{"id":1712,"date":"2018-04-17T15:00:36","date_gmt":"2018-04-17T15:00:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2018\/04\/17\/the-pitch-the-story-ideas-mother-jones-managing-editor-wants-to-see\/"},"modified":"2024-11-19T15:03:31","modified_gmt":"2024-11-19T15:03:31","slug":"the-pitch-the-story-ideas-mother-jones-managing-editor-wants-to-see","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2018\/04\/17\/the-pitch-the-story-ideas-mother-jones-managing-editor-wants-to-see\/","title":{"rendered":"The story ideas Mother Jones&#8217; managing editor wants to see"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p class=\"has-drop-cap\">Mother Jones is known for its hard-hitting investigations, like Shane Bauer\u2019s\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/politics\/2016\/06\/cca-private-prisons-corrections-corporation-inmates-investigation-bauer\/\">35,000-word undercover account<\/a>\u00a0of working as a private prison guard in Louisiana, which won a National Magazine Award for reporting last year.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>That doesn\u2019t mean editors at the San Francisco-based magazine, which was also honored as Magazine of the Year in 2017, only want to publish pieces about criminal justice. \u201cShane\u2019s amazing story has led to a boomlet of pitches about the topic,\u201d says managing editor Ian Gordon. \u201cIt\u2019s not a bad problem to have, but we have a lot of people on staff that like writing about it.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:20px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"block block-legacy-page-blocks legacy-page-blocks  \">\n\n    <h2 class=\"legacy-page-blocks-subhead\">The Pitch<\/h2>\n\n    <div class=\" legacy-page-blocks-text\">\n            <p><em>In an occasional series, Storyboard examines the elusive art of the story pitch. We talk to writers and editors about their tips, tricks and pet peeves, and annotate some real pitches.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"\/tag\/the-pitch\/\">Read more from The Pitch here<\/a><\/p>\n\n    <\/div>\n\t\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-spacer mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<div style=\"height:20px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Gordon would love to see more ideas about subjects people don\u2019t always associate with the Mother Jones name:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/media\/2016\/05\/our-waxed-barbie-vaginas-ourselves-1\/\">culture<\/a>, technology,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/politics\/2013\/03\/baseball-dominican-system-yewri-guillen\/\">sports<\/a>. He\u2019s looking for more queries for profiles and essays. And a little humor goes a long way: \u201cWe write so much about bad actors that we\u2019re always looking for people to bring some levity to leaven the mix,\u201d he says.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Below, Gordon shares his tips about pitching Mother Jones, which was named after a 20th-century labor organizer. We also discuss Michael Sokolove\u2019s (very long) pitch for his story&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/politics\/2017\/05\/michael-slager-trial-walter-scott-police-shooting-north-charleston-south-carolina-3\/\">\u201cWhat Does It Take to Convict a Cop?\u201d<\/a>&nbsp;about the police shooting of Walter Scott. Our conversation has been edited for length and clarity.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How would you describe stories that are right for Mother Jones?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Everything we do is in the public interest. We write about national politics, environmental issues, corporate wrongdoing in all forms, crime and justice, human rights, political influence and power in different spheres. Deep reporting is the hallmark of what we do, whether that\u2019s unearthing data or documents others don\u2019t have, getting access to people or just being a bulldog and reporting the hell out of something. We\u2019re looking for what magazine editors everywhere want: stories that are compelling narratives, have characters and aren\u2019t exactly what you\u2019d expect.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How much freelance work does MoJo take?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Unlike a lot of publications these days, we\u2019ve really committed to having full-time reporters. We\u2019re also taking advantage of our great&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/jobs\/fellowships\/\">fellowship program<\/a>&nbsp;and promoting people up the ranks. We don\u2019t do much freelance stuff on the web, since our staffers do a lot of that work.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>That said, we take quite a bit of freelance for the magazine, including the front-of-book section, the feature well, the culture section and even the health and wellness column. The magazine comes out six times a year, and each issue has five or six features. Because we have a full staff of reporters writing about stuff in the news, the pitch should demonstrate why it\u2019s worth using a freelancer. Sometimes the person has a good perspective, has connections we don\u2019t have or is an expert in some way.