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Every reporter has one of those story ideas simmering on the back burner that they simply can\u2019t let drop. For Raquel Rutledge, it started with a house fire.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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The fire, which damaged a two-story rental house in the Milwaukee suburb of West Allis, made headlines when it happened in spring 2013. Most stories focused on the death of three young children, who were left alone, locked in a second-floor bedroom for three hours while their mother was at work. The mother, 24-year-old Angelica Belen, was later found guilty of child neglect resulting in death and sentenced to 18 years in prison. Judgments on social media were even harsher.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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But almost a decade later Rutledge felt the portrayal of Belen was simplistic and incomplete. She had questions about what led to the fatal events that night \u2014 not just in Belen\u2019s troubled life, but in the life of the troubled house she had rented as a refuge for herself and four children. Central to that curiosity: What about the landlord?<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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Rutledge, an investigative reporter at the Milwaukee Journal Sentinel, teamed with Ken Armstrong of Pro Publica to produce \u201c<\/strong>The Landlord & the Tenant<\/strong><\/a>.\u201d<\/strong> The 14,000-word, chaptered story focuses on two primary characters: Angelica Belen, a 24-year-old single mother at the time of the fire, and Todd Brunner, a Milwaukee landlord with a long list of black marks against his extensive rental empire. By juxtaposing their lives, Rutledge and Armstrong take the reader on a journey to understand how their paths intersected and where their fates diverged.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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But the nine-month investigation reveals a 45-year history of neglect and culpability that goes far beyond one tragic evening. The mother\u2019s childhood, the fathers of her children, the landlord and his extended family, the foster system, building inspectors, other government agencies and politics of landlord-tenant laws all played a part.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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The result is an investigation that\u2019s far from traditional: no nut graf, no bullet-pointed findings, no data visualizations and barely a trace of exposition. Context, law and policy are threaded in brief passages throughout. Chronology is bent and bent again, with 36 chapters marked by date, time and place stamps. Photos, many black-and-white, are layered throughout as if in a family album.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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Rutledge<\/a>, a 2011 Nieman Fellow, now is investigations editor for the nonprofit news site The Examination. She won the 2010 Pulitzer Prize in local reporting<\/a> for exposing fraud in Wisconsin\u2019s child care subsidy program. Ken Armstrong<\/a> has won or shared in four Pulitzer Prizes and has been a Pulitzer finalist five times.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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\u201cThe Landlord and the Tenant,\u201d published by ProPublica and the Milwaukee Journal Sentinel in November 2022, won a National Magazine Award for feature writing and was honored in the Dart Awards for excellence in coverage of trauma.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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Storyboard talked with Rutledge and Armstrong to understand how they conceptualized the structure, considered layers of reveal and kept readers\u2019 attention as they wove throughout decades and social systems. Our conversation, which has been edited for length and clarity, is followed by an annotation of the story.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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What first put you on the path of this story and why were you so captivated by it?
<\/strong>RUTLEDGE: <\/em>The genesis of the story was a fire that happened in 2013 outside of Milwaukee. For 10 years, I wanted to write about it. I did an investigation a couple of years ago that I thought might involve that particular fire, but it fell outside the parameters of our findings. It was something that I wanted to go back and look at for a long time, because there\u2019s so much emphasis on on Angelica Belen \u2014 this mother and what she had done \u2014 and very little focus on accountability for the landlord for the upkeep, safekeeping and maintenance of the rental property itself. I always thought that was something we should examine.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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Can you each share a little bit more context your roles and collaboration in this project? How did the original pitch and agreement come together?
<\/strong>RUTLEDGE:<\/em> I started reporting on it in spring of 2022. I reached out to Angelique Belen to see if she would be willing to talk, and eventually got her to agree. As I started to gather information and interview her, I reached out to Ken some weeks into my reporting. I was hoping that he might have some availability and interest in helping with this project. I explained some of the materials I had. He could immediately see the structure, how it would be a powerful braided narrative if we were to tell it that way. He also helped with reporting on the Todd Brunner side of things. There was so much documentation of court files.
ARMSTRONG: <\/em>I\u2019m a huge fan of Raquel\u2019s work and of projects the Journal Sentinel has done over the years. Pro Publica hadn\u2019t previous partnered with them, but there was interest in doing so. After Raquel made contact with Angelica Belen and contacted me, we wrote up a pitch and sent it to my editors. They immediately said yes.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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What made you choose each other?
<\/strong>RUTLEDGE:<\/em>Ken is just legendary. Some of his previous writing and reporting had really changed the way I thought about how I do my work. I could envision that I wanted this piece to have the same effect on people, and have them rethink the way they had seen things in the past. I\u2019d seen him execute work at the highest level and knew I could learn from him.
ARMSTRONG: <\/em>It was obvious the minute that Raquel began talking about the story that it had incredible potential. What was really appealing to me was that Raquel and two other reporters had, the previous year, done incredible work on electrical fires in Milwaukee. I was blown away by that work. Being able to use that expertise as a base and spin a narrative off it struck me as something that could be really powerful.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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I\u2019d love to dig more into your thinking behind the structure of the piece. You mentioned that the braided narrative was an obvious format to you from the get-go. But when I was reading, I didn\u2019t necessarily always know where the braid was going, or where the story was going, and how the threads were going to come together. What was your process like?
<\/strong>RUTLEDGE:<\/em> Ken was reading the novel by Anthony Doerr, \u201cAll the Light We Cannot See.\u201d<\/a> It\u2019s a braided narrative about a French girl and a German boy and how their lives intersect in World War II. It\u2019s told in short chapters. I started reading that book as well and found it compelling and moving. It was one of those books that you didn\u2019t want to put down; you just kept wanting to read the next chapter. And it was written in the present tense, which we also found compelling. We thought that would be something to try, something kind of different we don\u2019t often do in journalism.
ARMSTRONG:<\/em> We knew it was going to be a long story, but we wanted it to be a quick read. Our idea of doing that was to use short chapters, short sentences, simple language and to have a certain set of questions that would be introduced at the top that the reader would have to keep reading to get the answers to. In our initial chapter, we have the intersection of Angelica Belen\u2019s and Todd Brunner\u2019s lives. The house is on fire. We introduced a set of questions about how their lives came to intersect. What led up to that point, and what came after? You need to read to get the answers. Our idea was short chapters cutting back and forth, but not in a way where it would become formulaic. You didn\u2019t have to have one on Brenner, one on Belen; you could have a run of several of them, as long as they were short. It generates momentum and makes the story more propulsive.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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What do you mean by \u2018a long story but a quick read?\u2019
<\/strong>ARMSTRONG:<\/em> It would end up being close to 14,000 words, but we were hoping it would read like half of that or even less. One way you do that is you avoid the types of sections that people tend to avoid reading: the ones that are dense, that pull you out of the story, that are so explanatory that they read like homework. We had a lot of investigative findings in the piece, but we consistently found ways to embed them within the story. If you\u2019re able to do that, the story reads more quickly. We also avoided off-ramps throughout \u2014 we tried to avoid giving the reader any reason to stop reading. That could be either in the structure of the story, or having unwieldy language, or having distractions in the design of a story that pulls you out of the text. Those can include an interactive graphic or a video that pulls you out of the story for longer than you\u2019d wish. There\u2019s always a temptation to load up and use a lot of bells and whistles, but sometimes those bells and whistles work against the story.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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Did you feel nervous about not including the exposition typically used in investigations or accountability journalism? How did you have faith in the reader to understand the systemic context?
<\/strong>RUTLEDGE:<\/em> We knew we were taking a risk, but everything\u2019s a risk. Readers are going to stop reading for various reasons at different times in any project you do. But we felt like we wanted to do something different and our editors were supportive. We were trusting readers to be able to figure it out themselves and wanted to let people have their own experience \u2014 be curious about a question and let that curiosity lead.
ARMSTRONG:<\/em> I have a lot of faith in readers. If they\u2019re curious and if they\u2019re invested, they\u2019re going to read. But if they\u2019re bored or being lectured to, they\u2019re going to tune out. Let\u2019s say you use the traditional approach with the heavy-handed nut graf. That can give a reader a reason to stop reading because you\u2019ve already told them what the takeaway is and what they should think. There\u2019s no reason to keep reading.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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How did you decide when to reveal the links between each storyline and multiple backstories in terms of the progression for the reader? How did you think about moving them along, showing their connection and when to make those turns?
<\/strong>RUTLEDGE:<\/em> That was one of the things we wanted to be careful about. The local audience knew about some of these events, though a lot of folks would not have remembered because it had been so long. But in terms of revealing what happened with the children, we didn\u2019t want that to happen early on. We were very careful with our photos, images, dek hed and language we used along the way. You wanted to build a feeling that something was going to happen, but you didn\u2019t want it to be happening.
ARMSTRONG:<\/em> In terms of when their lives intersect, the story took care of itself. We just let it happen. You start the story in the middle, then you go back to the beginning, then pretty much tell it chronologically. There\u2019s a lot of intergenerational trauma. We tried to search before Angelica was born to explain a bit about her family\u2019s history. We\u2019re also writing about a lot of systems in the story \u2014 the foster care system, the landlord-tenant system, the criminal justice system \u2014 and weaving those in throughout both of their lives when it fits. Their lives intersect when she rents the house, the day of the fire, when the deed is recorded and the landlord is no longer the owner of record of the house. We just kind of let the events unfold.<\/p>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n

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The Landlord & the Tenant<\/h2>\nby Raquel Rutledge, Milwaukee Journal Sentinel<\/a>, and Ken Armstrong<\/a>, ProPublica
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\n April 11, 2013, 5:19 p.m.
\n 7750 West Hicks Street, West Allis, Wisconsin<\/h3>\nIn West Allis,<\/strong> a Milwaukee suburb once dominated by a factory that long ago manufactured steam engines, ore crushers and kilns, a man living on West Hicks Street opens his back door to let the dog out and sees smoke.
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\n August 26, 1977
\n Milwaukee, Wisconsin<\/h3>\nTodd Brunner is<\/strong> only 20 when, in the summer of 1977, he buys an old duplex on Milwaukee\u2019s south side. He purchases the house with Glen Guldan, a friend from high school. A bank gives them a $24,000 loan.
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\n December 16, 1985, 8:45 p.m.
\n Milwaukee<\/h3>\n<\/a>We jump back in time significantly here from where you opened, and forward from the previous chapter. How did you decide to stagger these chapters? What were your considerations when structuring the chronology of the piece and what did you want this to do for the reader?<\/span>So now we\u2019re moving chronologically, which we hope will help keep the reader oriented. For extra grounding, we use time stamps and place stamps. But we also want to establish, up high, a weave to let readers know that we\u2019ll be going back and forth. So we found entry points that would let us introduce Brunner, then Belen. As we move forward, we focus on key scenes in each of their lives, until their lives traverse. Sometimes, we use backstory within a scene (for example, dropping in Brunner\u2019s prior convictions in Chapter 8) so that we can provide important context and history without having to give every moment of our timeline its own chapter. In our structure, we did not insist on a strict adherence to back-and-forth: Brunner-Belen-Brunner-Belen-Brunner-Belen. If we did that, the story would have suffered at the altar of form. We looked for opportunities to heighten tension and contrast, and, when needed, broke down scenes not just by the day but by the minute. See, for example, the five chapters (1, 20, 21, 22, 23) for April 11, 2013, the day of the fire.<\/span><\/span>
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\n January 16, 1992
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\nMay 11, 1992
\nMilwaukee\n<\/h3>\nIn Milwaukee County<\/strong> Circuit Court, Glen Guldan files a breach-of-contract lawsuit against Todd Brunner, and, in the spring of 1992, Guldan prevails. A judge orders Brunner to pay about $11,000. The two men\u2019s friendship, and business partnership, is through. <\/a>I\u2019m imagining these chapter breaks as jump-cuts in a film. With a structure like this, the jump between storylines is sharp; you don\u2019t soften the transition for the reader. What drove your thinking behind this approach? Were you worried that the reader might lose track of their bearings?<\/span>What you were imagining is what we were hoping for: jump-cuts, with no need for transitions between scenes. When Ken worked at the Seattle Times, Jacqui Banaszynski (Hi, Jacqui!) taught him that if a story\u2019s architecture is sound, there\u2019s little if any need for transitions. There\u2019s close to 14,000 words in this story, but none of those words is \u201cmeanwhile.\u201d<\/span><\/span>
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\nBrunner is 35, married, with two kids, the youngest, a son, about to turn 2.
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\nThe men\u2019s parting is remembered differently, depending on who\u2019s remembering.
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\nRebecca Harms, who was Guldan\u2019s wife, says when the partnership unraveled, Brunner would call their home at 2 a.m., screaming and threatening to kill Guldan. \u201cWe got an alarm system installed in our house, we changed our phone number, and my husband got a gun from a friend,\u201d Harms says.
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\nBy this time, Guldan is fighting mouth cancer. Brunner makes an awful time even worse, Harms says. Guldan would go on to have 20 surgeries before dying at 44.
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\n\u201cAbsolutely never happened,\u201d Brunner will write later of threatening Guldan. They\u2019d been best friends, according to Brunner. Once, while making a wine rack for Guldan, Brunner cut off four fingers; doctors reattached two, he says. They were both Type A personalities, with strong opinions, and when Guldan wanted to build a budget movie theater in a Milwaukee suburb, \u201cI strongly disagreed so we went our own ways,\u201d Brunner writes.
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\nOn the same day that the judgment is entered in favor of Guldan, Brunner declares bankruptcy in federal court in Milwaukee, using Chapter 13, a way to preserve property while slow-paying creditors. Bankruptcy can be seen as failure. Or it can be seen as a fresh start. Brunner sees it as part of being a self-made man. He will say, in years to come, \u201cEvery self-made man has filed bankruptcy at least three times in his life.\u201d <\/a>What source did you draw this dialogue from?<\/span>This Milwaukee Journal Sentinel story<\/a>, by Cary Spivak.<\/span><\/span>\n

