{"id":1690,"date":"2018-03-06T16:00:46","date_gmt":"2018-03-06T16:00:46","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2018\/03\/06\/the-pitch-pacific-standards-executive-editor-shares-some-dos-and-donts\/"},"modified":"2024-11-18T19:55:38","modified_gmt":"2024-11-18T19:55:38","slug":"the-pitch-pacific-standards-executive-editor-shares-some-dos-and-donts","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2018\/03\/06\/the-pitch-pacific-standards-executive-editor-shares-some-dos-and-donts\/","title":{"rendered":"Pacific Standard&#8217;s executive editor shares some do&#8217;s and don&#8217;ts on pitching stories"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/throwin_shadows\">Jennifer Sahn<\/a>, executive editor of Pacific Standard, understands why writers sometimes feel frustrated when editors take weeks to respond to their pitches or don\u2019t write back at all. But she wants writers to see the other side, too.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:40px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"block block-legacy-page-blocks legacy-page-blocks  \">\n\n    <h2 class=\"legacy-page-blocks-subhead\">The Pitch<\/h2>\n\n    <div class=\" legacy-page-blocks-text\">\n            <p>In an occasional series, Storyboard examines the elusive art of the story pitch. We talk to writers and editors about their tips, tricks and pet peeves, and annotate some real pitches.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/tag\/the-pitch\/\">Read more from The Pitch here<\/a><\/p>\n\n    <\/div>\n\t\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:20px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cEvery editor is now doing the job that two or three people did 15 years ago. Meanwhile, the volume of correspondence has exploded tenfold,\u201d she says. \u201cThere just isn\u2019t a formula in publishing right now where there\u2019s enough time to take the care to respond to everyone who wants to be part of your magazine.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Yes, editors have to reject more pieces than they take, but they\u2019re in the profession for the chance to say yes, Sahn says. \u201cWe\u2019re looking for the stories that excite us and that we want to invest time in. The most exciting thing for an editor is to hear from a person they\u2019ve never heard from before and know they\u2019re going to be part of making that person a better writer. That magic moment of chemistry is the thing that makes your career as an editor.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Sahn has been with the Santa Barbara-based magazine since 2015, when it shifted from focusing on social science to emphasizing justice. Under the tagline \u201cstories that matter,\u201d the general-interest magazine covers economics, the environment, politics, education and social justice around the world.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Sahn, who edits print features, spoke with me about pitching faux pas, how much Pacific Standard pays, and what happens on her end of a pitch email. We also dissected Joe Eaton\u2019s pitch for \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/psmag.com\/magazine\/king-of-boise\">King of Boise<\/a>,\u201d which appeared in the November 2017 issue. Our conversation has been edited for length and clarity.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"alignright size-full is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"740\" height=\"987\" src=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/pacific-standard-cover-2-e1550874267985.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-7161\" style=\"width:300px\" srcset=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/pacific-standard-cover-2-e1550874267985.jpg 740w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/pacific-standard-cover-2-e1550874267985-225x300.jpg 225w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 740px) 100vw, 740px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">A Pacific Standard cover from last year. <small>Courtesy Pacific Standard<\/small><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What are some of your favorite features in the magazine that exemplify what you\u2019re looking for?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/psmag.com\/magazine\/king-of-boise\">King of Boise<\/a>,\u201d which we\u2019re talking about today, is one my favorites because it\u2019s unique and a powerful narrative that doesn\u2019t let up. Kathryn Joyce\u2019s \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/psmag.com\/social-justice\/the-disappearing-soldier\">The Disappearing Soldier<\/a>\u201d was an incredible story that reminded me of \u201cInto the Wild.\u201d It\u2019s about PTSD and the failures of the system once people come home, but also a forensic story about a missing person and a psychology story, because nobody knew how he ended up in the Adirondacks, where he died. Amy Irvine\u2019s \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/psmag.com\/news\/conflagrations\">Conflagrations<\/a>\u201d was a strong personal narrative, but at the heart of it was maternal mental illness, which is not very well-known and widely misunderstood.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What do you wish you got more pitches about, and are there topics you hear about too often?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I\u2019ve been starved for really good stories about education. I would love to see some stories on innovative things happening or new movements percolating that seem to be getting traction. In general, the best way to grab my attention is to show me something surprising. Once we do a big print story about something, we probably won\u2019t do another for a year or so. But I don\u2019t think there are any areas in which we\u2019re saturated.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What are the biggest mistakes you see in pitches?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>&nbsp;<\/strong>Not understanding the magazine you\u2019re pitching and sending something inappropriate, like an academic paper. If you don\u2019t take time to research the outlet, why would you expect an editor to take time to read your pitch? It\u2019s a breakdown of the system. But the biggest mistake is just failing to be really compelling. If a pitch doesn\u2019t draw me in and isn\u2019t articulating a unique enough story or argument, it doesn\u2019t rise to the top. I\u2019ll often encourage people to write the beginning of the pitch as you would the beginning of the story. Give a sense of the character, scene, narrative tension and narrative voice, especially if you haven\u2019t worked with the editor before.