{"id":1976,"date":"2020-03-24T17:06:33","date_gmt":"2020-03-24T17:06:33","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2020\/03\/24\/writing-the-character-contradictions-and-soul-of-a-place\/"},"modified":"2025-01-08T19:48:16","modified_gmt":"2025-01-08T19:48:16","slug":"writing-the-character-contradictions-and-soul-of-a-place","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2020\/03\/24\/writing-the-character-contradictions-and-soul-of-a-place\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing the character, contradictions and soul of a place"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p class=\"has-drop-cap\">America\u2019s quadrennial obsession with Iowa has passed like the season\u2019s last snow storm, there for a turbulent moment but forgotten three days later. The nail-biting over bad election apps and inadequate phone banks and questions of a weird caucus process have migrated to other states, other primaries. And now all that has been clouded over by our latest obsession: coronavirus.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>What remains?<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Washington Post reporter&nbsp;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.mrdanzak.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Dan Zak<\/a>&nbsp;went to find Iowa before its citizens met on Feb. 3 for the first in the nation popularity poll for presidential candidates. His task: find the soul of a state, or at least define its character.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>What he found was a place that\u2019s much like many of us: full of deep pride and confusion about its past, present and future, about whether it deserves its moment in the sunshine, about what it means to be an Iowan and what being an Iowan means to the rest of us.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>In&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.washingtonpost.com\/lifestyle\/2020\/01\/30\/iowa-is-myth-should-we-believe-it\/?arc404=true\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">&#8220;Why Iowa?,&#8221;<\/a>&nbsp;published Jan. 30, 2020, Zak found a story with a long tail. It\u2019s as good a read now as it was in February. It&#8217;s a valuable study for anyone writing about place, history and culture; politics is, in this case, the convenient excuse but far from the end game.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>It\u2019s hard to write a story when the main character is 3 million people scattered over 56,000 square miles. Zak traveled 800 of those miles in five days, and found people in towns with names most people outside the state never heard of. (That is, except for the throngs who make it to the pedaling mecca, the Des Moines&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/ragbrai.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Register\u2019s Annual Great Bicycle Ride Across Iowa, or RAGBRAI<\/a>. If the 2020 version goes forward this July, be sure to say hi as you zip past me.) This is not his Zak&#8217;s first rodeo. He has done news and features across the globe, including some outstanding writing about place. Consider this lead from his 2015 story about&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.washingtonpost.com\/sf\/national\/2015\/11\/27\/a-ground-zero-forgotten\/?utm_term=.158009a3504c\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">the Marshall Islands, which was the site of extended nuclear-weapons testing in the years after World War II<\/a>:&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>It\u2019s March 2 at an event marking Nuclear Victims Remembrance Day, and the boy in the shallows is now the foreign minister of the Marshall Islands, which has entered the 21st century as part trust-fund baby, part welfare state. Its elders have endured burns that reached to the bone, forced relocation, nightmarish birth defects, cancers in the short and long term. Its young people have inherited a world unmade, remade and then virtually forgotten by Washington, D.C.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Nothing so dramatic in Iowa. But the job is the same. Find story where fly-in, fly-by, fly-over reports lie scattered like corn stalks after the fall harvest. I\u2019m a Midwesterner by birth (Illinois) and residence (Missouri). I have two siblings who live in Iowa, both who reported in from their caucuses on election night. I entered to Zak&#8217;s story braced for the expected scenes of farmers with GEDs drinking coffee in the local Casey\u2019s (where you can get gas and surprisingly good pizza), griping about Trump haters. Zak sees those, and gives them a twist, like the java-drinking resident with an opinion \u2014 and a PhD from Yale.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Some of the things I like about Zak\u2019s work. It:&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-list mb-4 list max-w-screen-full mx-auto pl-5 \">\n            \n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>It meets myth and fact and weaves a story around both. Ambivalence is one of the most common and powerful places where we find great characters, and Zak shows it in his journey across the state.\u00a0<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>It leaves what\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Donald-K.-Fry\/e\/B001KHT7NI%3Fref=dbs_a_mng_rwt_scns_share\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">writing coach Donald K. Fry<\/a>\u00a0has called \u201cgold coins along the path.\u201d That is, little pieces throughout a story that compel the reader forward, whether it be a quip, a quote, a piece of dialogue or a kind of \u201cwell, I didn\u2019t know that\u201d factoid. \u201cIowa poisons the well.\u201d Gold coin. \u201cIowa loves to feel, to talk, to listen, to prod.