6.
\n August 13, 1993
\n Milwaukee<\/h3>\nAs young children,<\/strong> Angelica and Rosalie move through foster homes. In one, they go to church. Angelica absorbs the stories. She finds solace in scripture\u2019s description of a loving Father. She finds comfort in prayer. But not just the typical childlike petitions said before bed. For Angelica, faith becomes a lifeline.
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\nIn August of 1993, when Angelica is 5 and Rosalie 4, the girls are placed with two women, a mother and daughter. The girls call them Mom and Grandma. Mom works in a factory, second shift. Grandma is often gone.
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\nAnd for Angelica and Rosalie, there is freedom \u2014 safety, even \u2014 in being left alone. <\/a>Upon a second read, the foreshadowing here really is striking. How did you think about sprinkling bread crumbs for the reader throughout the narrative without giving too much away about how the plot resolves itself?<\/span>We wanted to give readers the information they needed to experience these a-ha! <\/em>moments on their own, without us screaming in their ear. We were putting our trust in readers. We\u2019ve found that more often than not, that trust is rewarded.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<\/strong>Angelica walks to kindergarten, then walks home to find Rosalie in the basement or their bedroom, playing by herself. They make peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. They drink Kool-Aid. In the summers, they get up when they want and leave the house when they want. They can play outside, do whatever. This lasts for three years, and for Angelica, these will be the best three years of her childhood.
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\n\u201cI did not feel neglected, or scared, or any of that,\u201d she will write. <\/a>Did Angelica keep a journal or record of her experiences during that time? Where did you source these details?<\/span>These details came from Angelica and her sister, Rosalie. Raquel interviewed both of them \u2013 separately, and at length. Their accounts lined up. She also interviewed their aunt who had some knowledge of their childhood years. Belen also wrote Raquel dozens of lengthy emails from prison. In our source box \u2014 attached to the story \u2014 we detailed what steps we took to verify Belen\u2019s recollections.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<\/strong>\u201cIt was just that we had no adult supervision.\u201d\n

7.
\n September 1996
\n Waukesha, Wisconsin<\/h3>\nRosalie and Angelica<\/strong> walk into a beautiful house in Waukesha, a suburb west of Milwaukee. They\u2019re 7 and 8. Their new foster parents tell the girls they can pick bedrooms. Each has a large bed with a floral print comforter, perfume on the dressers, and closets full of clothes and shoes. The rooms feel fit for princesses.
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\nIt is an inviting house, at first. And it\u2019s a door to a different world \u2014 seats at \u201cThe Nutcracker,\u201d insistence on proper enunciation. The girls stay up late, memorizing vocabulary. Angelica reads books usually assigned in middle school or high school. She\u2019s reading Dickens and Twain.
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\nBut years later, when interviewed separately, Rosalie and Angelica will both describe another side to this home. If the girls don\u2019t finish the milk in their cereal, the foster mom forces them to drink glass after glass until they are sick, they both say. When the girls complain of \u201cstarving\u201d after a day of errands, the foster mom force-feeds them pancakes, saying, \u201cYou don\u2019t know what starving is.\u201d Sometimes, the foster parents pull the girls\u2019 hair. Sometimes they force the girls to kneel, for hours, on gravel or stand on one leg, with arms out to the side, hangers on their wrists. If their arms drop and the hangers fall, they are further punished.
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\nOne night, Rosalie watches as the foster dad slams Angelica\u2019s head against a wall, both sisters will later recall.
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\nIn Milwaukee County there is a Children\u2019s Court file, with three manila folders, in which the girls\u2019 whereabouts and well-being were charted. In these records, there\u2019s no mention of abuse. Social workers often employ boilerplate language. \u201cAngelica is a very energetic 8-year-old child who loves attention. She is extremely friendly and charming.\u201d And the next year: \u201cAngelica is a very energetic 9-year-old child who loves attention. She is extremely friendly and charming.\u201d
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\nEventually, social workers note behavioral issues. Angelica \u201cis angry, lashing out, tantruming and refusing to get dressed,\u201d a report says. Sometimes she kicks Rosalie. To Rosalie, Angelica was like a cornered dog. \u201cShe was fight and I was flight,\u201d Rosalie says years later. A caseworker writes that the foster parents have warned Angelica they won\u2019t keep her if she doesn\u2019t improve: \u201cAngelica understands this and is really trying to be better.\u201d
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\nOn January 16, 1998, an emergency order is issued to remove the girls from this home. The court record doesn\u2019t explain why. All it offers is one sentence with a misspelled word: \u201cPre-adoptive placement has disrutived.\u201d Years later, an aunt will write to a judge: \u201cI knew things were not right in that home. I told the social workers and eventually they found out that Angelica and her sister suffered horrible abuse in that home.\u201d
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\n(A Journal Sentinel reporter recently interviewed this foster dad. He denied they abused the girls. Sometimes if the girls were lying or acting up, they\u2019d have them kneel and face a wall for 10 or 15 minutes, he said. The agency took Angelica and Rosalie, concluding the placement wasn\u2019t a good fit, he said.)
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\nWhen Angelica is 10, she returns to the foster home of the two women she used to call Mom and Grandma. But things are not as before. They don\u2019t want Angelica but must take her to keep Rosalie, they tell her. \u201cI was told on a daily basis that I was unwanted, worthless, and stupid,\u201d Angelica will later write.
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\nThis family adopts the girls when Angelica is 11. The two women\u2019s home will provide Angelica a \u201csafe, stable and nurturing environment,\u201d a caseworker writes. This is where the family court file ends.
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\nRosalie and Angelica both say later that the two women tormented Angelica; they isolated her, and the woman they called Mom punched and kicked her. She takes Angelica to psychiatrists, who prescribe a litany of powerful antipsychotics and other medications including lithium, Depakote, Zyprexa, Neurontin, Lamictal and Wellbutrin. <\/a>You spend a fair bit of time upfront detailing and chronicling how Angelica\u2019s early childhood experiences under the supervision of adults were harmful, damaging and unsafe. Why was it crucial to establish this context early in the piece?<\/span>Bryan Stevenson, the attorney who wrote \u201cJust Mercy,\u201d LINK likes to say that we\u2019re all more than the worst thing we\u2019ve ever done. Before we told readers about the worst thing Belen has ever done (locking her kids in that bedroom before leaving for work), we wanted readers to know where she came from and what she\u2019d been through. We wanted them to know her as a person in full. Intergenerational trauma figures prominently in her family history. And, again, this story is about contrast. It\u2019s about the American divide, whether the divider is class, gender or race. Who gets the breaks? Who doesn\u2019t? Understanding Belen\u2019s history is crucial when taking up those questions.<\/span><\/span>\n

8.
\n February 23, 2002, 1:48 a.m.
\n Pewaukee, Wisconsin<\/h3>\nA police sergeant<\/strong> in Pewaukee, a Milwaukee suburb that boasts of country living with a big lake for boating and fishing, gets dispatched to the parking lot of a McDonald\u2019s. It\u2019s close to 2 in the morning. The sergeant sees a car, a maroon Cadillac Escalade \u2014 it\u2019s new, it\u2019s a 2002 \u2014 parked near the drive-through, headlights burning, engine running, with a vanity license plate, \u201cLANDLD.\u201d
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\nThe driver is asleep.
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\nThe sergeant wakes him up and smells alcohol. The driver is Todd Brunner. The sergeant asks Brunner to recite the alphabet. Brunner stops after \u201cE,\u201d saying he can go no further, because his throat is dry. He blows a .14, well above the legal limit. A subsequent blood test comes back even higher.
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\nBrunner is charged with driving drunk, something he\u2019s been convicted of twice before. His first two convictions were in 1989 and 1993. In between those convictions he was charged with driving on a suspended or revoked license (third offense) and driving without a valid license (second offense).
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\nBrunner pleads guilty, and prosecutors recommend a jail sentence of 120 days.
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\nBrunner\u2019s lawyer writes the judge, saying Brunner \u201cis basically a hardworking man who was in the wrong place at the wrong time.\u201d Of Brunner\u2019s prior convictions, the lawyer writes, \u201cDrank a bit too much in an isolated incident, made a bad decision to drive and got caught.\u201d
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\nIn the fall of 2003, the judge sentences Brunner to 35 days. <\/a>I appreciate how you let the details speak for themselves. Thirty-five days is such a (relatively) brief, lenient sentence.<\/span><\/span>
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\nAfter Brunner serves 17 days, his wife writes the judge, asking that Brunner be allowed to serve his remaining time at home on electronic monitoring. She says he hurt his back and can\u2019t sleep on the jail bunk and that without sleep he can\u2019t run his business and that if he can\u2019t run his business all his employees will lose their livelihoods.
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\nIn the court file for this case, a handwritten note in the margins of her letter says \u201cdenied without medical verification,\u201d after which medical verification was provided, with a doctor writing the judge about Brunner\u2019s aching back.
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\nThe jail no longer has records showing when Brunner was actually released. Brunner will later write that the jail was overcrowded and he was too big for the jail\u2019s beds. The best he can remember, \u201cI was released for good behavior.\u201d\n

