{"id":1968,"date":"2020-02-25T21:24:55","date_gmt":"2020-02-25T21:24:55","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2020\/02\/25\/when-the-personal-narrative-can-make-the-difference-between-prison-and-release\/"},"modified":"2024-12-17T18:40:05","modified_gmt":"2024-12-17T18:40:05","slug":"when-the-personal-narrative-can-make-the-difference-between-prison-and-release","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2020\/02\/25\/when-the-personal-narrative-can-make-the-difference-between-prison-and-release\/","title":{"rendered":"How the personal narrative can make the difference between prison and release"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p class=\"has-drop-cap\">When Dashka Slater looked at California\u2019s parole system, she saw more than a sprawling bureaucracy; she saw a place where people struggled toward redemption. When she followed those seeking parole, the journalist and author found more than crimes and court hearings; she discovered a story about the power \u2014 and limits \u2014 of storytelling.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>The result was her story, published Jan. 1, 2020, in The New York Times Magazine,&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.nytimes.com\/2020\/01\/01\/magazine\/prison-parole-california.html?smid=fb-nytimes&amp;smtyp=cur&amp;fbclid=IwAR2NkHJ2tIfOfyXbmZehaK24Tk3cSoKH40kMqAC5uLZ8gBXc4aDWzJ_qMBo&amp;fbclid=IwAR0-T81iNX5jWdhJb00Me7v3gAl5AEmSVaje7kjWFF6zhf49ssNcuANofqI\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u201cCan You Talk Your Way Out of a Life Sentence?\u201d<\/a><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>At its heart the story is about storytelling \u2014 which stories are heard and which aren\u2019t, which are rewarded with freedom and which lead back to a cell and an unaltered sentence.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"alignright size-full\" id=\"attachment_154578\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"183\" height=\"183\" src=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661.jpg\" alt=\"Dashka Slater\" class=\"wp-image-8179\" srcset=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661.jpg 183w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661-150x150.jpg 150w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661-40x40.jpg 40w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661-100x100.jpg 100w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661-180x180.jpg 180w, https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-1-10-e1734460677661-115x115.jpg 115w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 183px) 100vw, 183px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">Dashka Slater<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.dashkaslater.com\/about-contact\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Slater<\/a>&nbsp;is no newcomer to reporting on the criminal-justice system. She was a reporter for the weekly East Bay Express when Oakland had one of the highest murder rates in the nation; reported for Mother Jones, including a story on a&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/crime-justice\/2017\/07\/north-dakota-norway-prisons-experiment\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">dramatically different approach to incarceration<\/a>; and wrote a nonfiction book,&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/us.macmillan.com\/books\/9780374303235\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u201cThe 57 Bus,\u201d<\/a>&nbsp;that takes a nuanced look at a high-profile crime.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>For the story on California\u2019s parole system, Slater follows two prisoners, James Morgan and Johnny Smith. One earns parole, and one doesn\u2019t. Storytelling plays a role in how both their hearings turn out.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-pullquote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"wp-block-pullquote\"><blockquote><p>&#8230;one of the great gifts of a career spent listening to people\u2019s stories is the optimism it bestows.<\/p><\/blockquote><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Like most reporting on the criminal justice system, Slater\u2019s story required patience. She could only conduct phone interviews with incarcerated sources in 15-minute chunks, and one in-person interview was delayed by a lockdown at San Quentin. When she wasn\u2019t reporting directly, she was combing through the history of the legal system, eagerly searching out primary sources.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>This interview with Slater has been edited for length and clarity.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-heading   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Behind the scenes of a story behind bars<\/h2>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>You&#8217;ve written before about criminal justice issues, such as your piece for Mother Jones on an&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.motherjones.com\/crime-justice\/2017\/07\/north-dakota-norway-prisons-experiment\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">experimental prison program in North Dakota<\/a>. How did the idea for this particular story come about?<br><\/strong>I was expressly&nbsp;<em>not&nbsp;<\/em>looking for a story at the time. My book&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/us.macmillan.com\/books\/9780374303235\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u201cThe 57 Bus,\u201d<\/a>&nbsp;which is about two teenagers on either side of a high profile crime, includes a short section on restorative justice, which is an alternative framework for responding to crime that is less about punishment and more about healing. A woman I swim with at my neighborhood pool had read the book and invited me to attend the first meeting of a restorative justice circle, now called the Citizen\u2019s Circle, that would include both formerly incarcerated and never incarcerated people. I was already getting a lot of questions at my public appearances about restorative justice, and my plan was to attend this group once or twice, gain some additional insight into the restorative justice process that would allow me to speak more knowledgeably on the subject, and move on.