\u201d Gold coin.\u00a0<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>His characters are round, not flat, as the\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.chicagotribune.com\/news\/obituaries\/ct-jack-fuller-dead-20160621-story.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">late editor Jack Fuller<\/a>\u00a0called them. Put more simply, these are\u00a0<em>people<\/em>\u00a0in his story, not props.\u00a0Emilia Marroqu\u00edn\u00a0is not one-dimensional, but an immigrant, a college graduate, a community leader, a mom.\u00a0<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>There\u2019s is so much in Zak&#8217;s Iowa story to like and learn from that I reached out to talk to him. He answered my questions and then, together, we annotated &#8220;Why Iowa.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"alignright\" id=\"attachment_155043\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/app\/uploads\/2024\/03\/download-25.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-155043\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">Dan Zak<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>The Post has a lot of political reporters. And in a presidential year, the Iowa caucuses can become something of a cliche. So why you, and why Iowa?<br><\/strong>Well, I\u2019m not a political reporter. I report on politics routinely, but as an outsider, a non-expert, a bumbler. I put a note on my calendar, a year before the caucuses, to remind myself to write about Iowa: not just its place in our process of picking a president, but its place in the personality of the country. My intrigue and bewilderment were long-standing, and almost adversarial.&nbsp;<em>Why do we let these people make this decision?<\/em>&nbsp;I find myself writing a lot of ambient landscapes and meandering scene pieces. I thought: Let\u2019s apply that form to an entire state at a moment when America was redirecting its superficial attention to it.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What did you bring to this story from your own background? Are you an Iowan?<br><\/strong>Before spending five days there for reporting, I had never set foot in Iowa. The audacity!<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>What did you have in mind before you set foot in the state? What were you looking for?<br><\/strong>In 1988 the Post\u2019s&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.pulitzer.org\/winners\/henry-allen\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Henry Allen&nbsp;<\/a>wrote a piece&nbsp;that began with the sentence&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.washingtonpost.com\/lifestyle\/style\/new-hampshire-is-a-fraud\/2016\/02\/05\/6960855e-cc21-11e5-a7b2-5a2f824b02c9_story.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u201cNew Hampshire is a fraud.\u201d<\/a>&nbsp;He proceeded to filet the state \u2014 on the cusp of its primary \u2014 for its smug, shabby grip on our political consciousness. He did it with reporting and he did it with voice. I thought we could do something similar with Iowa. But early in my pre-reporting, on the phone, I realized this would&nbsp;<em>not&nbsp;<\/em>be an adversarial takedown. It would be, in aggregate, a kind of love letter, written by the people I interviewed but conveyed through my voice. That said, I try not to look for specific things when doing a story like this. I have general avenues of inquiry; I\u2019m not trying to fill out a Mad Libs.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Who was your intended audience?<br><\/strong>The average reader, I guess? I don\u2019t really envision an audience when I report or write. I just envision myself having to explain to a subject, or a boss, how I got something wrong.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>The main character in this story is the state. What challenges and opportunities did that present?<br><\/strong>A state is not a monolith. Iowa has physical borders and properties, but it can\u2019t be fully represented in a piece of any length. In any type of story, with any type of subject, you\u2019re going to leave something out, or gloss over something, or offer a characterization that will offend (and readers will let you know). The biggest challenge was balancing fair generalization with tactile specifics, and giving short shrift to people and elements that could\u2019ve been a story unto themselves. For example, the Rosmann family and Emilia Marroqu\u00edn could each be the subject of an entire story, or book. I spent an entire afternoon with the Rosmanns, talking in depth, and I could only give them three glib paragraphs. That makes me sad.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>There are lots of towns named (as well as people in them). How did you go about&nbsp; finding the range? Were these all places you visited, or could you do some of this in other ways?<br><\/strong>I drove about 800 miles over five days in January \u2014 with a nonfunctioning windshield washer, mind you \u2014 from Muscatine in the east, to Harlan in the west, to Storm Lake in the northwest, and parts betwixt. I couldn\u2019t get to places like Lamoni or Ottumwa in the southern tier, or Mason City or Dubuque in the northeast. Some of the people in the story (like Art Cullen and Rachel Paine Caufield) I talked to on the phone in advance of the trip. Most of the others I encountered in person, either by happenstance or by arrangement. When I could, I got into someone\u2019s car and they took me around. Darcy Maulsby toured me through the Lake City region, and brought me into the home of a hog farmer for an hour-long chat that I wish ended up in the piece. Rob X. Barron, a school-board member in Des Moines, talked to me on the phone beforehand and then drove me around the capital city for two hours, pointing out everything that\u2019s changed and not changed \u2014 and I didn\u2019t even mention him in the piece. In some cases, one person led me to another; Barron directed me to Emilia Marroqu\u00edn in Storm Lake, for example. In others, I found them by accident; I happened upon the Rosmann family because I was trying to reach the patriarch\u2019s brother, a psychologist who wasn\u2019t readily available to talk, and called the family store.