9.
\n June 17, 2003
\n West Allis<\/h3>\nThe house at<\/strong> 7750 West Hicks Street in West Allis, built in 1893, uses balloon framing, with long, wooden studs stretching from basement to roof. That style of construction saved money and time but introduced danger. If a fire broke out, those unbroken studs could become a highway for flames.
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\nTodd Brunner buys this home, with three upstairs bedrooms and a steep, gable roof, in the spring of 2003. The purchase price is $50,507. He later bundles it with 10 other properties to get a $1.1 million loan from Tri City National Bank.
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\nFor Brunner, the West Allis house becomes part of a growing enterprise. In Milwaukee alone, he buys at least 65 properties from 2002 to 2005, many on the city\u2019s economically distressed north side. He scoops up a Cape Cod on North 38th, a duplex on North 58th, a ranch on North 72nd. At sheriff\u2019s sales, where foreclosed properties go up for auction, he\u2019s such a fixture he has his own desk.
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\nBrunner\u2019s name is all over property records. It\u2019s all over court records, too. He constantly sues, and he is constantly being sued. Court records turn up disputes with contractors, creditors, debtors, tenants, banks, utilities, code enforcers and tax collectors. He feuds with neighbors and with business associates and with business associates who once were neighbors.
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\nIn court, he wins some, he loses some. He\u2019ll later say a lot of this litigation stems from tenants who don\u2019t pay their rent or from properties he buys in poor condition, not up to code. \u201cI was proud of the work we did on these properties,\u201d he\u2019ll write. With a crew that grew as big as 30, \u201cwe usually completely rehabbed them turning them from the worst to the best properties in the area.\u201d
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\nBrunner lives in Pewaukee, in a sprawling, serpentine house on two acres near the lake. In 2004, a neighbor accuses Brunner of harassment. Home surveillance video captured Brunner, in a Cadillac Escalade, pulling up to the neighbor\u2019s home and yelling: \u201cCocksucker. Fucking piece of shit. Fuck. Come out here. I will kick your fucking ass.\u201d At a court hearing, the neighbor testifies that Brunner has also pulled up on other occasions and revved his engine: \u201cHe sits out in front of the house, honking, roaring.\u201d
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\nA judge orders Brunner to stay away from the neighbor. Months later, according to a police report, the neighbor hears a vehicle outside his house, idling. He sees Brunner on an ATV. \u201cTake a picture, motherfucker,\u201d Brunner says, before driving off. Charged with violating the anti-harassment order, Brunner ends up being convicted of disorderly conduct and pays a $181 fine.
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\nYears later, Brunner goes at it with a different neighbor. He pulls up to the neighbor\u2019s house and yells at the family to \u201cget off his land,\u201d according to a police report. He says, \u201cYou want a piece of me?\u201d A deputy writes in his report, \u201cIt should be noted, Todd is a very large man approximately 400 pounds.\u201d Brunner subsequently appears in the neighbor\u2019s driveway with a tape measure. \u201cFor some reason,\u201d a deputy writes, \u201cBrunner believes the asphalted driveway \u2026 is now his property.\u201d\n

10.
\n June 7, 2007
\n Milwaukee<\/h3>\nDoctors tell Angelica<\/strong> Belen that her first child will be a boy. So the arrival of a girl, when Belen is 19, leaves her with no name prepared. A day later she\u2019s doing the word search puzzle and spies, between the circled words, four letters, N-A-Y-A.
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\nNaya will be her name, Angelica says. No, make it Nayeli, the father says. Because it means \u201cI love you\u201d in the language of the Zapotecs, an indigenous population from southern Mexico.
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\nAs Naya grows, her mother sees that she is smart, charismatic, funny, kind, \u201ca bit sassy, and very easily distracted.\u201d Naya walks early, talks early, reads early. When she\u2019s 2, she trick-or-treats as a Spanish dancer in a red dress. She loves cute shoes, big bows in her hair and lip gloss. And she loves ballet. She idolizes Misty Copeland, a Black ballerina. Her favorite singers are Rihanna and Beyonce. They are brown like her, and true to the title of Beyonce\u2019s smash album, they are \u201cfierce.\u201d That word is Naya\u2019s \u201cevery aspiration,\u201d Belen later writes. Naya will say, \u201cMom, I just need to be fierce, I am fierce, I need to look fierce.\u201d
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\nIn 2008, when Belen is 20, she has twin boys, born premature.
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\nAdrian, 3 pounds, 12 ounces at birth, has epilepsy and autism. He gets medication for seizures, and as he grows, he is quiet, gentle and sweet. He loves wearing his Batman costume. His favorite song is \u201cBohemian Rhapsody.\u201d He keeps pennies in his pocket and helps his mom around the house, putting dishes in the sink. His mom will give him rubber bands and paper clips, and he will make an airplane. On a trip to Famous Footwear, he goes to a bin and starts sorting, white socks here, black socks there.
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\nAlexis, or Alex for short, is even smaller at birth: 3 pounds, 7 ounces. He has cerebral palsy. He gets physical therapy and speech therapy. When he crawls at 15 months, his mom claps; when he pulls himself up at 19 months, she cheers; when he walks at 22 months, she cries. His mom calls Alex her \u201clittle spitfire.\u201d If there\u2019s trouble to be had \u2014 say, smearing grape jelly and mustard everywhere \u2014 Alex is the one to start it, while Adrian tags along. Alex\u2019s favorite movie is \u201cThe Avengers.\u201d He likes to sit in his mom\u2019s lap, and if she cries, he strokes her face. <\/a>The details throughout this section are lovely.<\/span><\/span>
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\nNaya is close to her brothers. She goes along on their visits to therapists and doctors. Belen teaches Naya to protect her brothers. After Belen burns cookies and a smoke alarm goes off, she instructs Naya on fire safety, saying, try to find a safe way out, and if you can\u2019t, put a towel under the door to block the smoke and throw toys out a window and scream, so someone can hear.\n

11.
\n August 15, 2010
\n West Allis<\/h3>\nIn the summer<\/strong> of 2010, Todd Brunner sells the house on West Hicks Street in West Allis. Only it\u2019s not really a sale, because no money is exchanged. As Brunner will later admit in court papers, he\u2019s trying to shield this house \u2014 and many others \u2014 from creditors.
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\nBrunner creates three shell companies, in which he hides real estate, cars and boats. He doesn\u2019t exactly cover his tracks; they\u2019re organized under the name of his son, Shawn. Shawn is in college. He\u2019s 20. He\u2019s on Facebook posting \u201ceat pray blowjob\u201d and \u201cgetting white boy wasted tomorrow?!?\u201d
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\nWhen Shawn was 17, he was charged with a felony for throwing fireworks at a passing train, causing temporary hearing loss for an engineer leaning out a window. He pleaded guilty to a misdemeanor and paid a $325 fine. When Shawn turned 18, his dad, as a birthday present, gave him $100,000 to invest in real estate.\n

12.
\n June 5, 2011
\n Milwaukee<\/h3>\nTodd Brunner<\/strong> files for bankruptcy, again, declaring, in court records, that he owes more than $18 million to creditors listed across 60-plus pages.
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\nHe owes taxes to 29 municipalities, from Brookfield to West Allis. At least nine banks hold mortgages. He owes First Business Bank $2.2 million for a construction loan for a failed venture to build an assisted-living center for seniors. He has unpaid court fines and condominium dues; outstanding debts to suppliers and lawyers; and credit card balances ranging from $350 to $92,000.
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\nHe lists 218 properties he owns in Wisconsin. They include many rentals, with paying tenants, but even so, Brunner lists, as his monthly income, \u201c$0.00.\u201d <\/a>The numbers speak for themselves here. Did you obtain all of these figures from the bankruptcy file?<\/span>Yes, all the numbers and details in this chapter\u2019s top four paragraphs, including Brunner\u2019s claim that his monthly income was $0.00, came from bankruptcy records.<\/span><\/span>
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\nThe bankruptcy records include Brunner\u2019s personal possessions, revealing an attraction for what he later calls \u201csome cool toys.\u201d He owns a 1918 Rauch & Lang electric car; a 1937 Ford Coupe; a 1959 Jaguar; a 1984 Rolls Royce; and a 2006 Bentley worth $70,000. He also owns a Harley-Davidson motorcycle, an ATV and at least eight trucks.
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\nBrunner\u2019s flashy collection doesn\u2019t sit well with some creditors. \u201cA guy doesn\u2019t usually come out here in a Bentley<\/a> to tell you he can\u2019t pay you 1,900 bucks,\u201d the president of a window-and-door dealer tells the Journal Sentinel. Brunner\u2019s boats include a 30-foot catamaran that, he writes, reaches 134 mph and consumes 136 gallons of fuel an hour, wide-open throttle. He also owns a 37-foot cigarette boat, worth $80,000, named El Diablo.
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\nKerry Kneser, a former football teammate of Brunner\u2019s, remembers working at a bank in Pewaukee and seeing Brunner pull up, in a Bentley, and park in a no-parking zone. \u201cAt that point he had an attitude, I can do whatever I want.\u201d <\/a>Such a small detail, but one that is emblematic of the lens through which Brunner views the world.<\/span><\/span>
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\n\u200b\u200bDennis Witthun Jr., a former business partner of Brunner\u2019s, says Brunner wore a gold necklace with diamond-encrusted propellers. Brunner, Witthun says, \u201cwas a good actor.\u201d Witthun says he once went with Brunner to meet with bank officials to seek relief with a big loan. In the meeting, Brunner cried with \u201cactual tears,\u201d Witthun says. Then outside the bank Brunner stopped crying and said to Witthun, \u201cHow was that?\u201d
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\n(\u201cNever happened\/ A total lie,\u201d Brunner later writes to a reporter when asked about this.) <\/a>How did you decide when to lean on reporting that was already previously done by other outlets, like your mention of the Journal-Sentinel earlier in this chapter? What\u2019s your approach to including other reporting, generally?<\/span>Most of the previous reporting was done by the Journal Sentinel, so that reporting was in-house (given that the JS was half of this partnership). We sometimes linked to stories \u2014 for example, in the sentence in this chapter. Then, in the source box at the bottom, we made specific mention of Cary Spivak, the Journal Sentinel reporter who had done extensive reporting on Todd Brunner in the years before.<\/span><\/span>
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\nOne week after Brunner files for bankruptcy, a sheriff\u2019s deputy finds two of Brunner\u2019s employees on railroad property, according to police records. The two say they were digging a channel under the tracks to run electricity from one of Brunner\u2019s rental properties to his boat lifts on Pewaukee Lake.
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\nBrunner tells deputies he did indeed order this work. He says he doesn\u2019t have a permit \u201cbut would pull one with the City of Pewaukee during the week,\u201d according to a deputy\u2019s report. A couple of trains get delayed while the track is inspected for possible damage to the railroad bed. The railroad fills the hole \u2014 3 feet long, 1 foot wide \u2014 and Brunner\u2019s employees get charged with, and convicted of, trespassing.
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\n(Brunner himself wasn\u2019t charged, based on what these records show. Asked recently about this incident, Brunner wrote: \u201cI never said I would get a permit because I didn\u2019t think I needed one. We were just driving a 1\u2019 pipe underneath the railroad tracks, that never hurt anything and we were only copying what other neighbors had done years earlier. I paid for the tickets my people got.\u201d) <\/a>It\u2019s very telling that his employees get charged, while he doesn\u2019t.<\/span><\/span>\n

13.
\n June 14, 2011
\n 7750 West Hicks Street, West Allis<\/h3>\nThe West Allis<\/strong> code inspector who shows up at 7750 West Hicks Street doesn\u2019t go inside. On this spring day in 2011, he inspects only the house\u2019s exterior, checking for violations.
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\nMilwaukee, 6 miles east, has a program at this time requiring interior inspections of rental units in particularly distressed neighborhoods. Its program recognizes that if a renter notifies the city of some problem \u2014 say, failing pipes or faulty wiring \u2014 an upset landlord could respond by filing to evict. Milwaukee strives to catch dangerous conditions without exposing renters to retaliation.
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\nWest Allis has no such program. Its inspector sees what he can from the outside, and at 7750 West Hicks, he sees five violations, including weeds, a boarded-up window, scattered junk, and wood in need of paint.
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\nThe remaining violation falls under the city\u2019s electrical code. But the inspector\u2019s written notes offer only six words of description: \u201ctwo outlets east side of house.\u201d On June 14, the inspector sends a \u201cnotice,\u201d directing the landlord, Todd Brunner, to fix the violations by June 30.
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\nOn July 20, the inspector returns and sees the same violations. He sends an \u201corder,\u201d demanding Brunner fix them by August 20. <\/a>This is a super important section. Beyond the documentation from the inspector, what was the sourcing? What materials did you use to reconstruct this scene?<\/span>We used the inspector\u2019s reports (the notice, order and second order), as well as his handwritten notes. These reports were found in a file kept by the city\u2019s neighborhood services department. Raquel also interviewed the inspector, who had retired, at his home.<\/span><\/span>
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\nOn August 22, the inspector sees that three violations remain, including the problem outlets. He sends a \u201csecond order,\u201d demanding Brunner fix them by September 22.\n