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Instead what happened was that I met a number of former lifers who had just been released after serving decades in prison, and they were remarkable people who had been through personal transformations that most Americans don\u2019t believe possible for people who have committed violent crimes. As I listened to their stories, I found that many kept returning to this pivotal moment when they\u2019d been \u201cfound suitable\u201d for parole. I began to feel that for many former lifers, the parole hearing was the final ordeal in a kind of heroic journey toward redemption. What writer could resist?<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Please describe the overall reporting and writing process.<\/strong><strong><br><\/strong>I still attend the Citizen\u2019s Circle on a weekly basis. In that circle, I\u2019m a citizen, not a reporter. Because of my personal relationships within the group, and my expressly non-professional role in it, I did not want to write about anyone who I knew in that context. I also knew that I wanted to follow someone who was still incarcerated as they went through their parole hearing, so I started scanning the lists of upcoming hearings. In looking for people to follow, my criteria was ordinariness \u2014 I didn\u2019t want someone whose story might typically attract attention from the media, which ruled out cop-killers or leaders of gangs, or people who proclaimed their innocence. I wanted people whose stories were more typical of the nearly 40,000 inmates serving life sentences in California.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-pullquote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"wp-block-pullquote\"><blockquote><p>In looking for people to follow, my criteria was ordinariness&#8230;<\/p><\/blockquote><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I attended both Morgan and Smith\u2019s hearings and also had many phone calls with them, calls that occurred in 15 minute segments because that\u2019s how long you can use the phone in prison. And there were interviews with as many people as I could find who were involved in the parole process in different ways and in different places, plus a ridiculous amount of reading of old court cases and law review articles and various kinds of studies to get a sense of how the thinking about parole had changed over time and what it looked like across the country.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>By the time I was ready to write, I had two fat binders worth of interviews and documents and I was immediately confronted with the problem of all magazine writers \u2014 way too much good material. Plus, there was the problem of needing to educate readers on a lot of fairly arcane legal and policy stuff if they were going to be able to follow the story. Sometimes writing is fun, but I moaned and complained throughout every draft of this piece.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>I was struck by the emphasis on storytelling \u2014 the idea that prisoners must craft a compelling and specific type of narrative to win parole. Was this idea present from the beginning, or did it emerge during reporting?<\/strong><strong><br><\/strong>My interest in the storytelling piece was there from the beginning. But my awareness of what a double-edged sword it is began to grow as I was reporting. I was very attracted to the idea that we can tame our pasts and shape our future through the act of telling stories, and by the notion that the parole board was something like a State Board of Storytelling, with commissioners who were giving inmates editorial feedback on their narratives in real time. In the Citizen\u2019s Circle, I could see how the telling of personal stories was part of the healing process. At the same time, I was aware that by definition, I was only seeing the people for whom this process worked; if it&nbsp;<em>didn<\/em>\u2019<em>t<\/em>&nbsp;work for them, they would still be in prison.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-pullquote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"wp-block-pullquote\"><blockquote><p>I was very attracted to the idea that we can tame our pasts and shape our future through the act of telling stories, and by the notion that the parole board was something like a State Board of Storytelling&#8230;<\/p><\/blockquote><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>You contrast two potential parolees in James Morgan and Johnny Smith \u2014 one who earns parole, one who doesn&#8217;t. What do you think the story gains from delving into both men&#8217;s experience?<\/strong><strong><br><\/strong>I didn\u2019t set out to find two contrasting examples. My plan was to follow two people and write about one of them \u2014 which would certainly have been more straightforward than what I did. But after attending their two hearings back-to-back, I was struck by the ways Morgan and Smith were similar \u2014 both had been low level gang-members involved in revenge shootings \u2014 and the ways they were different. Morgan is very psychological by nature \u2014 the language of emotions is mother\u2019s milk to him and he has an innate drive to understand his past and make sense of it. Smith is far more interested in the concrete and the tangible \u2014&nbsp;<em>what<\/em>&nbsp;happened, rather than&nbsp;<em>why<\/em>&nbsp;it happened. And yet both seemed to me to be \u201creformed\u201d in the sense that neither was likely to go back to their old lives or habits. For me the contrast between their stories let me zero in on the ways in which the emphasis on insight and narrative is and isn\u2019t useful as a rubric for determining whether an inmate is suitable for release.