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Do you commission international freelance pieces?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We do, but it has to be the right piece and in some way reference discussions we\u2019re having in the U.S. If someone doesn\u2019t have funding from a fellowship, it\u2019s harder to send them abroad. Part of the reality of being a nonprofit shop is that we don\u2019t have a ton of money to send people all over the world.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What are the most common pitching mistakes you see?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We often see stories that are missing a character. Or it\u2019s a really good anecdote or interesting case, but it doesn\u2019t necessarily connect to larger themes or trends. It\u2019s hard to say yes to a pitch that\u2019s just about one bad actor. For something to carry 4,000 words, it needs to have real weight and consequences. Often that means the story needs to be broadened out a bit: Is this part of a larger problem? Are there statistics? How does it go beyond this one anecdote? We also get a lot of pitches that are equally as long or twice as long as the story would be. If you\u2019re pitching a 1,000-word front-of-book piece, you probably shouldn\u2019t write 1,800 words.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>To pitch a feature, you have to do quite a bit of pre-reporting, and that\u2019s a calculation that\u2019s complicated for a freelancer. But it\u2019s a risk for editors to assign stories with a limited freelance budget, so they have to feel confident the reporter can do what he or she is proposing. That\u2019s often based on the pitch: Are they showing the reporting and writing chops to do it? Is the pitch written in the way the story would be? If a pitch feels flat at 1,000 words, what\u2019s the motivation to give someone another 4,000?<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Especially if you\u2019re less experienced, it\u2019s important to explain why you\u2019re the person to do this story. Is it that you have great access? You have a trove of documents? You have special knowledge of the subject? That helps sell the editor on the risk. A reporting plan is also an important part of any pitch: \u201cI\u2019m going to go here and see this, interview these people, FOIA these documents.\u201d Anticipate the questions that the editors are going to ask. That shows maturity and the ability to think through a project.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"alignright size-full is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"740\" height=\"730\" src=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/mother-jones-inside-correct-one-e1550270266926.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-7231\" style=\"width:300px\" srcset=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/mother-jones-inside-correct-one-e1550270266926.jpg 740w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/mother-jones-inside-correct-one-e1550270266926-300x296.jpg 300w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/mother-jones-inside-correct-one-e1550270266926-40x40.jpg 40w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/mother-jones-inside-correct-one-e1550270266926-100x100.jpg 100w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 740px) 100vw, 740px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">A Mother Jones cover. <small>Photo courtesy Mother Jones<\/small><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Walk me through how the pitching process works at MoJo.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>A freelancer can go to our&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/about\/staff\/\">staff page<\/a>, read editors\u2019 bios to learn what they\u2019re interested in and email them directly. When there\u2019s a pitch we\u2019re interested in, we usually go back and forth with the person a couple of times. Then we put all the pitches in a Google Doc and discuss them in a story meeting that happens every six weeks. In each meeting, we have about five to 10 freelance pitches out of 15 to 20 total. Then we go back to the writer and say what we\u2019re thinking: an enthusiastic yes, sorry but no, or we have a lot of questions we want you to answer first.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How much does the magazine pay?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Generally $1.50 to $2 a word. Occasionally less, usually based on the writer\u2019s experience.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What\u2019s your take on simultaneous submissions?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>It\u2019s a bit of a tricky position to put an editor in. If someone told us they were going to submit a pitch to two places, I\u2019d say, \u201cCan you give us a couple of days, and we\u2019ll let you know?\u201d If we\u2019re interested, we might make a decision outside of our normal process. But if the editor getting the pitch isn\u2019t totally sold on it, we\u2019d just let it go because we know we can\u2019t turn things around that quickly. I\u2019d prefer someone to just pitch it to us or pitch it somewhere else if they want and then come back if it\u2019s not accepted.