14.
\n August 31, 2011
\n Milwaukee<\/h3>\nAngelica Belen<\/strong> didn\u2019t plan for another child, but her IUD fails. She\u2019s 23 when her fourth child is born, and her fourth child, like her second and third, is born premature. Born at 28 weeks, he has a breathing disorder; he needs a nebulizer three times a day, an inhaler twice a day. She carries him constantly, afraid he\u2019ll have an asthma attack.
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\nWhen Belen first met the boy\u2019s father, he seemed caring and helpful. He went to the kids\u2019 doctor\u2019s appointments and sat and played with them. \u201cMore than anything else that\u2019s what drew me into him,\u201d she\u2019ll write years later. But a few months after their child\u2019s birth, he hits Belen in the face, bloodying her nose, then grabs and shakes her head, according to a criminal complaint. He gets convicted of disorderly conduct and is ordered to stay away from Belen.
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\nFor Belen, this is history repeating. The twins\u2019 father had also been a good father at first. Then, she says, he became violent and lapsed into drugs, and she knew she had to leave him.
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\nIn the spring of 2012, Belen gets evicted from her home in Oak Creek, south of Milwaukee. It\u2019s her second eviction, the kind of history that will make it hard to find a new place. The man who served the eviction papers sees three children outside, unattended, near a busy intersection, two in diapers so soiled they hang to the knees.
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\nBelen gets a job at a thrift shop but loses it for missing too many days taking care of her kids.
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\nShe enrolls Naya in Saint Lucas, a Lutheran school in Milwaukee, even though it will require her to drive Naya back and forth every day. On days when Belen\u2019s minivan breaks down, she takes her by city bus. A fellow mom writes of seeing Belen arrive one winter day, \u201cher baby strapped to her chest and one boy in each hand,\u201d out of breath, having walked a half-mile from the bus stop through snow. Robert Gurgel, the parish pastor, notices Belen in the pews at church. \u201cI thought who is this woman with these well-groomed, well-mannered children,\u201d Gurgel will later say. \u201cI wondered what her story was.\u201d <\/a>How did you find sources like Gurgel?<\/span>Reading through the sentencing documents. Included were many letters from family members, friends and others such as Gurgel, who had written to the court.<\/span><\/span>
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\nBelen makes beautiful dresses for Naya, and she makes it to school events, like Pastries with Parents, and she volunteers to help clean the school on weekends. <\/a>You include a wide range of details about Belen \u2013 the ways in which she is struggling as a mother, like with the soiled diapers, but also where her commitment to her children shines through. What were you hoping to convey with this complexity?<\/span>She\u2019s trying. She\u2019s failing, but she\u2019s trying. Sometimes we expect people to be all this or all that. Life\u2019s not that way.<\/span><\/span>\n

15.
\n January 3, 2012
\n Milwaukee<\/h3>\nThe way Todd<\/strong> Brunner divulges information in his latest bankruptcy declaration, dribbling it out, angers creditors and the U.S. trustee, who monitors cases and enforces bankruptcy laws. Asked in a hearing where he got the information needed to fill out the voluminous bankruptcy forms, Brunner says, \u201cOut of my head.\u201d As creditors and the trustee keep digging, he keeps revealing more assets, including a backhoe, a forklift, boat propellers, five guns and four pieces of real estate in Bend, Oregon.
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\nIn January 2012, the trustee asks that Brunner\u2019s request for bankruptcy protection be denied. \u201cA core purpose of the Bankruptcy Code is to provide a fresh start for honest debtors,\u201d the trustee\u2019s motion says. \u201cIt is not a safe haven for fraud or deception.\u201d
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\nBrunner accused a former secretary of throwing all his records in a snowbank. (\u201cNot truthful,\u201d the trustee\u2019s motion says.) Brunner transferred properties into shell companies when in financial trouble \u2014 a \u201cbadge of fraud,\u201d the motion says. He then moved many of them back, including the house in West Allis. He didn\u2019t disclose his income to the bankruptcy court; he hasn\u2019t filed federal tax returns for two years running; and he declared assorted assets only after creditors asked about them, the motion says. The trustee likens Brunner\u2019s actions to \u201ca game of \u2018cat and mouse.\u2019\u201d
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\nIn April 2012, the bankruptcy judge tosses Brunner\u2019s bankruptcy request out of court. Brunner, the judge says, blamed his poor record-keeping on a former record-keeper, his property transfers on bad advice from a former lawyer, and his poor property management on a property-management company. \u201cYou have a propensity to blame others,\u201d the judge tells Brunner. \u201cAnd you seem to be portraying yourself as an innocent victim, and I\u2019m not persuaded by that at all.\u201d
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\nInstead of getting protection from creditors, Brunner\u2019s now in trouble with law enforcement. In June, an assistant U.S. attorney emails federal and local authorities about what she calls Brunner\u2019s \u201cmulti-faceted fraud activity.\u201d At least three Milwaukee police detectives work with federal agents; their emails back and forth reveal an investigation that keeps expanding. Subpoenas go out to banks, title insurers, property managers. Investigators collect rent ledgers, loan applications, balance sheets. They interview Brunner\u2019s business partners, tenants and at least two of his former lawyers.
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\nBanks swoop in to collect. <\/a>This line evokes powerful imagery. I often imagine debt collectors as birds.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<\/strong>In October 2012, Brunner, questioned under oath by one bank\u2019s lawyer, says, \u201cThis is just a witch hunt.\u201d He says, \u201cI wasn\u2019t meaning to defraud anybody.\u201d He says, \u201cIf you think I got a big bag of money somewhere, you\u2019re wrong.\u201d Some questions, he just won\u2019t answer. He refers to getting a high-interest loan but treats the loan\u2019s source as a secret.
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\n\u201cI borrowed it from an attorney. He makes loans.\u201d
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\n\u201cAnd who is that attorney?\u201d
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\n\u201cHe doesn\u2019t want his name out there.\u201d <\/a>Did all of this dialogue come from court records? What was your experience and the timeline like when it came to obtaining records?<\/span>Yes, this dialogue came from a transcript that was included in court records. For our scenes with dialogue, we consistently pushed for the best available record. If video wasn\u2019t available, we asked for audio. If audio wasn\u2019t available, we asked for a transcript. If a transcript wasn\u2019t available, we paid to have one created, using a court reporter\u2019s notes. Our timeline was nearly 400 pages long. It got so long it became balky, so we stopped adding to it and instead created additional timelines on specific subtopics (for example, the details regarding Brunner\u2019s 200-plus properties).<\/span><\/span>
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\n\u201cSo you\u2019re willing not to answer this question under oath to protect the attorney?\u201d
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\n\u201cI\u2019m done with this right now. What else do you want?\u201d
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\nTwo days later, the FBI raids Brunner\u2019s home, seizing computers and paperwork. Separately, the FBI finds, in a warehouse, expensive engines, superchargers and gauges that had been stripped from El Diablo, Brunner\u2019s cigarette boat.\n

16.
\n March 9, 2012
\n Brookfield, Wisconsin<\/h3>\nA fire starts in<\/strong> the garage of a rental house on Ridgeview Drive in the Milwaukee suburb of Brookfield, and the fire spreads to the house, but thanks to a barking dog, the two people sleeping inside on this Friday morning are alerted to the blaze and able to get out.
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\nCrews from fire departments around Milwaukee respond to the fire, which causes about $150,000 worth of damage. Firefighters fill out a form for the fire, and in the section titled \u201cIgnition,\u201d in the subsection for \u201cHeat source,\u201d the author types, \u201cElectrical arcing.\u201d
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\nThe rental home\u2019s owner is Todd Brunner.
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\nIn nearby Milwaukee, firefighters are accustomed to getting called to Brunner\u2019s rental properties.
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\nIn December of 2009, they get called to a house of Brunner\u2019s on North 41st Street. The incident report says \u201cbad outlet.\u201d Firefighters shut off power to the outlet and advise the tenant to call an electrician.
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\nIn May of 2010, firefighters get called to a house of Brunner\u2019s on North 28th Street. The incident report says the woman living there \u201cwitnessed sparks coming from electric outlet.\u201d Firefighters shut off power to the kitchen, the room with the sparking outlet, and advise her to call an electrician.
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\nIn July of 2012, firefighters go to a house of Brunner\u2019s on North 65th Street. The incident report says \u201cOUTLET SPARKING.\u201d Firefighters shut down the circuit and advise: \u201ccontact landlord.\u201d <\/a>We can now see that Brunner\u2019s neglect, and propensity for that neglect to start fires, is a pattern. Why did you choose to place this section here, in the middle of the piece? How were you thinking about these different layers of reveal?<\/span>This is an example of arranging chapters to heighten tension: This chapter \u2014 about a fire and fire hazards at Brunner\u2019s other rental properties \u2014 comes immediately before Belen moves into Brunner\u2019s rental home in West Allis. She considers her new home a \u201cdream come true,\u201d because she knows nothing about Brunner or this pattern we\u2019ve just revealed. So at this point, the reader knows something Belen doesn\u2019t \u2014 and what the reader knows is going to make the reader very uneasy. This chapter is also an example of using a scene with a time stamp \u2014 the March 9, 2012, fire in Brookfield \u2014 but then describing incidents on either end of that date (December 2009, May 2010, July 2012) to establish a disturbing pattern.<\/span><\/span>\n

17.
\n July 18, 2012
\n 7750 West Hicks Street, West Allis<\/h3>\nKnowing nothing<\/strong> about the house\u2019s landlord, Todd Brunner, Angelica Belen signs a lease and moves with her four kids into 7750 West Hicks Street in West Allis. For weeks, Belen\u2019s family had been sleeping in her minivan or at a relative\u2019s house or in a shelter. Now, with the help of government assistance for her children with disabilities, she can rent this house \u2014 a big house \u2014 for $825 a month. \u201cThis place looked like a dream come true,\u201d she\u2019ll write later.
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\nIn the kitchen, one light flickers. A friend tightens the bulb, but still, Belen needs to flip the switch several times to turn the light on. The light above the kitchen sink is worse. The first time she turns it on, two bulbs blow. She replaces them and tries again, but those bulbs blow as well, leading her to give up. She tells the property manager about the problems with the lighting, but nobody comes to fix whatever is wrong, Belen will say later. Belen considers calling the city but chooses not to, fearing her landlord will kick her out.
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\nThelma Nash, who rented the house before Belen, says the wiring throughout was \u201ca mess.\u201d \u201cThe lights were going on and off all the time,\u201d Nash says. \u201cI thought there were ghosts in there.\u201d She complained to property managers but got no response, she says. She never saw an electrician make repairs.
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\nA month or so after moving out, Nash meets Belen while returning to pick up mail. Nash asks if the electrical wiring has been fixed, and when Belen says no, Nash tells her, \u201cBaby, they shouldn\u2019t have let you move in.\u201d <\/a>Why did you choose this quote for the dek hed?<\/span>There\u2019s such foreboding in this quote. The previous tenant knows something Belen doesn\u2019t \u2014 and is worried about Belen. We thought this quote might pull readers in. What is it that the previous tenant knows? What\u2019s the history here? <\/em>We also wanted to avoid having a dek that would give the story away. That\u2019s the same reason we avoided having any kind of traditional nut graf.<\/span><\/span>
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\nThere is so much about the house Belen doesn\u2019t know. She doesn\u2019t know about the code inspector who has flagged two exterior outlets. She doesn\u2019t know what the wiring looks like in the basement, because she doesn\u2019t go down there. Basements give her the creeps; plus, a property manager told her the floor had been torn up. And she doesn\u2019t know the house\u2019s history.
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\nIn the summer of 1978, decades before Brunner became owner, the house caught fire. As smoke poured from the eaves and windows, firefighters found, in an upstairs bedroom, a teenager. She wasn\u2019t breathing. She had no pulse. Firefighters carried her outside and resuscitated her.
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\nThe fire department classified the fire\u2019s cause as electrical. A TV overheated, the battalion chief wrote. A captain, in a report now preserved on microfilm, requested an electrical inspection of the house by the city\u2019s Fire Prevention Bureau. He wrote, \u201cVarious electrical code violations were noted in the building while overhauling \u2014 especially the basement.\u201d\n