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>You present quite a bit of history, both on the idea of penal rehabilitation and the specific history of sentencing in California. How did you research those sections of the story?<br><\/strong>I started my reporting career in Oakland, Calif., in 1990 and spent 10 years reporting there when it had the highest per capita murder rate in the nation. So some of the history I recounted was history that I watched unfold \u2014 an epidemic of urban violence and a tough-on-crime response that led to an incarceration explosion. That\u2019s one of the things that fascinated me about writing the piece \u2014 it was like seeing the end of a movie I\u2019d started watching 30 years before.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Having spent three decades writing about criminal justice, I knew the broad outlines of sentencing history, but I had to go back and read a lot of law and policy to really understand the specifics. I am a big fan of primary source materials so I\u2019m always looking for things that were written at the time that major policy changes took place, that capture how people were thinking when they were in the middle of it, before they knew how the story was going to end. So while I read criminal justice history and interviewed people who could talk about the history of parole, I felt most excited when I discovered that 1981 law review article that laid out the argument for why rehabilitation shouldn\u2019t be the goal of California prisons.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>I love the ending, especially the last line, because it returns to the idea of stories. Was it always your intended ending, or did it change during writing or editing?<br><\/strong>My first draft ended with an image of Morgan walking around San Francisco a couple days after his release \u2014 a kind of Rip Van Winkle moment as he reentered the present tense after his decades in suspended animation. But that ending didn\u2019t feel right to me; it felt too pat, too much of a predictable \u201chappy ending.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>First drafts for me are all about getting the basics down on paper \u2014 facts, characters, events. The finer shadings come later and so I spent a couple of drafts trying to bring the nuances to the surface, tease out the contradictions. When I wrote that last line, I knew it was the right one immediately because it captured the slipperiness of the task of making sense of an interrupted life and the ambivalence that I felt myself about how to tell the story of parole.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>&nbsp;What was the biggest challenge in working on the story?<br><\/strong>Any time you\u2019re working with the correctional system, there are a lot of built-in challenges around communication. At one point early in the reporting process, I left my phone in a Lyft and couldn\u2019t get it back until the next day. I had a full-scale anxiety attack that night because I was just starting to get to know Morgan and Smith and they were both supposed to call me at an appointed time the next morning. If I missed their calls, there was no easy way for me to explain why I wasn\u2019t answering or to set another time for them to call. (Luckily, I managed to get my phone back before the appointed hour.) Similarly, visiting someone in prison is far more difficult than it should be. There were a couple months when San Quentin was on lockdown and so I couldn\u2019t visit Smith. Then the lockdown was lifted but when I drove out to see him I discovered he\u2019d been transferred to another prison.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-pullquote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"wp-block-pullquote\"><blockquote><p>It\u2019s a long story, with two different protagonists, and it took a while to find a structure that allowed me to jump between the two of them and the historical and policy segments without feeling choppy or losing the sense of forward motion.<\/p><\/blockquote><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>But aside from these logistical issues, the biggest challenge was figuring out how to tell a story that required so much explanation of law and policy without losing the narrative energy and emotional engagement that had first drawn me to the topic and that I knew would keep a reader turning pages. It\u2019s a long story, with two different protagonists, and it took a while to find a structure that allowed me to jump between the two of them and the historical and policy segments without feeling choppy or losing the sense of forward motion.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Is there anything you learned about writing or reporting you think would be helpful for other journalists?<br><\/strong>Articles about bureaucratic processes, about the way policies are administered, are often a hard sell; they don\u2019t sound sexy in a pitch letter. But the complexity of any issue emerges at the point when you start implementing the law or policy that seemed so clear-cut during the legislative debate. Locking people up seems simple enough; figuring out how to let them out is a lot more complicated. I think there\u2019s a lot of good reporting to be done in these less-visited bureaucratic realms, and a lot of compelling stories to be told.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What kind of response have you received?<br><\/strong>Most of the responses that have come directly to me are from people who are involved in the criminal justice system or work in criminal justice policy \u2014 the people who know this world already. In the online comments, of course, there was a lot of skepticism that \u201ccriminals\u201d can undergo genuine change and a certainty that any incarcerated person who appears sympathetic is actually a manipulative psychopath. This line of thinking runs so deep in American culture that I find it unsurprising but incredibly sad. It reflects such a deep cynicism about human beings as a species. 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