{"id":1633,"date":"2017-11-14T16:00:29","date_gmt":"2017-11-14T16:00:29","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2017\/11\/14\/the-pitch-how-to-get-the-attention-of-a-senior-editor-at-smithsonian-magazine\/"},"modified":"2024-11-18T19:56:29","modified_gmt":"2024-11-18T19:56:29","slug":"the-pitch-how-to-get-the-attention-of-a-senior-editor-at-smithsonian-magazine","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2017\/11\/14\/the-pitch-how-to-get-the-attention-of-a-senior-editor-at-smithsonian-magazine\/","title":{"rendered":"How to get the attention of a senior editor at Smithsonian Magazine"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>As a senior editor commissioning science features for Smithsonian Magazine, Jennie Rothenberg Gritz gets tons of freelance queries. Yet few cold pitches result in an article. Why not?<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:40px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"block block-legacy-page-blocks legacy-page-blocks  \">\n\n    <h2 class=\"legacy-page-blocks-subhead\">The Pitch<\/h2>\n\n    <div class=\" legacy-page-blocks-text\">\n            <p>In an occasional series, Storyboard examines the elusive art of the story pitch. We talk to writers and editors about their tips, tricks and pet peeves, and annotate some real pitches.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/tag\/the-pitch\/\">Read more from The Pitch here<\/a><\/p>\n\n    <\/div>\n\t\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:20px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cThey\u2019re often stories that should be told, but they\u2019re not being framed as good stories, with good characters, narrative and a little twist that makes you surprised,\u201d she says.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>That doesn\u2019t mean Gritz isn\u2019t looking for new writers with great ideas. The science stories she runs generally overlap with the themes of the Smithsonian Institution\u2019s collections, including animals, the environment, space and human health. Contrary to what some writers assume, however, only the front-of-book section and certain themed issues require stories with a historical element.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I talked to Gritz, who previously edited web features for The Atlantic,&nbsp;about her pitching preferences and pet peeves. We also annotated a cold pitch she got from journalist Ben Crair that ended up running in the April 2017 issue; online it was called&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.smithsonianmag.com\/travel\/biggest-tree-canopy-planet-stretches-across-five-acres-180962470\/\">\u201cThe Biggest Tree Canopy on the Planet Stretches Across Nearly Five Acres<\/a>.\u201d Our conversation has been edited for length and clarity.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What\u2019s the best way for a writer to break into the Smithsonian in print<em>?<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>All sections are open to freelancers, but shorter pieces are the best way to start for a new writer. Our front-of-book section, called Prologue, recently changed to be all about creative, interesting takes on history. If someone does a 500- to 700-word piece and we really like it, then we\u2019re more likely to accept a feature. It\u2019s not super common to accept a pitch that involves sending a new writer to an exotic location.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What should freelancers keep in mind about your editorial calendar when they\u2019re pitching?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>With any magazine that has themed issues, you know they\u2019re going to be thinking at some point in the year about how to fill them. If you look at our past issues online, you can figure out the themes. Every year, we have a package called \u201cEvotourism\u201d about places you can visit that have to do with evolution. We also have a \u201cFuture\u201d issue every spring. There\u2019s the \u201cSecrets of American History\u201d issue in the fall. In mid-September, we already have lots of stories slated for the following April.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cYou don\u2019t always need to have a character driving the pitch. It could just be an interesting juxtaposition of ideas or a really cool technology.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How much pre-reporting do you like to see in pitches?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We want to know that the writer knows the subject. We also ask whether there have been other stories about the topic before. If the writer knows who the scientists or figures they\u2019re going to talk to are, that\u2019s really good. If he or she has a specific trip or place in mind, that\u2019s also helpful. We want a story, not a topic: \u201cHere\u2019s a specific thing that\u2019s happening, and I can tell you about it.\u201d We have a few columns on science and history that are more personality-driven and essay-like, and some people have sent me fully finished pieces to look at for those.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Generally, around four paragraphs or one page sounds about right for a pitch. Some people really like pitches to be super-short, but I need to see enough to know there\u2019s substance there, especially for a feature.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What sets apart the pitches you say yes to?