18.
\n December 31, 2012
\n West Allis<\/h3>\nOn the final day<\/strong> of 2012, a year and a half after the code inspector first flagged the problem outlets, the city\u2019s file on the house on West Hicks Street is closed.
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\nAfter Todd Brunner failed to respond to the \u201cnotice,\u201d then the \u201corder,\u201d then the \u201csecond order,\u201d the city filed a citation against Brunner, hoping that would get his attention. Brunner failed to appear in municipal court, resulting in a $5,000 default judgment, after which Brunner\u2019s attorney got the case reopened and then resolved with payment of a $50 fine. <\/a>Again, the numbers really show it all here \u2014 how Brunner gets off easily with the law, time and time again.<\/span><\/span>
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\nBut what happened at the house is unclear. The inspector\u2019s notes \u2014 handwritten and at times barely legible \u2014 indicate the issue with the outlets was corrected in March 2012. But just as his initial notes didn\u2019t specify the problem, his subsequent notes don\u2019t describe the fix.
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\nNash, the home\u2019s renter in early 2012, says she doesn\u2019t remember anyone coming to the house to do repairs. There is no record on file of anyone getting an electrical permit. Electrical permits trigger an inspection by city engineers who can ensure work was done \u2014 and done properly.\n

19.
\n February 26, 2013
\n West Allis<\/h3>\nA social worker<\/strong> is on her way to Angelica Belen\u2019s house when she notices that Belen is driving right in front of her in a minivan. The social worker sees Belen arrive at her home and get out with only her daughter.
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\nBelen, the worker discovers, has left her three boys in the home, alone. The twins are crying; the toddler is in a high chair. Confronted, Belen makes up a story, then admits the truth: She\u2019d left them for about an hour while picking up Naya from school.
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\nThe social worker is with the Bureau of Milwaukee Child Welfare, an agency that helps families in crisis. Child welfare officials have received at least a half-dozen complaints about Belen, all of which they\u2019ve found to be unsubstantiated or not credible enough to investigate. But there are real problems. Social workers report that Belen has been missing therapy appointments for her children. Their medication isn\u2019t being routinely refilled. Her home is often filthy, with dirty diapers and garbage strewn about.
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\nThe bureau is doing unannounced visits. Social workers have been meeting with Belen about once a week to work on family safety. They tell her: Under no circumstances should she leave her kids alone.
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\nTwo weeks later, Belen drives to a store in West Allis and goes inside with Naya to buy art supplies. Outside, in the parking lot, a man discovers the twin boys walking around. One nearly gets hit by a car. Someone else discovers Belen\u2019s youngest child inside the minivan, alone and crying. The police are called, and caseworkers notified, and Belen says this is how she was raised, that as a child she\u2019d been left in the car with no harm done.
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\nIn a follow-up, a West Allis police detective goes to Belen\u2019s home on March 18 and does a walk-through. The children seem OK, the detective reports. There\u2019s clutter, the kitchen is dirty, food seems limited, but the detective doesn\u2019t see anything dangerous. The detective returns the next day and reports that conditions have \u201cimproved greatly.\u201d The kitchen\u2019s clean, floors vacuumed, refrigerator restocked.
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\nFor the two instances of leaving three of her kids alone, Belen gets charged with six misdemeanor counts of child neglect.
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\nWhile those charges are pending, child welfare officials decide to let Belen\u2019s children remain in the home.
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\nOn April 9, a social worker visits Belen and sees no cause for concern. The home is fine. The children appear happy. Belen has a new job, as a hostess at a Chinese restaurant, and says she\u2019ll be putting her kids in day care.\n

20.
\n April 11, 2013, 3:49 p.m.
\n 7750 West Hicks Street, West Allis<\/h3>\nAngelica Belen<\/strong> wakes up around 6 a.m.
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\nThen she wakes up Naya, Adrian and Alex.
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\nShe makes oatmeal for breakfast, then gets everyone ready, faces washed, teeth brushed. Naya wants to wear her blue tights, but Belen can\u2019t find them, so Naya wears pants instead. <\/a>At risk of sounding like a broken record, I\u2019ll reiterate that I find the details you weave in to be quite striking. Did these all come from Belen\u2019s memory?<\/span>Most of these details do come from Belen, but as told to police, in interviews on this same day and the next day. So she\u2019s reconstructing this day in the immediate aftermath, while her memory is fresh. We listened to the five-plus hours of audio from the interviews.<\/span><\/span>
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\nAround 7:30 they pile into the minivan, all four of them. (Belen\u2019s youngest child is with his dad today.) Belen drives east into Milwaukee, to Naya\u2019s school, Saint Lucas Lutheran. The trip\u2019s just 6 miles, but with city traffic it can take 20 minutes. It\u2019s cold and wet. Naya doesn\u2019t want to get out of the van. But there\u2019s a place to pull up, close to the school\u2019s doors. Belen drives up and Naya goes in.
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\nThen it\u2019s 6 miles back.
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\nBelen and her twin boys get home after 8. They watch a movie, \u201cLilo & Stitch,\u201d for \u201cthe thousandth time,\u201d as Belen puts it.
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\nAround noon, a social worker comes by to check on the family. The kids are watching another movie, \u201cStardust.\u201d The social worker stays at the house for 30, maybe 40 minutes.
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\nAfter she leaves, Belen makes lunch. Macaroni and cheese. She makes two boxes because they always eat more than one.
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\nThe boys watch \u201cLilo & Stitch\u201d again while Belen changes clothes, preparing for work later today. This will be just her third shift at Lychee Garden, a restaurant she\u2019d been going to since she was a child. She\u2019s scheduled for 4 to 7.
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\nBelen changes the boys\u2019 diapers. She changes Adrian\u2019s shirt, because he got macaroni and cheese on it. Around 2:30 she puts them in the van, and it\u2019s back to school, to pick up Naya, then back home again, pulling in sometime after 3.
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\nWhen she worked two nights ago, Belen found neighbors, neighbors she barely knew, to watch her kids. Going forward she\u2019ll have subsidized day care; her boss has already signed the form, verifying her employment. She\u2019ll be dropping those papers off tomorrow at the county office.
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\nBut for today, she\u2019s been unable to find anyone to babysit. At 3:47 she tries one more time, she calls one of her sisters, but the sister can\u2019t.
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\nBelen gives her kids hugs and kisses, tells them she loves them and promises to bring home almond cookies from the restaurant.
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\nPlay with your toys, she tells them. When I get home, we\u2019ll have spaghetti for dinner.
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\nShe puts Naya, Adrian and Alex in the boys\u2019 bedroom, the one just above the kitchen. She closes the door.
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\nAnd locks it.
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\nAt 3:49, she drives away. <\/a>At this point, as readers, we can get the sense that tension and drama are building into a narrative climax. Can you share more behind your thinking for this placement? Also, why did you include exact time stamps?<\/span>The level of detail in this chapter signals to the reader: This day is important. Something\u2019s coming. And it\u2019s bad.<\/em> Some readers \u2014 certainly not all, but some \u2014 are going to scroll back up to the first chapter and see that the 911 call which started our story took place on this very day, at 5:19 p.m. So they can calculate: the fire gets reported an hour and a half after Belen drives away. We also use small echoes to help readers link that first chapter to this one. For example, we use the same, short sentence, \u201cIt\u2019s cold and wet,\u201d in both chapters. The exact time stamps serve multiple purposes. In a story where most of the attribution comes in a source box at the end, it helps sometimes to reestablish authority with readers \u2014 to let them know that we\u2019ve got this locked down. We know Belen called her sister at 3:47 because it was in the sister\u2019s phone log. We know Belen drove away at 3:49 because a neighbor\u2019s surveillance camera captured the moment. The exact time stamps also help readers to picture, in their minds, Belen\u2019s day in relationship to events elsewhere \u2014 namely, what we describe in the next chapter, when Brunner on this same day fails to show up in court to be arraigned on charges of violating building-maintenance codes.<\/span><\/span>\n

21.
\n April 11, 2013, 10:48 a.m.
\n Milwaukee Municipal Court<\/h3>\nThe same day,<\/strong> at 10:48 a.m., as Angelica Belen\u2019s twins are watching \u201cLilo & Stitch,\u201d or perhaps by now they\u2019re watching \u201cStardust,\u201d Todd Brunner is supposed to be in Milwaukee Municipal Court.
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\nThe court\u2019s docket has two cases in which Brunner has been charged with 14 counts of violating building-maintenance codes. One count is for not fixing a rental home\u2019s porch steps. Another is for not fixing a foundation to keep out rodents.
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\nHis arraignment is this morning. But Brunner fails to show.
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\nThe judge finds Brunner guilty of all 14 counts and fines him $14,050. If Brunner fails to pay, he could be jailed for 171 days.
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\nThat sounds serious. But the threat is hollow.
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\nThe year before, city inspectors ordered Brunner to fix defective electrical wiring at one rental, defective electrical fixtures at another and a defective electrical outlet at a third. When Brunner failed to show he had fixed anything, the city charged him, adding three code violations to a long and growing list.
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\nIn 2013, Brunner will be called to court to face 134 code violations. He won\u2019t contest any and will be found guilty of all. He\u2019ll be fined more than $100,000 and threatened with more than three years in jail. (Nine years later, he will have paid less than half and served not one day.) <\/a>I\u2019m flabbergasted by this parenthetical. How is it possible that he paid less than half?<\/span>When it comes to enforcement, the municipal court has a way of letting landlords off easy. Todd Brunner isn\u2019t alone in this. See Chapter 32 and Todd\u2019s son Shawn.<\/span><\/span>
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\nOn this very day, the city has at least 11 warrants out for Brunner\u2019s arrest, for failure to pay his fines. Not one warrant will ever be executed. In this, Brunner is the beneficiary of a practice meant to help the poor<\/a>. Municipal court, not wishing to jail low-income people who can\u2019t afford to pay fines and traffic tickets, generally allows people with warrants to have at least four contacts with police before being arrested.
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\nAt 1:18 p.m., two and a half hours after Brunner fails to appear in court, a deed is recorded at the Milwaukee County Assessor\u2019s Office showing Brunner no longer owns the house at 7750 West Hicks Street in West Allis. That\u2019s the house where, at about this time, Belen is cleaning up after lunch, or perhaps getting ready for work.
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\nBrunner, the foreclosure king, lost the home six weeks ago in foreclosure to Tri City National Bank.
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\nIn online records, the new deed will take a while to show up. So this evening, when a member of the West Allis Fire Department searches for the home\u2019s owner, Brunner\u2019s name will still appear. The firefighter will call Brunner, get no answer, then leave a message and get no response.\n

22.
\n April 11, 2013, 7:20 p.m.
\n 7750 West Hicks Street, West Allis<\/h3>\nAngelica Belen<\/strong> clocks out at the restaurant at 7:06 p.m., then drives home. Nearing her house, she sees firetrucks. A block from her street, she sees a police officer. He tells her a house is on fire. Which one, she asks. He doesn\u2019t know the address, but with each detail he offers, the north side of the street, the far side of the alley, realization, then panic, set in.
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\nShe jumps out of her car, leaving it where it is, the door open, and runs toward her house, in ballet flats, splashing through puddles, praying, please, God, not this, not my kids. People try to stop her, but she runs past. In her yard she finds a firefighter and asks, frantically, about her kids.
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\nThere\u2019s nobody in there, the firefighter tells her.
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\nWhile Belen was at work, firefighters from West Allis and nearby cities had chased the fire through the home. Discovering a locked door on the second floor, they\u2019d used a Halligan tool to force it open. But they couldn\u2019t search the room; the smoke was thick, the floor unstable.
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\nBelen tells firefighters that she believes her children are inside. She says her sister was with them and may be inside, too.
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\nA firefighter climbs a ladder up the side of the house and goes through a window into the boys\u2019 bedroom. Underneath a dresser he sees what appears to be a doll\u2019s hand.
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\nHe lifts the dresser and says, \u201cOh my God.\u201d
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\nFirefighters find all three children dead, their bodies in a corner, touching.\n