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>How long should writers expect to wait to hear from you? How often are you OK with them following up?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I\u2019m very sympathetic to freelance writers and conscious of their time. I\u2019m pretty good about getting back to people in a couple of days. But sometimes you are just putting out fires all day, and responding to a freelancer does fall lower on the priority list, which is regrettable. I\u2019ve heard Jason Fagone&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.google.com\/search?ei=f-y6WqCVE9DWjwOGpYjgCA&amp;q=jason+fagone+the+pitch&amp;oq=jason+fagone+the+pitch&amp;gs_l=psy-ab.3..33i160k1.2254.5133.0.5261.10.8.0.1.1.0.128.726.3j4.7.0....0...1c.1.64.psy-ab..3.6.476...0j35i39k1j0i22i30k1.0.baj6pKPzS-E\">talk about<\/a>&nbsp;moving on after 48 hours. I don\u2019t begrudge anyone that attitude, as long as you\u2019re upfront with editors at the start. Unfortunately, with the long lead time of a bimonthly magazine, our process is slower. If I get a pitch the day after a story meeting, the next one isn\u2019t for six weeks. I try to update writers right after the meeting. If you want to follow up after two days, great. After five days, fine. Editors need a kick in the ass. We\u2019re adults \u2014 we can handle it.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><em>My questions are in red, his responses in blue.<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>This pitch is extremely long. Did it need to be this extensive? What length generally works best?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I know it\u2019s long, but it was a good pitch and a good story. Is this going to get us lots of 2,000-word pitches? I hope not. In this case, the writer was planning to write a book about the topic and had written a proposal. It\u2019s like the extreme version of the reporting you can do ahead of time. I know Jennifer Kahn has written about the five-paragraph pitch. In general, that\u2019s a great idea, but I would say if the pitch is good, it doesn\u2019t have to be just one page. If you write an 800-word pitch for a feature, we\u2019ll probably ask a ton of questions.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Was the writer a known quantity?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>The editor who assigned this story, Mike Mechanic, had been in touch with him for a while.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Walter Scott\u2019s cell phone bill was current. In that small but not unimportant aspect of life, he was on solid ground. He had checked in with his elderly parents, called and texted friends. Easter was around the corner. He would wear his good suit, match it with a crisply ironed shirt and a colorful tie. Scott, at fifty years old, was a forklift driver, a dominos aficionado, an extrovert with a buttery voice who sang soul music at social gatherings and spirituals on Sunday mornings at his church. He was an Everyman, but a distinctly black Everyman. Every time he made a mistake, he paid a price. As a young man, he served in the Coast Guard before being discharged for a drug-related offense. He had four children from two past relationships. He lost some years to drinking, drifted between jobs, sobered up and earned a two-year degree at a technical college, where he sang America\u2019s national anthem at his commencement ceremony.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>This is more or less verbatim how the published piece begins. When does it work to open with a detailed scene that could be the story lede?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>This has the sensibility of a magazine story right away. It has good cadence and rhythm, and you can tell he\u2019s done his homework. An anecdotal lede works when it helps set the tone and situate you in time and place, when the scene is directly related to a theme of the piece, or when you really need it to establish what the piece is about and be on the same terms about facts. If you are going to write a scene, make sure it\u2019s very tight. If you\u2019re writing a six-paragraph pitch, it shouldn\u2019t take up three.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>On the morning of April 4, 2015, Scott was behind the wheel of a 1990 Mercedes sedan which he had agreed to purchase from a neighbor, though the paperwork was not yet squared away. He was less than a mile from the home he shared with his girlfriend and her two children in North Charleston, South Carolina\u2014his hometown and neighboring Charleston\u2019s poor cousin. Tourists don\u2019t come to\u00a0<em>North\u00a0<\/em>Charleston and most wouldn\u2019t know it even exists. A little farther to the east, out in the water, was Sullivan\u2019s Island, America\u2019s primary slave port, now a vacation paradise dotted with million-dollar homes, where survivors of the Middle Passage were deloused and quarantined before being sold off to their plantation masters.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Why was weaving in this historical note effective?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>It shows that he\u2019s thinking about this piece in a broader way. He\u2019s thinking about what these places mean and how they can be characters in the story to a certain extent. In many pitches, the place just fades away, and there\u2019s no sense that where this happened even matters. But where this happened <em>did<\/em> matter.