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>Much of the story is about the&nbsp;<em>what&nbsp;<\/em>of Iowa \u2014 the people, places and contradictions \u2014 in an attempt to get at the why of the caucuses. Did you think you found the answer?<br><\/strong>No. Yes? I don\u2019t know. I don\u2019t think these types of stories provide answers. I think, when successful, they provide feelings.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p><strong>The annotation:<\/strong><em>Storyboard\u2019s questions are in red; responses from Zak in blue.<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-image mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<figure class=\"aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/nieman-assets.s3.us-east-1.amazonaws.com\/niemanstaging\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/03\/AP_20035573677404-scaled-e1585067991275.jpg\" alt=\"Iowa has long been the site of the first primary votes in presidential election years.\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">A downtown skywalk, in Des Moines, Iowa, as the primary caucuses approached in early February 2020.&nbsp;AP Photo \/ Charlie Neibergall<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-html mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<h2>Why Iowa?<\/h2>\n\n<h3>It gets to go first. We can only watch. And wonder what it means for the rest of us.<\/h3>\n\nBy\u00a0Dan Zak\n<br \/><br>\nJANUARY 30, 2020<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIowa is a fairy tale. Somewhere between the crumbling bridges, the meth clinics, the jackknifed tractor trailers, the zombie combines steered by satellite, the putrid purgatories for dinner-bound hogs \u2014 somewhere among the wannabe novelists and suicidal farmers and drooling cage fighters sponsored by bargain hotel chains, down rutted byways to giant wind turbines, alongside ditches oozing with nitrates and Busch Light \u2014 is a loose menagerie of utopia, where Americans are pleasant, responsible and cooperative, where they pass down their civic duty like a trust fund, where they still have one hand in the fallowing topsoil, the other locked in fellowship with their neighbor, and their eyes on the future of the republic. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Wow. An incredible 109-word sentence. It feels like the opera tenor who holds a note longer than a pearl diver holds his breath. What inspired you? <\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Henry Allen\u2019s piece on New Hampshire. His second sentence has 125 words. But this is a gimmick I use now and then: contrast short with long, try to draw in a reader with a cascade of description that pivots at a certain point. Here you think you\u2019re reading a takedown, but then wait a second \u2014 maybe you\u2019re not.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0This frontage road of a state, this frozen slab of soybean fields and carpenter gothic, has threshed the Democratic presidential candidates for a year now, and it will make the first winnowing of the field Monday, when about 0.1 percent of the country\u2019s registered voters \u2014 after being harassed by campaigns and spoiled with millions of dollars \u2014 could set the course for the rest of our lives.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nSome people, as usual, aren\u2019t happy about it. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>A real understatement to what follows. Was that your intent?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>It was. The vitriol against Iowa, even before the caucus-night debacle, was intense. I thought underplaying the lead-in would be amusing for the informed reader.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nIowa is small, they say. Iowa is white. Iowa is moving backward, or moving forward too slowly. Iowa is just a heartland fetish. Iowa votes for Steve King, the anti-immigrant congressman who\u2019s badmouthed his way to obsolescence. Iowa is what America was, not what America is becoming. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Terrific use of a repeated passive verb. It adds to  a sense of a place with no movement.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>The repetition of the <i>subject <\/i>was more intentional. Sometimes when I write moodily about broad subjects, I repeat them as an incantation. Like it will get me in a meditative state. I know that sounds ridiculous. I\u2019m going to stop doing it.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cIowa poisons the well,\u201d wrote journalist Drew Magary this month, \u201cand it\u2019s in the midst of doing so once again, at a time when Americans can least afford to have an election that orbits around its phony agrarian horses&#8212;.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nFormer Cabinet secretary Juli\u00e1n Castro put it more diplomatically <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Why did you add the qualifier?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I think as a button to the earlier understatement.<\/span><\/span><b>\u00a0<\/b>in November: \u201cIt\u2019s time that our presidential nominating process reflects our nation\u2019s and our party\u2019s diversity.