23.
\n April 11, 2013, 11:29 p.m.
\n West Allis<\/h3>\nDetective Thomas<\/strong> Kulinski turns on the tape recorder and waits for Angelica Belen. It\u2019s 11:29 p.m., about four hours after Belen learned of her daughter\u2019s and sons\u2019 deaths.
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\n\u201cHow you doing? Doing OK?\u201d he asks as she enters.
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\nKulinski interviewed Belen once already, earlier tonight. She\u2019d told him that when she\u2019d left for work today, she had left her kids at home with her sister Nicole. But police now know that\u2019s a lie. They\u2019ve interviewed Nicole, and Nicole has detailed her day, and the police have corroborated her timeline.
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\nKulinski, a former Marine with a graduate degree in theology, reads Belen her rights. Then he tells her: \u201cYour sister wasn\u2019t there. I can prove beyond a shadow of a doubt that your sister wasn\u2019t there.\u201d
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\nHe asks Belen, \u201cWho was with the kids when you left for work?\u201d
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\nFor 13 seconds, there is silence. Then Belen says, \u201cNo one, sir.\u201d
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\nShe tells him that she had no one to babysit, that she\u2019d called around, with no luck, that she\u2019d just started her job, she needed the job, and if she didn\u2019t show, she would have been fired.
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\n\u201cThere was nobody in your life at all that could have watched your kids?\u201d
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\n\u201cI have nobody.\u201d
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\n\u201cWhy didn\u2019t you build a better support system for yourself?\u201d Kulinski asks.
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\n\u201cWhat support system? These people were never there for me.\u201d
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\nBelen tells the detective: \u201cThere\u2019s been nobody in my life. For 24 years I\u2019ve been either beaten, abused, left alone to fend for myself. That\u2019s, that\u2019s what I\u2019ve had.\u201d\n

24.
\n April 12, 2013, 4:49 a.m.
\n West Allis<\/h3>\n\u201cDon\u2019t make<\/strong> me look. Please don\u2019t make me.\u201d
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\nAngelica Belen is being interviewed by Detective Nick Pye, who has brought photographs to the cellblock where she\u2019s now being held. Pye says the medical examiner is having trouble telling her sons apart, so they want her help. One boy died with his face away from the flames. Pye would like her to say if it is Alex or Adrian.
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\n\u201cNo, no, no, no, no, no, please don\u2019t,\u201d she says.
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\nShe describes her sons, to help distinguish them. Adrian was taller, his hair curlier. He sucked his thumb, and his bottom teeth, the ones in the middle, were pushed in.
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\n\u201cYou\u2019re not going to show me the pictures, please don\u2019t,\u201d she says. \u201cPlease, sir, please, I\u2019m begging you, please. Please.\u201d
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\nAs Belen speaks, her breath is short. She sounds panicked, exhausted. But Pye expects tears. After 18 minutes, he says, \u201cHow come you\u2019re not crying?\u201d She tells him she has cried and screamed, horrified at what she\u2019s done, and now she\u2019s numb. She says she wants to remember her kids the way they were. She asks the detective if he\u2019d want to see his kids this way. <\/a>This whole scene is horrifying.<\/span><\/span>
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\nAfter a half hour, Pye tells her, \u201cI\u2019m not going to force you to, I mean, OK?\u201d When she starts to waver, he says: \u201cI\u2019ll tell you what. Your choice. I\u2019ll slide it face down under the door, OK, and you can take as brief a glimpse \u2026\u201d
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\n\u201cNo, no. I can\u2019t, I can\u2019t do that alone,\u201d she says.
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\nSo he stays. \u201cYou ready?\u201d he says. She looks at the photo.
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\n\u201cAlex,\u201d she says, and he turns off the recorder as she gasps and wails. <\/a>What was your process for acquiring these tapes? Was law enforcement cooperative when it came to providing materials?<\/span>The audio of the interviews and police photos of the scene were included in our records request, and West Allis police provided them along with the written reports. They did not fight us on this.<\/span><\/span>\n

25.
\n April 12, 2013, 6:45 p.m.
\n West Allis<\/h3>\nDetectives Pye<\/strong> and Kulinski interview Belen for what is now the fifth time. This interview lasts more than two and a half hours.
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\nBelen talks of leaving her children alone. She never wanted to do what her mother did, to hurt her kids. But \u201cin the end,\u201d she says, \u201cI did exactly what she did, only three times worse.\u201d She didn\u2019t want to lose her job, Belen says. She\u2019d told her kids that with her first paycheck, she\u2019d buy them toys. Naya wanted a Barbie Dreamhouse. The boys wanted action figures \u2014 for Adrian, Batman, for Alex, Captain America.
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\nThe detectives want Belen to admit locking the bedroom door. \u201cI swear to you, I swear to you, on everything that is holy, I would never lock my kids in the room,\u201d she says. They offer her an out: By locking her kids in, she thought she was keeping them safe. The kids couldn\u2019t get to the kitchen and play with knives. They couldn\u2019t leave the house and wander into traffic. Belen refuses their offer.
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\nFinally, after an hour, Pye screams at her, \u201cHow did they get locked in the room!\u201d
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\n\u201cI don\u2019t know!\u201d Belen screams back.
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\nSoon after, she gives in. She admits turning the lock. \u201cBecause it kept them safe,\u201d she says. She tells the detectives that when she was a kid, she was left alone and nothing happened, \u201ceverything was fine.\u201d
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\nDid her kids try to open a window? Belen asks, at one point.
\n
\n\u201cI think they did. Because there were some toys laying on the ground,\u201d Pye says.
\n
\n\u201cShe tried,\u201d Belen says. \u201cShe tried, she did what I told her to do. She tried. My sweet baby girl, she tried.\u201d
\n
\nDeath certificates show the children died from inhalation of soot and products of combustion.
\n
\nThe detectives tell Belen that with the high level of carbon monoxide in the children\u2019s blood, the kids would have become numb. Euphoric, even. \u201cYou just close your eyes,\u201d Pye says. \u201cYou go to sleep,\u201d Kulinski says.
\n
\n\u201cThe fire didn\u2019t get them first?\u201d Belen asks.
\n
\n\u201cNo,\u201d Kulinski says. <\/a>At odds with the earlier dialogue from Detective Pye, this part strikes me as rather generous, or gracious, for him to share with Belen.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nPye tells Belen about electrical problems in the house. He describes the power hookup to one bathroom as \u201cabout the most careless thing I\u2019ve ever seen in my life.\u201d
\n
\n\u201cThe fire is not your fault,\u201d he says.
\n
\nKulinski talks about how old the house is and says, \u201cWhat are the odds that it would burn down the three hours you\u2019re gone?\u201d
\n
\nThere\u2019s no predicting how things will turn out, Kulinski tells Belen. Some jurors could understand why she did what she did. Some could sympathize with what she\u2019s endured. And some jurors, he says, \u201cwill look at you as the devil and want to take you out back and shoot you.\u201d\n

26.
\n April 15, 2013
\n 7750 West Hicks Street, West Allis<\/h3>\nA lieutenant from<\/strong> the West Allis Fire Department meets with an electrical engineer at the house in West Allis where the children had died four days before. They are among 12 people from four departments \u2014 federal, state and local \u2014 investigating the fire\u2019s cause.
\n
\nThey start outside, at a pole-mounted transformer. Then they follow the electricity, looking for evidence of arcing, where a current may have jumped off course. They examine the service panel in the basement, then trace the circuits running up, removing drywall and flooring to ensure they don\u2019t lose track of each current\u2019s path.
\n
\nUltimately, their investigation takes them to the kitchen and to a space, 1 foot deep behind a wall, filled with plumbing, heat vents and wiring. Here, they find their answer. The fire, they conclude, started with a failure in the circuit that powered the light above the kitchen sink.
\n
\nThe state classifies the fire\u2019s cause as \u201caccidental.\u201d
\n
\nNo one is charged in connection with the fire\u2019s ignition. Only Belen is charged, for what came after. Prosecutors charge her with three counts of criminal neglect of a child, resulting in death.\n

27.
\n June 27, 2013
\n Waukesha County Court Commissioner\u2019s Office<\/h3>\nAn employee with<\/strong> Badger Process Service Inc. goes to Brunner\u2019s home on May 31, 2013, to serve an order requiring Brunner to answer questions about money he owes the city of Milwaukee.
\n
\nNo one answers the door. She leaves a card. She returns on June 4 and finds the door open. But no one answers. On June 6 she returns at 10:10 a.m. and again at 8:30 p.m., and both times, \u201csomeone is home but won\u2019t answer,\u201d she later writes. On June 9 she sees Brunner\u2019s wife outside. \u201cI\u2019m not accepting anything,\u201d Brunner\u2019s wife says, to which the server says, \u201cThat\u2019s OK,\u201d and lays the papers at her feet, which does the job.
\n
\nBrunner shows up on June 27 to answer questions from a lawyer. But Brunner becomes \u201cargumentative,\u201d standing and swearing and asking why he has to be there, according to a court commissioner\u2019s affidavit. Sit down and stop swearing, the commissioner tells Brunner. Brunner does neither; he shouts and waves his arms. The commissioner orders him out, but Brunner refuses, so the commissioner asks his secretary to notify the police, at which point Brunner leaves, \u201cusing profanity all the way out the door.\u201d
\n
\nBrunner gets held in contempt, and a new hearing is scheduled, for which Brunner fails to appear, leading to another motion for contempt, for which Brunner must be served, leading another process server to his door, where, twice, the server hears a dog barking but gets no answer.\n