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-pullquote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"wp-block-pullquote\"><blockquote><p>\u201cI\u2019ll often encourage people to write the beginning of the pitch as you would the beginning of the story. Give a sense of the character, scene, narrative tension and narrative voice, especially if you haven\u2019t worked with the editor before.\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How common is it for Pacific Standard to assign stories based on cold pitches?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I don\u2019t have a percentage for you, but it does happen. We do read pitches, and I have assigned a few just in the last six months. It\u2019s not a black hole here.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What are your rates?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Our rates for print tend to be around $1 a word. The web rates start around $250.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What should writers know about your editorial calendar?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Our print magazine comes out eight times a year, including two special issues. Typically, we line up an issue six months before it\u2019s in readers\u2019 hands. Each includes three or four features, or occasionally a photo essay or longform interview. Right now, half of our 2018 issues have gone to press, are headed to press or are lined up and in editing. Of the remaining four issues coming out in 2018, one is a photo issue and one is a themed issue on borders and boundaries, for which we have been planning feature-length content for months already. Front and back of book have a somewhat shorter lead time. [Sections are described in Pacific Standard\u2019s&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/psmag.com\/page\/write-us\">guide<\/a>&nbsp;for writers]. We publish a dozen stories a day on our website.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>When should someone pitch the web instead of print?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Web pieces are shorter, more timely, related to the moment and don\u2019t rely on having major characters and scenes. A longform piece is told on the scale of a feature film, where you have different eras and scenes and characters coming in and out. We will do longform web-only stories that are timely and reported, but they tend to be more in response to things happening at the time.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Whom should writers pitch, and when can they expect a response?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We ask that writers send all pitches to pitches@psmag.com and identify what section they\u2019re pitching. Everybody at Pacific Standard gets a high volume of pitches, and we\u2019re not able to respond to all of them. We say clearly on our website that if you don\u2019t hear from us in four weeks, please move on. I know that\u2019s an eon for a freelancer, but given the workflow we just can\u2019t promise anything faster.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How many pitches do you receive?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Pacific Standard receives 30-50 pitches a week to the general pitches in box. On top of that, each assigning editor also receives pitches directly, some of us more than others.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>When should a writer follow up?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>It depends who you\u2019re pitching and what that person does. For me, if I\u2019m on deadline with a long story, I\u2019m definitely not reading pitch emails. If my gut feeling is no, my instinct is to give a pitch one more look and make sure, and then to try to write something helpful. Perhaps I wait too long with the expectation I would be able to say something useful while saying no. When I get a pitch that interests me, I spend quite a bit of time on it. I do some research on the story independently to find out what I can. I want to identify the context and find out the scope of it: Is the story bigger than it\u2019s been pitched? Is the pitch too broad? How much coverage has the story already received? If it\u2019s a writer I haven\u2019t worked with before, I am going to read clips. That\u2019s a lot of work. I think it gets lost how much time editors spend on pitches. And that doesn\u2019t include the editing of longform stories, the process of fact-checking them and getting them into print, coordinating with 15 people in your office, and going to meetings. I don\u2019t fault anybody for checking back in, but I don\u2019t tend to respond to those emails. If I spent time on follow-up emails, it would take time away from coming up with a thoughtful answer on something. Everybody deserves a response. Have I been able to give everyone a response? I have not. I\u2019m one person, and there\u2019s not a good solution that hits everybody\u2019s needs.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How do you feel about simultaneous submissions?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Speaking for me and not Pacific Standard, I don\u2019t mind it, as long as the writer is transparent. I understand the need for a freelancer living story-to-story to put the seeds out there.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><em>My questions are in red, her responses in blue. To read the pitch without annotations first, click the \u2018Hide all annotations\u2019 button.<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:100px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-html mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n<h3>The King of Boise<\/h3>\n\n<h4><em>The proliferation of prescription painkillers has created a public health crisis. For drug dealers, it has launched the opportunity of a lifetime.<\/em><\/h4>\n\n<span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">What stood out about the pitch overall?<\/span><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">This was a topic that everybody was publishing stories about, but this viewpoint had been ignored by all of them: the perspective that dealers are also addicts, are victims themselves. Even if Austin created a lot of havoc and pain for families and individuals who suffered from addiction, he himself was suffering. When as a reader you&#8217;re divided about how to feel about a character, that&#8217;s interesting territory. Also, we already had in mind doing a \u201cblack market\u201d issue, though he didn&#8217;t know about that.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nAustin Serb started selling drugs at 13, after he made a marijuana connection while working at McDonalds. Six years later, in 2014, Serb was the largest dealer of the prescription painkiller oxycodone in Boise, Idaho, bringing in more than $100,000 a month in profit. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">How effective was his decision to open the pitch in this way?<\/span><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">My thoughts were: He\u2019s only 13\u2014wow, that\u2019s really young. He\u2019s working at McDonald&#8217;s\u2014that\u2019s super specific. The author has really gotten some of the story already. We&#8217;re following him for six years. He&#8217;s the largest dealer in Boise. $100,000 a month. It\u2019s kind of an amazing accretion of facts. Even though it\u2019s a quiet beginning to the pitch, the numbers grab your attention.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nThis is the story of how the proliferation of highly addictive prescription painkillers has created a major market for a new age of drug dealers in cities and towns across America. It illustrates the opioid public health crisis from the other side\u2014through the tale of an unlikely dealer who profited from expanding painkiller addiction and easy access to supplies of prescription drugs. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">Is this kind of explicit zooming-out, \u201cso what\u201d section always necessary?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">This introduced the idea that we\u2019re looking at the opioid crisis from a different perspective. This is him saying: My story is different from other stories you\u2019ve read about this.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe story is set in Boise, a city of 200,000 in one of the most conservative states in the country. Like many rural states, Idaho faces a serious opioid addiction problem, ranking fourth in non-medical use of prescription painkillers, according federal statistics.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe story traces Austin Serb\u2019s drug dealing career from his early days selling small amounts of marijuana, through making his first oxycodone connection and taking over the trade in Boise, to his downfall and arrest after he becomes addicted to the drugs he sells. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">This was a story about one dealer, probably in many ways unremarkable, not a huge drug operation. What made him a compelling character?<\/span><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">The answer was access. The writer was in correspondence with a person whose experience seemed like it would yield a good opportunity to look at the opioid crisis from a different perspective.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nA skinny homeschooled kid who never left Boise, except on drug-buying trips (where more often than not, he was robbed) Serb was an unlikely drug dealer. He stumbled into his role as top dealer in Boise after a chance meeting with a California painkiller source at a concert of the rap artist The Game. The operation lasted more than five years, through high jinx and associated petty crime as the kids involved got rich beyond their wildest dreams.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIt\u2019s a story not of a highly-organized and disciplined criminal operation, but of a group of high school kids who threw giant house parties, flashed wads of $100 bills and bragged about being the biggest drug dealers around. That Serb and his group operated for so long and generated so much money is a testament to the community\u2019s appetite for painkillers, a unique class of drugs that sold out as fast as the group could acquire them.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAt the end of his spree, Serb was approaching 20, a kid with 50 pairs of basketball shoes, a series of rental houses with televisions and video games in every room and a Mazda RX-7 modeled after a car from the \u201cFast and Furious\u201d film franchise. As the DEA moved in on the group, Serb doubled down, expanding his operation and his addiction. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">What effect did including all these details have?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">That was totally key for me. I felt he\u2019d done a lot of research on the story and had been in conversation with the subject. The details make it real, and they\u2019re quirky. They make you feel like you&#8217;re there. They&#8217;re priceless.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nSerb is currently serving a 10-year sentence at a federal prison in California. We have traded dozens of email messages, and I plan to visit him to prison while reporting the story. I am also in contact with Ajellon Dedeaux, Serb\u2019s supplier in California, who is also serving a prison sentence in federal prison, and a number of other members of Serb\u2019s group in Boise. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">Are you always looking for a section describing access?<\/span><span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">I need to know that the characters are willing participants and are going to be available in the way they need to be. Austin was transferred in the middle, and we had to start all over with the permission process of getting into a prison. There\u2019s some stuff you can\u2019t control.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nPlease let me know if you would like to talk further about this story idea. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">Were you familiar with the writer, or was this a cold pitch?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">He had written for Pacific Standard before, so he was a known entity.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nI am a freelance writer and journalism professor who regularly publishes in publications including National Geographic, The Atlantic, Pacific Standard and the Washington Post. I worked as a health care investigative reporter at the Center for Public Integrity in Washington, where my work was regularly published in collaboration with national print, radio and television outlets. <span class=\"article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active\"><a class=\"article-annotation-control\"><\/a><span class=\"annotation annotation-red\">This writer&#8217;s credentials were pretty impressive. Would you assign this story to a less experienced writer?<\/span> <span class=\"annotation annotation-blue\">A newer writer would have to go further to show me their narrative style. That is half of what I&#8217;m looking for: a good storyteller. Anyone can write a story about something you&#8217;ve never heard of before, but if they&#8217;re not writing it in an interesting way, you\u2019re not reading it. 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