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nBernie Sanders is polling well here, but two young climate activists who came to rally with him in Iowa City know that something is amiss.\u00a0<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cWe don\u2019t believe that Iowa is necessarily representative of the entire country,\u201d said Bridget Williams, 22, of Cedar Rapids. The arcane and time-consuming caucus process, she said, discourages participation from people who work multiple jobs, who can\u2019t afford child care, who aren\u2019t fluent in the procedure.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nCampaigns in Iowa focus \u201cmore on getting people who have already been involved to stay involved,\u201d added Dorothy Hogg, 22, rather than \u201cbringing in new voices and perspectives that are representative of the country.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThen again, what state \u2014 what process \u2014 truly represents the country? We are a nation of 327 million people who rely on 538 electors to select a president, after an epic primary process that stumbles through all 50 states (plus the District of Columbia). This goat rope has to start somewhere. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Some Midwesterners might think you were referring to a rodeo event. Why the &ldquo;goat rope?&rdquo;<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I just like the term. I wish it served a higher purpose here.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0Should it start with Louisiana or New Jersey, which more accurately reflect the race and ethnicity of the country? If we go by median household income, we\u2019d start with Rhode Island. Maybe the first position should belong to the bellwether state of Missouri, whose electoral votes have aligned with all but three presidential contests since 1904.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nBut, no. Iowa, home to 1 percent of the U.S. population, goes first. It\u2019s the law. (State law, but still.) It\u2019s been this way for nearly 50 years. Over that time, the United States has changed. Iowa has changed. But the latter still guides the former.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nWhat story is Iowa trying to tell us this time around, and should we believe it? <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>You\u2019ve used this question as a nut graf. It also serves as a suspenseful transition to the next section. Did you get here with the first draft, or did it evolve?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I don\u2019t remember! I\u2019m sure this wasn\u2019t my original kicker. But I wanted to set up the suspicion that Iowa was selling us something that was either untrue or misunderstood, and then spend the rest of the piece showing what was true and understandable.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/><br>\n\u201cThere\u2019s a bad funk in Iowa.\u201d <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>You may now enter the quote-gathering Hall of Fame.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Credit to Art Cullen. All I had to do was listen. If you want to read better journalism on Iowa, get his book \u201cStorm Lake.\u201d Beautiful, heartfelt, mournful, true.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nArt Cullen loves his state. Laments it, too.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cWe\u2019re just whipsawing back and forth, and I think we\u2019re going to whipsaw back. I think that Trump will not win Iowa .\u2009.\u2009. because people are really unhappy here.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nExtreme rainfalls are drowning crop yields. Trade wars have spooked one of Iowa\u2019s top pork customers. (That would be China.) The Trump administration has been <a href=\"https:\/\/www.washingtonpost.com\/business\/economy\/farm-state-fury-creates-pressure-for-trump-as-trade-ethanol-pain-collide\/2019\/10\/01\/74a94d4a-df16-11e9-b199-f638bf2c340f_story.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">fooling around with ethanol policy<\/a>, and Iowans see Big Oil beating Iowa corn. For generations, Iowans have been decamping to cities, or fleeing the state entirely. And 48 years of quadrennial obsession from the national media has corrupted local politics, too, according to Cullen, editor of the Storm Lake Times in the northwest corner of the state.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cIt would be better for Iowa if we weren\u2019t first, because we\u2019re 35th in everything else, except literacy,\u201d he says. \u201cIt would be good for Iowa, but it would be bad for the country. Because I do think that these are pretty pragmatic, moderate people.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nPragmatism shaped Iowa\u2019s early geography: Frontiersmen formed small towns spaced six to 10 miles apart, in square counties, to accommodate the needs of farmers, the stamina of horses, the pit stops of locomotives. From this blueprint grew a very localized government, including the caucuses, which began when Iowa attained statehood in 1846. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Two nouns \u2014 pragmatism at the beginning and statehood at the end \u2014 anchor this graf. Terrific.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'><\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nIowa\u2019s firstness? Pragmatism again. The state accommodates the needs of all those practical little towns with a multilevel delegate selection process: a thousand-plus precincts hold caucuses to furnish delegates to 99 county conventions, and on up the chain, to the district, state and national conventions. Back in 1972, this took forever; Iowa had to fire up the mimeograph machines in January to show up on time to the Democratic National Convention that July.