beaver testicles, and to beavers\u2019 cute button noses:<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Conservation researchers don\u2019t name their animals. That kind of sentimentality is discouraged, in what is a serious science. So Holden only occasionally calls him Gordon the Beaver, before hurriedly correcting himself.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>HE CARES<\/strong>. As you will see in our conversation below and when you read the piece.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>HE\u2019S FUNNY<\/strong>. See jam \/ bread \/ sandwich metaphor below.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We reached out to Whipple about the decisions he made as he worked on this story. Our conversation has been slightly edited for length and clarity.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Why did you write this story?<br><\/strong>I like beavers!<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>In all seriousness, one of the great joys of my job is I get to go and see things. It would be entirely possible to do my work sitting in an office, but I would have a lot less fun \u2014 and I think readers would probably have a slightly less fun read. As a reporter on The Times it is a privilege that I can see something that is interesting, and then invite myself along to see it, and just have people rearrange their days to accommodate me. (Early on, I was given a very good bit of advice by a grizzled editor: \u201cAlways remember, it\u2019s The Times they are talking to, not you.\u201d)<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"alignright size-full\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"275\" height=\"183\" src=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/10\/images-1.jpg\" alt=\"Times of London science editor Tom Whipple\" class=\"wp-image-11485\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">Tom Whipple<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>The ostensible point of the piece was that we are now about 10 years on from the start of a formal reintroduction program of the beaver, and also that the conservation charities want to extend the program. Really, though, I wanted to see some beavers, to get out in my raincoat and wellington boots, and hopefully write a nice piece that people wanted to read. Beavers are charismatic animals, and people like to read about them.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How long did it take you from conception to publication?<br><\/strong>I think it was a couple of months. It was difficult to coordinate times so there was some back and forth on email, but the reasons for the delay were logistical rather than editorial.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Did it change much during the editing process?<br><\/strong>Not really. I wrote it and then it ran while I was on holiday. I think it was the last thing I sent before putting on my out-of-office message on email.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I read it on the beach on my app like everyone else and remember being annoyed about one change (probably unreasonably so). In the piece I had talked about how this beaver presence actually originated with a rogue release of beavers. They were already settled in the river \u2014 and this essentially forced the government\u2019s hand. It changed the status quo so that the question wasn\u2019t \u201cdo we introduce beavers\u201d but \u201cdo we evict them?\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>This felt a little analogous to the geopolitical situation, where armies or peoples create \u201cfacts on the ground.\u201d So I described how \u201conce there were beavery facts on the ground\u2026.\u201d etc. But someone changed it to \u201cbeavery signs on the ground,\u201d which made less sense and didn\u2019t frame beavers as geopolitical actors. I probably became unduly fixated on this.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Why was it important for you to be there in person? What did you gain by being there that you might not have gleaned from reportage done by phone or email?<br><\/strong>There were no facts in the piece that I couldn\u2019t have got remotely. Probably, with some effort \u2014 perhaps watching clips on YouTube \u2014 I could have also got some color.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>But I believe and hope that something more is gained by being there in person. There are things that people will tell you in the dusk, walking along a river, as the flies dance above the water and after a day spent together, that they won\u2019t in 10 minutes on the phone. I have to think that seeing the dams and meeting the people makes a difference \u2014 because if it doesn\u2019t, then I just spend my days in an office in London. And that\u2019s not why I became a journalist.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How did you decide when to move from narrative to background and then back again?<br><\/strong>It\u2019s not something I consciously think about, but I suppose all pieces are a little like a meal. To work, you need the filling: worthy, fibrous stuff \u2014 the facts. But to actually ingest them, you need someone to have thought about how to make it palatable. So, to slightly mix my metaphors, it\u2019s a sandwich. You have layers of facts, lightened by the jam of color. And, in this genuinely terrible metaphor that I\u2019m nevertheless going to run with, you start with the jam, to draw people in. Then you give them a slice of bread that explains why they should spend their time reading it. Then some more jam so they don\u2019t find it too chewy.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>You need both. Everyone likes jam, but without the bread you\u2019d just smear it all over your face. I start with how many facts I need to convey, then separate them with enough color to hopefully keep people reading.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Who do you see as your audience, and how do you tailor your reporting and writing to them? Or do you?<br><\/strong>I always assume that my reader is someone who is intelligent but knows nothing. This is admittedly a more useful rubric when writing about quantum mechanics than beavers \u2014 which are relatively easy to understand \u2014 but it applies here, too. You assume that they will get your jokes, but you don\u2019t assume they have a degree in conservation biology.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I like to think of them as an interested and curious friend. The worst thing you can do is assume your reader is like the people who put cross comments under articles. Then you write defensively and pompously, and you please no one.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Your story opens with this line: \u201cThe beavers keep us waiting.\u201d You are putting us right there, in the action, with no prelude. Why did you choose this beginning?<br><\/strong>I don\u2019t completely know. I suppose that I\u2019m conscious when starting articles in which I\u2019ve been to see something that there\u2019s a very clich\u00e9 way of opening, where you try to describe the situation in overly purple prose.&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/umra.umn.edu\/news\/scoop-evelyn-waugh\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u201cScoop\u201d<\/a>&nbsp;(a novel by Evelyn Waugh) parodied it very well with another watery mammal:<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Feather-footed through the plashy fen passes the questing vole.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>So the key is to sit back and think, \u201cwhat actually happened\u201d and \u201cwhat did I actually think.\u201d Also, thinking about it more, I suspect that that sentence construction instantly gives the beavers agency and anthropomorphises them \u2014 which is something scientists very much disapprove of, of course, but which journalists love!<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Throughout the piece are graceful, sometimes amusing phrases and asides:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u2026it\u2019s \u201cbeaver o\u2019clock\u201d \u2026<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Like the nearby Beast of Bodmin Moor, the beavers were spotted in Devon in fleeting glances, glimpsed in implausible sightings \u2014 and dismissed as otters.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Why did you choose to include humor in what is a serious, reported, science story?<br><\/strong>I get suspicious of articles without humor, and of people who don\u2019t joke. Even when writing about COVID-19, which I did a lot of, you can sneak in some humor. You shouldn\u2019t force it. I don\u2019t want to be like the&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.nbc.com\/nbc-insider\/every-manager-of-the-office-from-michael-scott-to-dwight-schrute\">boss in \u201cThe Office\u201d<\/a>&nbsp;(If I was like him, I suppose I\u2019d be the last to realize it), but there\u2019s almost always a place to think, \u201cwhat\u2019s funny here.\u201d If there is something funny, you should put it in. Some of the best scientists in history were funny. Feynman, Crick, Einstein. Newton wasn\u2019t funny, though; he was an arsehole.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>There is no first person in this piece, although the opening line comes close. Yet you the narrator are very much a presence. Was this deliberate? And how did you do this?<br><\/strong>Right when I started in journalism, writing on my student newspaper, I put myself into pieces a lot. Then I remember going to a talk by a proper journalist, who said if an article started with \u201cI\u201d he stopped reading. It made me feel like an idiot and I never forgot it.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Of course, he was wrong. There is absolutely a place for \u201cI.\u201d Sometimes things happen to you, and it becomes disingenuous to avoid the pronoun. 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