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>A police patrol car pulled up behind Scott, lights flashing. He made an immediate right turn, then came to a stop in the parking lot of an auto parts store and watched through the rearview mirror as an officer, dressed just in shirt sleeves on a warm spring day, slowly walked toward him. Patrolman Michael Slager, thirty-three years old, had his hands on his hips\u2014the right one close to his gun. \u201cThe reason for the stop is your brake light is out,\u201d he said through the driver\u2019s side window.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>It was the classic DWB (driving while black) rationale for a car stop, but Scott already knew he had a problem bigger than his brake light being out. (If that were even the case.) There was a warrant for his arrest dating back to 2013 for failure to pay child support. He was a cornered man. Paying support, and his failure and at times inability to pay it, had been the burden of his adult life. In 2000, his former wife wrote to a judge, \u201cMy husband bears no responsibility for his family.\u201d\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'><\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>These details signal that the writer didn\u2019t have an agenda. He was going to give us the full story \u2014 both of these guys had faults, and they came together in this tragic moment.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Scott had been to jail in the past for failure to pay support, which caused him to lose jobs and made the sum he owed ever larger and harder to pay. He was $18,104 in arrears. If he went back to jail, his bosses at the warehouse would find a new forklift driver and the job might not be waiting for him when he got out, even if he was behind bars just a day or two. He handed over his license and told the officer he planned to complete the purchase of the car in a couple of days.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cSo you don\u2019t have any paperwork in the glove box? No registration, no insurance?\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cNo sir, I\u2019m sorry about that.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cOk, but you\u2019re buying the car?\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cYes, sir.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cAlright, I\u2019ll be right back with you.\u201d\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Do you like when pitches include dialogue?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Getting that in is smart. It\u2019s a question of doing some homework, and it shows that he has a sense that magazine stories need dialogue and people interacting.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>What happened next was that Walter Scott got out of the car and fled, and Slager ran him down and and Tasered him. When Scott staggered to his feet and ran again, Slager did not give chase, even for one step, even though Scott did not look like a man who could run very fast or for very long. Instead, the officer unholstered his .45-caliber Glock with his right hand, took a stance, and put his left hand underneath to steady the weapon. The form was perfect. It looked like a training video. The only thing wrong was that he was taking aim at the back of an unarmed man.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Slager squeezed off eight quick shots, and Scott fell by the side of a tree. The officer walked 20 unhurried steps until he reached Scott\u2019s motionless body, at which point he arranged Scott\u2019s arms behind his back and handcuffed a dead or dying man.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>The Walter Scott shooting, and the subject of police shootings generally, was covered widely. What made this pitch stand out despite that?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Everything has been done. There\u2019s no such thing as a brand-new story. The level of pre-reporting and the writing in the pitch sold it. A pitch should help the editor say, \u201cThis is what this story could look like in the best-case scenario. This is how he\u2019s going to complicate the story we think we all know.\u201d He had obvious curiosity about the two men involved, had done some of the work and was able to connect it to larger thematic issues.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>*******************<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>How do you feel about section breaks in a pitch?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>It\u2019s pretty unusual, and I wouldn\u2019t necessarily suggest it. But in some ways it\u2019s helpful here: He basically showed us he had the top section of the story figured out and now steps back to give us context and the bigger picture.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I include the details above because they so vividly raise the question: What kind of person hunts downs down another human being in this manner? Pumps multiple bullets into him, casually approaches to inspect the carnage and seems in no hurry to summon medical help? Where did he come from? What made him want to become a cop? How did he get the job and what was his training?