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cIt wasn\u2019t that we were trying to be first \u2014 it just took us this long to get the paperwork done,\u201d says Tom Morain, former administrator of the State Historical Society of Iowa. \u201cThen the national press descended upon us. Jimmy Carter got a bump out of Iowa in 1976, and from then on, everyone wanted to do well in Iowa. It wasn\u2019t \u2018we ought to be first because we have superior knowledge.\u2019 We were descended upon by you journalist people looking for a story.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOh, but Iowa <i>loves<\/i> the attention. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>You challenged the last quote with this sentence. Why?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Because my reporting necessitated some pushback. Many Iowans told me they love the privilege, they enjoy the process, they take it seriously and are glad to have the spotlight on their issues, concerns and questions. And I did want to be a <i>little <\/i>adversarial, when called for.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0How else could a state with shrinking relevance \u2014 Iowa has fewer than half the electoral votes it did in 1928 \u2014 garner so much focus and flattery?<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cYou only need about 40,000 Iowans to change the future of this country,\u201d candidate Andrew Yang said in Des Moines in September, adding: \u201cI did the math: Do you know how many Californians each Iowan is worth? One thousand.\u201d When asked for that math, the Yang campaign said there was none, and that the candidate was just making a point. But anyway: \u201cThat is the magic of this state,\u201d Yang continued. \u201cThis is the only place where democracy actually works.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nTell that to Iowa\u2019s teachers (whose wages have stagnated) or Iowa\u2019s rural commuters (whose bridges are structurally deficient) or Iowa\u2019s growing Latino population (whose demographic has zero representation in the state legislature). There\u2019s mythical Iowa, picturesque cradle of electoral politics, and then there is real Iowa. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Perhaps the first explicit explanation of the contradiction. Why now?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Because we\u2019re nearly halfway through the piece, and it\u2019s time to start drilling past the bedrock of politicians\u2019 encomia and Iowa\u2019s own mythology.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0Over the past 50 years, farms have evaporated, town squares have emptied, even fencing has disappeared as livestock has been separated from the land.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cA factory leaves, a church closes, school districts consolidate,\u201d says Rachel Paine Caufield, professor of political science at Drake University in Des Moines. \u201cAnd when you start losing gathering areas, people feel disconnected from each other, and therefore disconnected from institutions of government.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nExcept on Monday, when democratic magic will appear for real in gathering areas across the state \u2014 in school gyms, town halls, churches. Iowans will physically divide themselves by preferred candidate. If their candidate fails to attain 15 percent support in the room, they can realign with another candidate. That means talking to each other about what is needed, what should be worried about, which of these outsiders can be trusted. Here, voting is not a solitary task performed in a curtained booth. It is an enterprise of togetherness, a bridge between the phantom idea of democracy and an actual roomful of people, way outside of Washington, trying to plot a way forward for everyone. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>You zoom to the top of the ladder of abstraction here.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Put that on my tombstone. But it should be noted: This sentence was a collaboration between me and my brilliant editor, Steve Kolowich.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cThere are very few venues left in American life where people come together and collectively make decisions,\u201d Caufield says. \u201cI think the rest of the country thinks of it as a quaint mythology of Iowa, but it\u2019s real.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/><br>\nIowa, like America, is a land of myths. It is the bridges of Madison County. It is the reason Jimmy Carter and Barack Obama became president. It is where Donna Reed and John Wayne were born, where a future Starfleet captain named James T. Kirk will be raised, in the year 2228, six weeks after the Iowa caucuses (if we still have them in the 23rd century). <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Stardate Kirk. Love it.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'><\/span><\/span> Iowa is where you can play catch at twilight with the ghost of your father on a baseball diamond you built, inadvisably, because a voice in your head told you to.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cIs this heaven?\u201d John Kinsella asks his son in \u201cField of Dreams,\u201d a modern American fairy tale filmed outside of Dubuque. \u201cIt\u2019s Iowa,\u201d shrugs Kevin Costner, who returned to the state last month to sprinkle some stardust on Pete Buttigieg. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Was it an easy choice to use this movie line? On the one hand, it epitomizes your theme. On the other, it\u2019s been used so much in so many places.