28.
\n September 27, 2013
\n Milwaukee County Circuit Court<\/h3>\nTwenty-one years<\/strong> after Angelica Belen\u2019s mother was sentenced in the death of Marisol, Belen appears for sentencing in the deaths of her three children. The prosecutor is the same. <\/a>Wow. I have the chills.<\/span><\/span> It\u2019s Mark Williams, an assistant DA with thick, gray hair, who, according to one newspaper story, has likely prosecuted more homicides<\/a> than anyone in the country.
\n
\nColleagues call him a \u201cmachine.\u201d Williams, in another newspaper story, says that he works from morning to midnight and that prosecuting homicides is his \u201cdream job.\u201d Before he\u2019s through, he will prosecute more than 700.
\n
\nBelen has pleaded guilty to all three felony counts of child neglect resulting in death. Each count carries a maximum prison sentence of 15 years.
\n
\nThe defense submits a memorandum from a sentencing mitigation specialist who writes, \u201cMs. Belen unfortunately experienced perhaps one of the most tragic developmental histories that this writer has come across in twenty years of working with indigent, criminal defendants.\u201d Belen\u2019s crime, he writes, \u201cwas an offense of omission rather than commission. \u2026 Additionally, there has never been any report of Ms. Belen abusing her children physically, emotionally, or verbally.\u201d
\n
\nMembers of Belen\u2019s family address the sentencing judge, some to condemn, others to defend.
\n
\nTwo of Belen\u2019s sisters describe the pain of losing their nephews and niece, and blame Belen. \u201cTime will not heal these wounds,\u201d one sister says. Belen \u201chad so much help and support around her\u201d but turned it away, this sister says.
\n
\nAngelica\u2019s aunt \u2014 who was in court when Angelica\u2019s mother was sentenced, in the hospital when Angelica was born and now in court as Angelica is sentenced \u2014 says: \u201cShe was ill-equipped and overwhelmed. And it\u2019s not true when people say they were falling all over themselves, offering to help her. That\u2019s not true.\u201d
\n
\nThis same aunt, in a letter to the judge, described her niece\u2019s history of being abused: \u201cPeople wonder why Angie didn\u2019t reach out for help. But I have to ask, would you? The system and the important people in her life failed her over and over. She learned as a young girl not to trust anyone.\u201d <\/a>I appreciate the variety of perspectives and voices you include here.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nWilliams, the prosecutor, laces into the Bureau of Child Welfare for leaving the children with Belen despite all the reports of her neglect. \u201cAnd this house, we \u2014 everybody knew that this house was not exactly in good repair,\u201d he says. \u201cIt was possible that anything could have happened.\u201d
\n
\nWhen Belen\u2019s mother was sentenced, Williams had said of her crime, \u201cI don\u2019t understand it.\u201d Now, he says of Belen\u2019s crime, \u201cIt\u2019s beyond comprehension.\u201d <\/a>This dialogue reveals the prosecutor\u2019s lack of knowledge and literacy on trauma.<\/span>There are such striking parallels between Belen\u2019s sentencing hearing and the sentencing hearing for Belen\u2019s mother, two decades earlier. In this chapter we drop in an echo, so readers can hear it. In the early 1990s\u00a0 a judge told Belen\u2019s mother: \u201cYou came from a terrible background. I feel for you.\u201d Then he says: \u201cYour mother was mentally ill. Are you mentally ill? I don\u2019t think so. You are weak.\u201d In 2013 a different judge tells Belen: \u201cI understand your \u2014 your terrible, terrible upbringing. I know that you\u2019ve been victimized yourself growing up. But there shouldn\u2019t be this cycle.\u201d<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<\/strong>He asks the judge to sentence Belen to a \u201cperiod of substantial confinement\u201d for each of the three counts. And he asks that the sentences run back-to-back, saying that\u2019s what each child deserves.
\n
\nBelen, offered the chance to speak, tells the court: \u201cI would like to say that I\u2019m sorry to my children, my beautiful Adrian, Alexis and Nayeli. I\u2019m sorry they will never grow up. I\u2019m sorry I will never see you graduate from high school and get married and have children of your own. I\u2019m sorry that my decision that day took that from you.\u201d
\n
\nBelen apologizes to her sisters, to her aunt, to the police and firefighters. She says of her children, \u201cThey were everything to me, and I loved them so much.\u201d
\n
\nAt the hearing\u2019s end, the judge, Jeffrey Wagner, tells Belen: \u201cI don\u2019t think there\u2019s anybody in this courtroom that would disagree that you loved your children very much.\u201d
\n
\n\u201cI understand your \u2014 your terrible, terrible upbringing. I know that you\u2019ve been victimized yourself growing up,\u201d he tells her. \u201cBut there shouldn\u2019t be this cycle.\u201d
\n
\nHe gives her six years in prison on each count \u2014 and orders the sentences to run back-to-back.
\n
\nBelen, sentenced to 18 years, gets sent to Taycheedah, the same prison where her mother was sent.\n

\n29.
\nOctober 7, 2014
\nPewaukee<\/h3>\nA federal grand<\/strong> jury returns an 11-page indictment against Todd Brunner and his son Shawn for financial misdeeds. To reach this point, the government has expended enormous resources. Here\u2019s the investigation and charges, by the numbers:
\n
\nAgencies involved in the investigation: 4 (FBI, IRS, U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development, Milwaukee Police Department)
\n
\nBoxes of evidence collected in search of Todd Brunner\u2019s home: 22
\n
\nDocuments collected: nearly 46,000
\n
\nFelony charges against Shawn Brunner: 4
\n
\nMaximum years he could face (all charges, combined): 95
\n
\nFelony charges against Todd Brunner: 15
\n
\nMaximum years he could face (all charges, combined): 350
\n
\nThe indictment accuses father and son of both bank fraud and bankruptcy fraud. <\/a>I\u2019m struck by the mother\/daughter link you draw with Belen and her mother, and the father\/son link here with Brunner and his son.<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<\/strong>Todd Brunner used invoices that were duplicated, forged, altered or inflated to make draws on that $2 million construction loan for the senior center, the indictment alleges. With his son, he used three shell companies to hide cars, boats and more than 100 parcels of real estate, federal authorities say. The value of those hidden assets, according to the indictment, totals about $7 million.
\n
\nBrunner also \u201cfraudulently concealed\u201d the engines from El Diablo and claimed to have no income when his rental properties were generating, on average, more than $30,000 a month, the indictment alleges.
\n
\nIn a press release, U.S. attorney James Santelle says Brunner\u2019s crimes undermine the operations of bankruptcy court and \u201ccompromise the strength of our financial institutions.\u201d
\n
\nRather than arrest the Brunners, federal agents try to serve a summons, instructing them to appear in court. Papers in hand, U.S. marshals go to Todd Brunner\u2019s home in Pewaukee. The lights are on. A dog is barking. But no one answers.
\n
\nAfter multiple failed attempts, government officials conclude they\u2019re being dodged. They get an arrest warrant. Early on a Monday morning, U.S. marshals, heavily armed, backed up by three other police agencies, bang on Brunner\u2019s door, get no answer, then break the door down. They come out with father and son.
\n
\nAccompanied by officers, Todd Brunner walks from the house to a sheriff\u2019s van. His steps are slow and labored. That afternoon, he gets arraigned. Then he\u2019s released, on condition he post $2,000 cash bail. Outside the courthouse he gets into a black pickup and drives away.\n

\n30.
\nDecember 10, 2015
\nMadison, Wisconsin<\/h3>\nLocal governments<\/strong> see it as a threat to tenants.
\n
\nA bill being debated by state lawmakers in Madison will gut the ability of cities to inspect rental properties. And, say local officials from across the state, it will prevent them from forcing owners to fix code violations before renters move in.
\n
\nOne state legislative sponsor says the bill \u201cpromotes regulatory fairness\u201d by treating all properties alike, whether occupied by renters or owners.
\n
\nBut Milwaukee says the bill\u2019s prohibitions \u201cstrike at the heart of what a local government does \u2014 to protect the health, safety and welfare of its citizens.\u201d Its inspection program, in place since 2010, has allowed the city to target areas with higher-than-average building-code complaints, officials write. The city of Beloit also opposes the bill. This year, in two months alone, its rental inspection program found 33 units unfit for inhabitation.
\n
\nThe bill passes the Republican-controlled Assembly along party lines, 60-31. The Senate gives its approval, and Gov. Scott Walker signs the bill into law.
\n
\nThe bill is one of five major, landlord-friendly laws passed between 2011 and 2019.
\n
\nAmong lawmakers voting on these measures, about 1 in 5<\/a> are themselves landlords or property managers. <\/a>You spend a lot of time positing the landlord and the renter as diametrically opposed, in terms of their interests, throughout the story. But here you present that more explicitly. What guided your placement of this short section about the policy landscape?<\/span>This section on the state\u2019s landlord-friendly laws has more emotional power here, coming as it does after the fatal fire and while Belen is in prison. These laws, passed between 2011 and 2019, bookend the fire. And these kinds of laws, gutting the ability of local governments to make rental properties safe, will increase the chances of more such fires in the future.<\/span><\/span>\n

\n31.
\nJune 30, 2017
\nMilwaukee<\/h3>\nAt times in a<\/strong> wheelchair, at times using two canes, Todd Brunner makes his way from the federal courthouse\u2019s entrance to the courtroom where he will be sentenced. It takes two hours. In the hallway, his screams of pain draw courthouse employees from their offices.
\n
\nIt\u2019s been nearly five years since the FBI searched his home and nearly three since he was indicted. There\u2019s been no trial \u2014 Brunner took a plea deal \u2014 but still the case has dragged, due in part to Brunner\u2019s obesity and poor health.
\n
\nBrunner\u2019s lawyer argued, unsuccessfully, to let Brunner appear at one hearing by video, citing his lack of mobility. Transporting him to court would cost $3,000 to $4,000, the lawyer estimated. Then there was the matter of Brunner\u2019s mental fitness. Brunner suffered a stroke, but, following a psychiatric evaluation, both sides agreed he was competent to enter a guilty plea.
\n
\nBrunner has pleaded guilty to three felonies: two for bank fraud and one for concealing assets from bankruptcy court. Fraud deemed sophisticated can yield a longer sentence. But Brunner\u2019s lawyer, a public defender, argues his client was, as a criminal, incompetent: \u201cThe sophistication level was bordering on the juvenile.\u201d
\n
\nAs his criminal case lingered, Brunner kept making news. In 2016, the Journal Sentinel revealed that Milwaukee Municipal Court keeps a list, called \u201cEgregious Defendants,\u201d of landlords with delinquent fines for code violations. Brunner was the list\u2019s No. 2, owing $161,019.
\n
\nIn the courtroom, awaiting sentencing, Brunner sobs. His lawyer says he has cried at the sight of Brunner\u2019s agony. \u201cMr. Brunner shouldn\u2019t be in court. He shouldn\u2019t have to endure that, that long walk,\u201d he tells the judge. \u201cIt hurts my soul to see someone like Mr. Brunner suffer this much.\u201d The lawyer argues against any prison time for Brunner, saying, \u201cI don\u2019t believe Mr. Brunner is long for this world.\u201d Brunner\u2019s existence, he says, is now confined to \u201cliving in his bed.\u201d
\n
\nFederal guidelines suggest a sentence of between 37 months and 46 months. <\/a>My jaw dropped here. This is so brief, compared to Belen.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nThe prosecutor, who says of Brunner, \u201cEvery time he turned around, he did something that was intended to deceive someone,\u201d asks for a sentence of two years. <\/a>And again here!<\/span><\/span>\u00a0<\/strong>
\n
\nShe says Brunner has \u201cmorbid obesity,\u201d which can be treated in a prison medical facility. She describes Brunner\u2019s various frauds: the falsified invoices, the hiding of money from bankruptcy court. Brunner hid so much cash, she says, that a bank employee had to help Brunner\u2019s son shove a stuffed safety deposit box back into place.
\n
\nAs the prosecutor makes her case, the judge, J.P. Stadtmueller, interrupts her. \u201cYou\u2019ve got to put this case in context,\u201d he says. Brunner committed his crimes during a time of lax financial oversight, when \u201cit was go, go, go, go, go, and we don\u2019t need to get verification for anything.\u201d
\n
\n\u201cPerhaps, but that doesn\u2019t excuse what he did,\u201d the prosecutor says.
\n
\n\u201cI\u2019m not suggesting that he be excused. What I\u2019m suggesting is, this case is the product of bent rules and blind eyes. Make no mistake about it!\u201d
\n
\nBefore announcing the sentence, the judge asks Brunner if he\u2019d like to say anything. \u201cNo, sir,\u201d Brunner says.
\n
\nThe judge says, \u201cObviously, the core facts of this case are not much more than a very simple fraud.\u201d
\n
\nBrunner is \u201cbarely, barely ambulatory,\u201d the judge says. He now weighs more than 600 pounds. To put him in prison, the judge says, \u201cborders on the unconscionable.\u201d <\/a>Why did you continue to nod to details about Brenner\u2019s weight and physical condition?<\/span>We made reference to Brunner\u2019s size when it related to a particular scene or moment. A deputy describes Brunner\u2019s size as imposing in Chapter 9, a chapter that details Brunner\u2019s run-ins with neighbors. In Chapters 8 and 31, Brunner\u2019s size and his physical condition are cited by his wife and then by his lawyer as a basis for getting him out of jail early and then for sparing him from any prison time. Belen\u2019s long and horrific history of trauma does little to spare her from a harsh prison sentence, while Brunner\u2019s size and physical condition are used more than once to grant him mercy.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nThe judge sentences Brunner to probation \u2014 two years on each of the three felony convictions.
\n
\nRather than lasting six years, Brunner\u2019s probation will last two. The judge orders the probationary periods to run concurrently instead of back-to-back.
\n
\nThe judge says: \u201cObviously, there is no fine. He doesn\u2019t even begin to have the resources to pay.\u201d <\/a>This is striking.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nAfter the sentencing, Milwaukee police Detective Elisabeth Wallich gets a phone call. A fellow detective gives her the news. Together, they investigated Brunner for more than six years. When she hears Brunner\u2019s getting no time, she\u2019s devastated. \u201cAll of this work went for nothing,\u201d she\u2019ll say later. \u201cWe often said, \u2018If I were a criminal, I\u2019d be a white-collar criminal, because nothing ever happens to them.\u2019\u201d
\n
\n(A reporter recently emailed questions to Stadtmueller, asking if he felt his sentence held Brunner accountable. The judge declined to be interviewed.)\n