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>There has to be something surprising and narratively interesting there. If the story is about the natural world, either the person you\u2019re writing about has to be super charismatic and interesting, or something done about the issue has to be amazing. Often I get pitches along the lines of: A species of lichen is disappearing, and a scientist is doing research to see why. But lichen isn\u2019t itself interesting, and they\u2019re not doing some wild, crazy thing to deal with the problem. An example of great story my predecessor commissioned and I ended up editing was about a scientist helping to stop the elephant poaching trade by creating a map of Africa based on elephant poop. Poop is super weird and interesting!<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>You don\u2019t always need to have a character driving the pitch. It could just be an interesting juxtaposition of ideas or a really cool technology. In fact, in some cases it\u2019s a low-hanging fruit to go for stories where a wacky, zany scientist drives a crazy car and wears crazy clothes. Unfortunately, women in science can\u2019t afford to be wacky and zany as much as men and end up being missed. A good writer can just make things interesting.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What are some of your other pet peeves?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I get a lot of pitches that are about something that I\u2019ve seen before. Sometimes I Google the subject and immediately see that someone else has already written the story. I also get put off when a pitch is too earnest: It\u2019s a worthwhile topic, but it\u2019s not interesting or too dry. We get a lot of scientifically minded people who don\u2019t know how to tell a story and make things vivid. Often, I kick a story to my web colleagues, because for them it can be more of a brushstroke of an idea. For print, you need a much more fleshed-out story. If you want to be the kind of writer I would reach out to with an assignment, it doesn\u2019t really work to send an email like, \u201cI write about healthcare in China. Please keep me in mind.\u201d Sending an idea that is novel and colorful is more likely to catch an editor\u2019s attention.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What\u2019s your preference when it comes to writers following up on pitches?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>It\u2019s always nice to get the email that says, \u201cI haven\u2019t heard back from you, so is it all right if I send it to other magazines?\u201d It\u2019s true in anything in life: If people are nice, you want to work with them more.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Many writers feel like they\u2019re not always extended the same courtesy from editors. What should writers think when editors don\u2019t respond, even when they follow up?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I think editors are just inundated. When I was in journalism school 15 years ago, we didn\u2019t expect to get responses. It was a really big deal to get any response. Now that there\u2019s email, suddenly we\u2019re expected to write back to every pitch. A lot of pitches don\u2019t get responses, unfortunately. But if there\u2019s a sparkle of something that could work for us, I\u2019ll often push the writer more. Some pitches have worked out through that kind of back and forth.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"740\" height=\"621\" src=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/pitch-sequence-e1550878266780.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-6856\" srcset=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/pitch-sequence-e1550878266780.jpg 740w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/pitch-sequence-e1550878266780-300x252.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 740px) 100vw, 740px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">Pitching longform stories is almost as mystical as the ability to pitch in the big leagues. <small>John Rooney\/Associated Press<\/small><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><em>And here\u2019s the annotation of the story pitch.<\/em><em>\u00a0My questions are in red, her responses in blue. To read the pitch without annotations first, click the \u2018Hide all annotations\u2019 button.<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\">***<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-html mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \nThis month I am planning to travel to Bangalore. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">Is it a good idea to pitch before traveling somewhere, and how far in advance?<\/span><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">A month was good. Since he was a new writer for us, it was good that he was going on a trip already paid for by someone else. We were really glad to have the story, but it probably wouldn&#8217;t have merited thousands of dollars for a writer we&#8217;ve never worked with before. Of course, we still paid the expenses. For writers we trust, or stories we really want from our side, we\u2019ll definitely pay. The Smithsonian actually has a pretty good travel budget.<\/span><\/span> While there, I would like to visit Thimmamma Marrimanu, a fig tree that is the largest tree in the world. It is so large that you can actually miss the tree for the forest. Thimmamma Marrimanu&#8217;s branches spread across the ground and rise again toward the sun, giving an impression of many different trees. Its canopy covers more than five acres, offering enough shade for twenty-thousand people. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">What worked for you about this opening?