\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>I\u2019ve heard one shouldn\u2019t ask questions in pitches but rather provide answers. What do you think?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>It does aggravate editors when pitches end up being a bunch of questions that aren\u2019t answered or can\u2019t be answered. A pitch is not the place for rhetorical questions. If it\u2019s more of a thematic question, what\u2019s the thought process? If it\u2019s a reporting question, answer it or tell us how you\u2019re going to figure it out. He didn\u2019t need to include the questions, but he did answer them.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Each of the contested police shootings of black men by white officers over the last two years is a collision of two lives, two life histories. It is a first and final meeting of two men who would seem to have no other point of intersection. What transpires between them can seem like an accident of fate \u2014 wrong place, wrong time \u2014 or fate itself. Predestined by societal forces and racial currents and confirmed by the inarguable nature of cell phone video.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Like all law enforcement officers, Michael Slager represented the ideals of order and stability, but on a personal level he had spent a considerable portion of his life drifting from place to place trying to find a purpose and somewhere to belong. The community where he became a cop was not one he had any ties to, and he was not the type to leave a footprint. After his move to South Carolina, he started out living in one house \u2014 on a treeless lot in a new subdivision \u2014 then bought a different one in a similar-looking subdivision without his old neighbors knowing where he went. For whatever reason, they seemed to think he had moved for a job on the West Coast. He didn\u2019t coach Little League teams, sing at church or have fraternal hobbies like golf or bowling. If there was any tribe he belonged to, it was martial in nature. Uniforms, guns, authority.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>The writer doesn\u2019t really cite any sources. Are you looking for that?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>It depends on what the story is. There\u2019s no harm in citing sources, and we definitely get pitches where it\u2019s not clear where things are coming from. When you\u2019re talking about data, make clear where it\u2019s coming from so we know it would stand up to our rigorous fact checking. If you\u2019ve interviewed people, make that clear \u2014 that\u2019s showing your pre-reporting.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Slager\u2019s childhood in a comfortable New Jersey town came apart in his teens when a business venture of his father\u2019s failed and his parents divorced. He moved in with his father in Florida, where he received some academic tutoring and his father ended up involved with the tutor \u2014 whom he would soon marry, then divorce. After about a year, Michael Slager moved back in with his mother and two sisters in Mount Laurel, New Jersey. He was shy to the point of withdrawn. He liked helping his mother with chores. He volunteered with a local ambulance service and took courses in first aid and emergency medical care.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Why was it effective to go into Slager\u2019s background?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>It\u2019s one of the things that made this pitch interesting to us. There are a lot of stories that humanize and bring richness of detail to the victim, and few stories that bring that to both the victim and officer. He was very thoughtful about how he did this. He wasn\u2019t glorifying Slager in any way. He did a great job reporting out his history and laying that bare on the page.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>After high school he worked as a waiter, and then, like Walter Scott, enlisted in the Coast Guard, where he served six years without apparent distinction. In fact, it\u2019s possible that he ran afoul of rules, just like Scott. Slager was honorably discharged after six years at the same rank he entered \u2014 a rarity, and an indication either that he never received a promotion or, perhaps, was busted back down to his initial rank of \u201cunrated fireman\u201d after a disciplinary lapse.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>It feels like he\u2019s basically writing a chunk of the story. Does that get annoying to editors with limited time?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>There\u2019s no one answer. It would be annoying if it was aimless and had no real polish. Getting a long pitch that\u2019s not well-reported and well-crafted is annoying. This didn\u2019t feel like that at all; it felt like a preview to a story.