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I did worry that this is a useless reference. But Costner was out for Buttigieg, and this story is about mythology or fairy tales, and \u201cField of Dreams\u201d is modern mythology. Also, my editor came up with the line that begins the ensuing paragraph, and it perfectly popped the \u201cField of Dreams\u201d balloon while linking it to the quest of John Delaney. (My editor is very good.)<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nBut what if the voice in your head is wrong? A couple of weeks ago, John Delaney was at a family restaurant in Muscatine, on the eastern edge of Iowa, because John Delaney was still running for president. He has been traipsing around the state longer than any other candidate, because he believes in Iowa\u2019s magic: connecting with people here means plugging into the national oversoul.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nExcept it hadn\u2019t been working.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cYour philosophy, your approach to the campaign \u2014 you\u2019ve convinced me, and yet I don\u2019t see the results in the polls,\u201d said Davenport resident Charles Van Fossen, who\u2019d driven down along the gray, slushy Mississippi River to eat with eight other Iowans and a bottom-tier presidential candidate.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cI don\u2019t want to be in the corner alone\u201d at the caucus, Van Fossen said. \u201cI\u2019m not afraid to do it, but I don\u2019t want to be alone.\u201d <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Cosmic quote. No one wants to be alone.<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>The dinner with Delaney was the type of Iowa event that few outsiders get to see: a very small \u201cevent,\u201d with a bottom-tier candidate, that nevertheless becomes a long, serious discussion about the direction of the country. This was at the end of my first day on the ground, and I drove away thinking \u201cThis is inspiring.\u201d<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nDelaney, a moderate former congressman from Maryland, had just delivered a bracing diagnosis of America as his guests ate burgers and rice pudding. In the past decade, 80 percent of venture capital investment went to just 50 counties, Delaney told them, and outside franchises have supplanted local businesses and suffocated reinvestment in small towns, which are the blood vessels of Iowa, of America.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThese Iowans in Muscatine were relieved to hear someone recognize this. But why hadn\u2019t John Delaney caught on here? His wife, April, suggested that a \u201csocial-media primary\u201d has weakened Iowa\u2019s power. And Iowans are ticked off by the Democratic National Committee\u2019s debate criteria, which they think have stolen their job of sorting viable candidates from wayward dreamers.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cThis race became nationalized very early,\u201d Delaney, who has since dropped out of the race, told the diners. \u201cAnd I think that was unfortunate. Because I think what you all do, here in Iowa, is you figure out people. You figure out what\u2019s in their head but also what\u2019s in their heart.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIowa loves to feel, to talk, to listen, to prod. Iowa wants to see the barbecue sauce on a candidate\u2019s rolled-up sleeves, the run in her stockings. Iowa wants to judge a candidate\u2019s handshake, glimpse her treatment of staff, nab him in moments of fakery. Iowans shift their schedules to encounter candidates in fleshy 3-D, away from the terse theatrics of billboards and cable-news hits. They drive hundreds of miles on bad roads to knock on strange doors. They cram into mansions in West Des Moines to talk climate with billionaire Tom Steyer, or basements in Denison to potluck and divvy up precinct activity for Joe Biden. They welcome frozen canvassers for Amy Klobuchar into their warm foyers even though they\u2019ve already committed to Elizabeth Warren. They show up to town halls on dark nights, as the sky spews sleet, so they can ask Buttigieg about the price of insulin, because they have friends or patients who can\u2019t afford it. They let Delaney buy them dinner so they can ask about issues beyond their white, rural world: the crisis at the border, the mass incarceration of black men. They volunteer for positions of leadership, even if they\u2019ve never thought of themselves as leaders. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Great graf. Every sentence begins with subject and verb. You use repetition often, either in structure or in a word or phrase. Why?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I go back to the notion of incantation. There\u2019s something meditative or poetic about repetition, when used correctly. Although this graf skates dangerously close to the dreaded \u201cThey came\u201d lede&#8230;<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cIt feels really good,\u201d says Anthony Miller, 22, who, despite crippling anxiety, has found himself a precinct captain for Buttigieg. \u201cEspecially being a volunteer \u2014 I have a place. And I haven\u2019t felt that anywhere else.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe Iowa that exists once every four years is made up \u2014 by politicians, by Iowans, by the journalists who stare at politicians and Iowans. But that feeling of belonging, of connectedness, of duty in laying the first brick in a path forward? It\u2019s real. It doesn\u2019t travel well, and you feel dopey trying to explain it after you leave, but it\u2019s real. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>A moment of vulnerability on your part. What were you thinking here?