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In the conventions of regular punctuation, that requires a comma after \u201cParis,\u201d so sternest schoolmasters would have taken points off. But it is in that small violation that Hemingway\u2019s rhetorical style is revealed.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>You are also correct that all but two of his words are of one syllable.&nbsp;That actually forces us to see the two words that stand out:&nbsp;\u201cParis\u201d and \u201clovely,\u201d the two most important words.&nbsp;\u201cParis\u201d is the last word in the first clause; \u201clovely\u201d the last in the main clause.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Then there is the principle of three. Three examples sends a secret message: \u201cThat\u2019s all you need to know.\u201d&nbsp; Clear and cold and lovely. The number two (2) divides the world, but three (3) encompasses the world.&nbsp; Think of St. Paul in Corinthians:&nbsp; faith, hope, and love; or the way I learned it: faith, hope, and charity.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>The power comes from parallelism in Paul but also in Hemingway. &#8220;Clear&#8221; and &#8220;cold&#8221; are parallel \u2014 single syllable words that are alliterative. In a parallel list, the author always has a shot at giving it a tweak at the end. (Think of Frank Sinatra:&nbsp; &#8220;I\u2019ve been a pirate, a pauper, a puppet, a poet, a pawn, and a king.&#8221;) &#8220;Lovely&#8221; may sound like a weaker word because it has two syllables, with the emphasis on the first. 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