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>**********************<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We have had an extended season of highly questionable (at best) and highly publicized killings of black men by police. I\u2019m not setting out to write a story that lectures on how awful this is. We already know that. One hundred and fifty years since the end of the Civil War, and nearly eight years since the election of the nation\u2019s first black president, America breeds white grievance and aggression at the same rate, or perhaps a greater rate, than it creates opportunity for those left behind or newly arrived. This is part of the larger story I want to tell, but I\u2019ll find my way there through immersive reporting into the slaying of Walter Scott and a full exploration of all that his life and death connects to.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'><\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Here\u2019s where he\u2019s predicting the editor\u2019s question: Why now? Why is this a good case to focus on? It\u2019s not only about what\u2019s going on in the world at the time, but also that there\u2019s a case coming up and it\u2019s an obvious place for him to go report.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I want to tell the story of this police shooting, and to an extent, all of them, by examining the lives of the two men involved. Walter Scott had some obvious strengths, most notably, a deep humanity that caused his loved ones to forgive or at least abide his many weaknesses and failings. Michael Slager is not a victim, and I would never portray him as such, but he is someone who demands our understanding. He is a distinct product of America: disconnected, a loner, a military vet, an armed white man empowered to patrol unfamiliar black streets. A third character is the man who captured the shooting on his cell phone: Feidin Santana, a barber and an immigrant from the Dominican Republic, where he developed both a healthy fear and a distrust of authority. He saw the confrontation unfolding on a scrubby expanse of open ground and was afraid at first to document it, but would later come to believe that God put him there for a reason\u2014to serve as a witness, a stand-in for us all.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Slager was quickly disavowed by his own police union, another rarity. He is being represented by a renowned Charleston lawyer, one who also represents some of the families whose kin were murdered at the Emanuel African Methodist Church three months after Scott was gunned down. The two trials \u2014 Slager\u2019s and that of church shooter Dylann Roof \u2014 may overlap in Charleston, in late October.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Here is how I propose to do this story. I would attend the trial. I know it will be covered by the national media, but not\u00a0<em>mined\u00a0<\/em>for material in the way I would go about it. I want to do a deep dive into Slager\u2019s persona and past, through whatever comes out in trial (and if he is convicted, through his pre-sentencing reports) as well as through interviews with his friends and family. I\u2019d have to spend time in Charleston as well as in New Jersey, and possibly Florida, where Slager\u2019s father lives.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>He didn\u2019t seem to have access beyond other reporters covering the trial. What made you confident he\u2019d do something original?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>He\u2019s very specific about, \u201cHere\u2019s how I propose to do this story.\u201d He lays out a plan, which is really smart. He\u2019s anticipating what we would ask.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Some of what I hope to discover is part of the missing piece of these police shootings: They offer relatively unskilled and uneducated men \u2014 the Charleston force required a high school diploma or GED \u2014 steady wages along with decent benefits and pensions. Who becomes a cop in the Fergusons and North Charlestons of America? If they are white, and they usually are, what are they bringing to the job? What disappointments, what resentments, what fears, what human qualities that might possibly equip them to effectively and humanely carry out their duties?\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'><\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>This was something different and smart about his approach. He gets at the fact that these people are not highly educated or compensated, and that these jobs are difficult, unpleasant and often dangerous.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>This story requires deep reporting as well as a high degree of thinking and writing. I\u2019d be eager to take it on.\u00a0<span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Was this self-assured phrasing effective or off-putting?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I feel like that\u2019s a line that works maybe when you\u2019re more experienced and have a rapport with the editor. Depending on who you are, it might sound weird. A lot of writers who pitch me are definitely far less experienced and don\u2019t write cover stories for The New York Times Magazine all the time. There are lots of different ways to connect with an editor. Persistence is one way. Great writing is another way. Great reporting and scene-setting is another way. Editors want to work with great writers who think differently than them and are skilled reporters and craftspeople. 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