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Sometimes I\u2019m too clever by half, or try to be; I do too much showing and not enough telling. Here my editor and I thought we should be more forthright: This was one of my favorite reporting trips, there were multiple times when I felt chills or was near tears while talking to people, and this feeling had to be communicated somehow. I had gone to Iowa to bust up some mythology, and yet I was seeing evidence of it everywhere I turned.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe feeling of dread is also real. Outside Harlan, in western Iowa, the Rosmann family has been farming since the 1870s, without pesticides since 1983, organically since \u201994. They\u2019re worried about the path being broken, about connections being severed \u2014 how reckless consumerism is changing the climate, how money is corrupting politics, how Big Ag is breaking the food system and flushing poison downriver to the Gulf of Mexico.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cWhen we still had vibrant communities, when you had a diversity of agriculture, when land was held by as many people as possible \u2014 America and Iowa were at their best,\u201d said Ron Rosmann at his son\u2019s farm-to-table restaurant in Harlan two weeks ago. \u201cThat model can serve a lot of states.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cWe feel like we\u2019re on our own little island out here, doing what we\u2019re doing,\u201d said David Rosmann, 38, referring to the family\u2019s conservation practices. \u201cI think if people in New York knew what was happening to land in our state, then I think they definitely would say we need Iowa. We need Iowa to change.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/><br>\nIowa is not one story or one feeling. Yes, you can drive through it and see, off an interstate, two giant signs that read \u201cJESUS\u201d and \u201cTULSI.\u201d Yes, you can meet Iowans who think Iran attacked us on 9\/11 and therefore Solemani had it coming. Yes, it\u2019s very white: more than 90 percent.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAlso true: Iowa integrated schools 90 years before Brown v. Board of Education, and Edna Griffin led sit-ins in downtown Des Moines seven years before Rosa Parks refused to budge on an Alabama bus. Yes, Iowa is still a farming powerhouse \u2014 and the largest U.S. exporter of pork, corn and grain products \u2014 but barely 5 percent of Iowans are farmers. Yes, it\u2019s in decline in some places: A majority of its counties have fewer people than 100 years ago. But its cities have flowered anew.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cWe spend a lot of time, every four years, thinking of who we are, because of the whole national spotlight,\u201d says Pamela Riney-Kehrberg, a professor at Iowa State University who researches U.S. agricultural history. \u201cBut I think people have no idea what Iowa looks like.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIt can look like anywhere. Teleport yourself to a farm and you might think you\u2019re in Indiana, to downtown Des Moines and you might think it\u2019s Cincinnati, to the suburbs of Dubuque in the autumn and you might swear you\u2019re leaf-peeping in western Massachusetts. Iowa\u2019s cities \u2014 Davenport, Sioux City, Waterloo \u2014 don\u2019t overwhelm the state in the way that Chicago does to Illinois. On a clear day in the countryside, Iowa\u2019s blue sky can feel Montanan in its bigness, but you can reach most anywhere in the state in two or three hours.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cDo you know Tolkien?\u201d asked Rick Morain, a fourth-generation resident of Greene County, at a coffee shop in Jefferson (population 4,300). \u201cWhen I was out East, going to school, I always thought of Iowa as the shire \u2014 kind of a bucolic area where people are more interested in the people around them than they are in the big world. I don\u2019t think that so much anymore.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cRick\u2019s modest,\u201d said Jed Magee, a retired judge. \u201cHe\u2019s a PhD from Yale.\u201d <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>(And \u2014 bam! \u2014 assumptions whiplash, dear reader.) You use dialogue sparingly. Is that because it\u2019s hard to capture or for a more writerly reason?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Well, 95 percent of what people say (myself included) is inarticulate, awkward, misleading, what-have-you. I think there are writerly reasons, related to rhythm and impact, but also most people, most times, are just not very quotable.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nAcross the town square from their regular meetup, a software start-up has taken over a facade built 174 years ago by a fraternal order. Iowa is disappearing in some ways, and reappearing in others. Iowa may feel provincial, but it knows the world.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cHow many farmers 50 years ago would think about China?\u201d Magee asked rhetorically.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cNow they\u2019ve all <i>been<\/i> to China,\u201d said retired columnist Chuck Offenburger. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>An overstatement, I assume. Why did you decide to include it?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I think it\u2019s clearly hyperbole, but making an accurate point: Farmers are not provincial actors. They are in a global market, and their familiarity with international issues is commensurate.