<\/span><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">By the time we get to end of this pretty short paragraph, he\u2019s given us a vision of something. He knew his audience well enough to know that, because of its origin in museums, Smithsonian is a magazine more driven by things than ideas: concrete scenes, objects, discoveries. For us, a tree is really cool. He also used superlatives right away: Magazines generally like things that are the \u201clargest\u201d or \u201coldest.\u201d We could also tell right away he was a really good writer: We could see the tree, and it was a really captivating image.<\/span> <\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\n&#8220;Thimmamma Marrimanu is quite possibly the largest living thing on the planet,&#8221; says YD Bar-Ness, a treetop biologist who studied India&#8217;s giant banyan trees from 2008 to 2010. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">What effect did including this quote have?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">It showed that he\u2019d gone far enough to talk to one of the experts on this topic and that there was a character. In the end, he didn&#8217;t end up being featured prominently, but when you&#8217;re talking about a tree, it&#8217;s nice to see that there are humans there as well. And it gave the pitch authority: A scientist was backing up his assertion that it was the largest tree on the planet.<\/span><\/span>Using simple technologies like Google Maps, Bar-Ness measured eight giant banyans across the subcontinent. Thimmamma Marrimanu was the largest, but all eight trees were bigger, by area covered, than any known tree in another country. And yet India&#8217;s giant banyan trees enjoy little of the fame of other superlative trees, like California&#8217;s sequoias.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI&#8217;d like to write a story for Smithsonian on Thimmamma Marrimanu. The giant banyan began life 600 years ago as a tiny seedling in the branches of another tree. It dropped its roots to the forest floor, slowly enveloped its host (the banyan is what&#8217;s known as a &#8220;strangler fig&#8221;), and spread outward over the centuries. In India, people have assigned it a mythological origin: They say Thimmamma Marrimanu sprang from the spot where a widow threw herself on her husband&#8217;s funeral pyre. Young couples visit Thimmamma Marrimanu today for fertility blessings. Another famous giant banyan is said to have grown from the spot where a deity dropped his toothbrush. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">Why did it help to add this spiritual or cultural element?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">It\u2019s not common for a science story to have a religious dimension. There are a lot of cool angles in this pitch that harmonize really well.<\/span> <\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nA banyan need not be giant in order to be holy. Smaller specimens grow all over India\u2014they are &#8220;pioneer&#8221; plants that thrive in inhospitable places\u2014and they too are often worshiped. In some areas of India, it is taboo to knock them down. As a result, banyans sometimes stand in fields as the only surviving plants from ancient forests, and their figs continue to attract monkeys, birds, and rodents. Human values and the natural world intersect beneath the banyans. They are symbols of what makes India so appealing to the imagination.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOn the science side, the world&#8217;s broadest trees owe their existence to one of the tiniest insects: the fig wasp. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">What was the effect of including this detail?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">It shows that he has a poetic sensibility. You have to be careful with that, because you don&#8217;t want to be overwrought and pompous. But you want to show that you have a mind that can take in symbolism and be literary in the pitch. Someone else might&#8217;ve missed this point\u2014the smallest insect and biggest tree need each other to survive\u2014but his mind worked in a storytelling way.<\/span><\/span> The relationship between fig plants and fig wasps is probably the best example in nature of &#8220;co-dependent evolution&#8221;: One without the other would quickly go extinct. The relationship between fig plants and fig wasps is one of evolution&#8217;s most poetic products, and Thimmamma Marrimanu would be a good place to study it. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">Once he got to evolution, I was sold because that\u2019s one topic area where we\u2019re always looking for something. He sent this right at the time I was looking for stories on evolution in places one could travel as a tourist for our \u201cEvotourism\u201d issue, about six months in advance.<\/span> <\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nBar-Ness is currently in Tasmania, but has offered to hook me up with the local biologists in Bangalore who know Thimmamma Marrimanu best. I should already have travel to India covered by another assignment, and Thimmamma Marrimanu is just a few hours outside the city, so expenses would be modest. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">How important is it for the pitch to discuss logistics like this?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">It helps, especially if someone wants to go to an exotic locale. It&#8217;s less important if it&#8217;s an armchair or local topic. 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