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nDarcy Maulsby, who lives in the former railroad hub of Lake City, grew up during the farm crisis of the \u201980s and listened to the disembodied voice that many young Iowans hear: <i>If you have the brains, leave<\/i>. She did, for a while. She traveled the world. She lived in Des Moines. In 2006, she came back to Lake City, where four generations of her family are buried. There\u2019s one local grocery store left in her county. The Italianate-Gothic school building, long closed to students but preserved for history, is now a meeting place for Narcotics Anonymous. Outside of town, groves of oak and cottonwood mark where farmsteads used to be.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMaulsby, a writer and farmer, drives past it all in her SUV. Iowa has changed, she says, but Iowans haven\u2019t. Elsewhere politicians have stripped \u201cgrass roots\u201d of any meaning, but here in Lake City you can feel them, and see why Iowans trust them.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cWe understand that grass roots are so powerful: the voices of the common people starting at the lowest levels, going to the highest levels, rather than from the top down,\u201d she says. \u201cThat\u2019s the magic of America.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/><br>\nMagic, mythology, grass roots, democracy \u2014 they can sound like weak slogans for a sad-sack superpower. Except over lunch with Emilia Marroqu\u00edn in Storm Lake. <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>You devote more words to Marroquin&#8217;s story than to anyone else in this piece. Why?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>Her life felt emblematic of Iowa to me. She came to it for opportunity, as settlers and farmers did originally. She represents the growing demographic of Hispanic Iowans. She invested in Storm Lake, grew into a community leader, and lived out the mythology that otherwise seems like a fairy tale. Her life bears out the themes of belonging, community, opportunity, pragmatism, civic engagement.<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<br \/>\nIowa is where Marroqu\u00edn arrived 20 years ago. She\u2019d grown up in San Marcos, El Salvador, hiding from helicopters and soldiers waging civil war. She was pregnant at 17, and tossed out of school and home. At 20, she immigrated to Los Angeles, met a man on the bus to work who had also fled El Salvador, to escape the clutches of junta forces and the guerrilla resistance. They became a couple. They married. Had children. After a shooting in front of their house, they wanted to relocate somewhere safer. A friend\u2019s mother, living in Iowa, had always rhapsodized about life there. There were jobs. There was quiet. And a beef processor was paying to relocate new employees to Storm Lake.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMarroqu\u00edn arrived there in 2000, with her husband and children, and little command of English. There was one Mexican restaurant in town, and only the cook spoke Spanish.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMarroqu\u00edn signed up for ESL classes. She became a substitute teacher for Head Start, where her daughter was enrolled. It took her two years of part-time study at night, she says, but she finished her GED. Then she got a bachelor\u2019s degree in human services from Buena Vista University. Last year, she was reelected to the city\u2019s school board. Storm Lake is now 38 percent Latino, and Marroqu\u00edn is demystifying the caucus process for other immigrants who thought they had to vote only once, in November.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cIn California, maybe nobody would know that I exist,\u201d Marroqu\u00edn said. \u201cHere, at least, we have our own world. There is a lot of people who are leaders in this community, and they are making a difference.\u201d<br \/>\n<br \/>\nShe has found herself, at the age of 48, written into the myth. Two years ago her son Matthew, now 20, delivered a speech at a state oratory festival. He told a story about a boy and girl who escaped violence, found each other, worked hard and ended up in Iowa \u2014 a state that can make you a president, or just make you a life.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n\u201cThank you, Mom and Dad,\u201d Matthew Marroqu\u00edn said at the end of his speech, a tribute to his parents and, in its final line, to Iowa: \u201cThis is our Happily Ever After.\u201d <span class='article-annotation-mod article-annotation-active'><a class='article-annotation-control'><\/a><span class='annotation annotation-red'>Nailed it. The reality and the myth. Did you know this would be your ending when you saw it?<\/span><span class='annotation annotation-blue'>I\u2019m not an outliner, but after reading Matthew\u2019s writing a few times, I realized that the notion of a fairy tale would bookend the piece. At first it would be a pejorative (\u201cIowa is a fairy tale\u201d), but by the end it would be an actuality (Iowa <i>is <\/i>a fairy tale\u201d). I had originally planned to end the piece with a litany of Iowa\u2019s positive attributes \u2014 to balance the negative ones in the lede \u2014 but my editor and I decided to just let Emilia\u2019s story stand, as an example of Iowa at its best.<\/span><\/span>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Dan Zak of the Washington Post toured 800 miles of Iowa in five days to explore the real place behind the political headlines and cultural cliches<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":8204,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[10],"tags":[],"topics":[],"authors":[270],"issue":[],"class_list":["post-1976","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-annotation-tuesday","authors-tom-warhover"],"acf":[],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v27.5 - 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