\n32.
\nFebruary 12, 2018
\nMilwaukee<\/h3>\nIn pursuing felony<\/strong> fraud charges against Todd and Shawn Brunner, the federal government viewed the son as more sympathetic. Shawn did what he did, one prosecutor said, \u201cbecause he loved his father.\u201d
\n
\nNow, in early 2018, the government drops its charges against Shawn as part of a deferred prosecution agreement. By this point he is 27.
\n
\nIf there is a cycle in Angelica Belen\u2019s family, the same goes for Todd Brunner\u2019s. <\/a>This feels like the line where you most directly state what you have concluded throughout the course of your reporting. It almost feels like it could be an apt dek or pull-quote or summary for the story. Why did you wait to say this outright?<\/span>It goes back to the idea of letting readers reach conclusions on their own, rather than having us hand them a takeaway. But here, we felt like this was worth stating because of what follows. We wanted to make clear why we were writing about Brunner\u2019s son. He\u2019s picking up where his father left off, and the cycle of building-code violations goes on.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nOn Facebook, Shawn calls his father \u201cthe wisest man I know.\u201d
\n
\nIn 2014, Todd Brunner transferred 24 properties to his son.
\n
\nIn 2015, one of those rental homes caught fire. The ignition sources included a floor lamp plugged into an outlet, according to Milwaukee Fire Department records.
\n
\nIn 2016, a sheriff\u2019s deputy arrested Shawn on a charge of drunk driving. Shawn told the deputy he was weaving because his glasses were dirty, according to police records. Shawn was convicted and ordered to pay $1,000.
\n
\nIn 2017, 2018, 2019 and 2020, judgments or tax warrants are filed in circuit court against Shawn for money owed. One, for delinquent state taxes, is for $456,079.12. (Shawn did not respond to requests for an interview for this story.)
\n
\nIn 2021, Shawn is found guilty of 80 counts of violating Milwaukee\u2019s municipal code for problems with his rental properties ranging from black mold to a missing stair handrail to noncompliance with the rules requiring smoke alarms. He is fined about $20,000 \u2014 and as of this week, still owed more than half.\n

\n33.
\nDecember 10, 2018
\nDelafield, Wisconsin<\/em>\n<\/h4>\nA little after<\/strong> midnight, deputies get dispatched to a call of a 61-year-old man who has fallen in his home in Delafield, west of Milwaukee. It\u2019s Todd Brunner, in a bathrobe, on his living room floor.
\n
\nAs police and emergency responders try to help Brunner, he becomes \u201crowdy and boisterous,\u201d according to court records. \u201cFuck off,\u201d he says. He hits a firefighter on the arm and tells a deputy he is going to kill him, court records say. Brunner gets charged with two felonies: battery to an emergency rescue worker and threatening a law enforcement officer. In a plea deal, he\u2019s convicted of the first while the second is dismissed.
\n
\nThe battery conviction carries a maximum sentence of six years.
\n
\nIn November of 2020, Brunner appears for sentencing and tells the judge: \u201cIf this happened, which apparently it did, I fell and hit my head. I don\u2019t remember it. It\u2019s not like me.\u201d The judge, calling this a \u201cserious offense,\u201d sentences Brunner to a year\u2019s probation and payment of $1,158.
\n
\nIn 2017, when sentenced on the federal fraud charges, Brunner received two years\u2019 probation. The judge attached 17 conditions, one being, \u201cThe defendant shall not commit another federal, state, or local crime.\u201d Brunner committed this battery within those two years. But it took eight months for the authorities in Waukesha County to charge Brunner. By that time, his federal probation had ended.\n

\n34.
\nMarch 31, 2020
\nMilwaukee<\/em>\n<\/h3>\nAngelica Belen<\/strong> sues Todd Brunner. Her lawsuit, filed in federal court on March 31, 2020, accuses Brunner of negligent upkeep of the rental home in West Allis, resulting in her children\u2019s deaths.
\n
\nUnable to find a lawyer, she ends up representing herself.
\n
\nBelen writes her seven-page complaint by hand, in block letters. She attaches exhibits: the notice of code violations sent to Brunner (\u201ctwo outlets east side of house\u201d) and investigative reports that describe the basement\u2019s exposed wiring and conclude the fire\u2019s cause was electrical.
\n
\nBelen also sues Guardian Investment, the real estate company put in charge of managing the house, and Tri City National Bank. After Tri City foreclosed on the house, a bank representative, accompanied by a Guardian employee, did a walk-through inspection, Belen writes. Neither \u201cexpressed any concerns\u201d to Belen about the house\u2019s condition, her lawsuit says. This was in February 2013, two months before the fire.
\n
\nWhen called recently by the Journal Sentinel, a Tri City spokesman said he would research this but then never got back. Rick Geis, of Guardian Investment, told a reporter that he couldn\u2019t recall what repairs, if any, his company may have ordered. \u201cIt was a while ago,\u201d Geis said. \u201cAnd unfortunately it brings back bad memories and I don\u2019t want to talk about it.\u201d
\n
\n\u201cI did nothing wrong,\u201d he said.
\n
\nIn November of 2020, eight months after Belen\u2019s lawsuit was filed, her lawsuit is dismissed.
\n
\nThe federal court lacks jurisdiction, a judge determines. In tossing the suit, the judge \u2014 the same judge who earlier sentenced Brunner to probation on the federal fraud charges while imposing no fine \u2014 says Belen must pay a $350 filing fee. He orders the funds be collected from her prison trust account.\n

\n35.
\nOctober 8, 2022
\nWisconsin\u2019s state prison system<\/h3>\nSitting across from<\/strong> a reporter, the sun glittering off razor wire through the windows behind her, Angelica Belen says she feels the safest she\u2019s ever felt.
\n
\n\u201cPrison saved my life,\u201d she says.
\n
\nIt\u2019s been more than nine years since the fire, much of it spent in a cell with little more than memories and books. In comments still online, Belen is vilified, with people writing: \u201cstupid, ignorant whorebag\u201d; \u201cselfish maggot\u201d; \u201cburn her at the stake.\u201d
\n
\nBelen clings to her pastor\u2019s words after her children died. \u201cThe Lord is close to the brokenhearted,\u201d he told her, quoting Psalm 34. \u201cHe saves those who are crushed in spirit.\u201d It was what she needed to hear. Now, at 34, halfway through her sentence, she credits God for getting her through.
\n
\nSince the Journal Sentinel reached out to Belen in February, she\u2019s shared details of her life in emails, phone calls and visits. <\/a>Here, you zoom out and share a bit more context about your reporting process and how Belen fits into this. Why did you do so at this point in the story?<\/span>It\u2019s really sort of a bridge to set up what follows. Her quotes and reflections below come from a mix of communications with Raquel: prison visits, phone calls, emails. She\u2019s been open about her life, the good and the bad. We also wanted to make clear that this story originated with a reporter (Raquel) reaching out to Belen, not with Belen reaching out to a reporter.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\n\u201cI am to blame for my poor choices,\u201d she says. \u201cI want to be able to atone.\u201d <\/a>I\u2019m struck by the contrast: Belen takes responsibility for her choices, while Brunner does the opposite.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nThrough counseling and a peer mentorship program, she\u2019s processed the hurt she\u2019s suffered and caused. She\u2019s forgiven her abusers. Now she\u2019s a mentor herself. In recent evaluations, staff called her an \u201cexcellent example\u201d to others and \u201cextremely engaging and positive.\u201d As a certified peer specialist, Belen was recently transferred to a prison that specializes in mental health services.
\n
\n\u201cThis job has given meaning and purpose to every bad thing that has ever happened to me,\u201d she says.
\n
\nBelen, preparing for her future, has saved up $4,000 in the years she\u2019s been locked up, she says.
\n
\nIn Wisconsin, Belen\u2019s sentence of 18 years stands out. Reporters analyzed 40-plus cases statewide from 2007 to 2018 in which people were convicted of child neglect resulting in death. Belen\u2019s sentence is the longest, although she\u2019s the only person convicted in three deaths. Wagner, the judge who sentenced Belen, several years later sentenced another mother whose toddler died in a fire after she left her three young children alone. He gave her 17 months. <\/a>I find it useful how you zoom out here to situate the severity of her sentencing against the backdrop of what\u2019s typical for these cases.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nWagner recently told the Journal Sentinel he barely remembers Belen\u2019s case. As for the fire itself \u2014 and the problems with the house\u2019s wiring \u2014 Wagner said it was for others to decide whether to assign blame to any landlords or property managers. \u201cI would think that some other law enforcement agency or entity would seek prosecution of that,\u201d he said. Williams, who prosecuted Belen and her mother, recently told a reporter, \u201cThe cops did not ask for those types of charges.\u201d Pye, the fire\u2019s lead investigator, said, \u201cWe never really went that direction.\u201d
\n
\nAfter the deaths of Belen\u2019s children, the state investigated the Bureau of Milwaukee Child Welfare\u2019s handling of the case. The bureau violated state standards in a number of ways, including in how it assessed the dangers and provided support services to Belen, the state concluded. <\/a>Were there repercussions for these violations? Did the agency have to pay fines or face reform in any way?<\/span>There were reforms made to the Bureau. The state actually took over the operations. But no fines were issued that we are aware of.<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nAfter Belen\u2019s arrest, the bureau placed her surviving child with his dad.
\n
\nBelen\u2019s son is now 11.
\n
\nSoon after Belen was sentenced, she requested that he be able to visit. A family therapist, in a court-ordered evaluation, interviewed Belen and her son separately. The therapist concluded that knowing his mom would be good for the child.
\n
\nBut it never happens. Belen still has parental rights, but once the courts grant her estranged husband custody, he moves with their son to another state.
\n
\nThe father doesn\u2019t want him in contact with Belen. \u201cShe walked out on us,\u201d he recently told a reporter before hanging up.
\n
\nBelen says she misses her son beyond words. She remembers how he\u2019d stare her in the eye and throw food from his highchair and giggle when she\u2019d pick it up. How he carried around a Bob the Builder book shaped like a wrench, hoping to get his mom or sister to read it to him. And how he adored Naya, who he called Ya-Ya.
\n
\nNow, she wonders how he\u2019s doing, what he\u2019s learning in school, who his friends are, what his favorite color is, what he wants to be when he grows up. Things a mom should know.
\n
\nShe wants him to know that she\u2019s always wanted to be part of his life. She wants to apologize.
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\nShe wants to be worthy of his forgiveness.\n

\n36.
\nOctober 26, 2022
\nDelafield<\/h3>\nThis February,<\/strong> a Journal Sentinel reporter goes to Todd Brunner\u2019s home in Delafield. He declines to come to the door but calls her in her car, parked just outside. Since his stroke, Brunner tells her, \u201cMy memory\u2019s shot.\u201d She asks about the house on West Hicks Street in West Allis, and he says: \u201cIt\u2019s so long ago, I don\u2019t remember a lot. All I know is, you know, we never did any electrical work there.\u201d
\n
\nHe says of the house, \u201cI don\u2019t even know what it looks like.\u201d
\n
\nIn late August, she returns, hoping to ask more questions. Two small lion statues sit at the end of the driveway. On the side of the house, near a wheelchair, there\u2019s a black Lincoln pickup. A sign above the garage says \u201cBrunner Blvd.\u201d The house appears under construction, as it has for months. Porch planks are half laid, the siding half finished. In the driveway there\u2019s a car, covered by a tarp. Peeking out is a hood ornament so famous it has its own name. It\u2019s the Spirit of Ecstasy, the Rolls-Royce\u2019s crowning touch.
\n
\nThe reporter sees a lit candle in the window. When she knocks, a dog barks. Nobody answers the door.
\n
\nLater, on October 26, Brunner picks up the phone. He says he didn\u2019t own the house when it caught fire. He won\u2019t answer questions and hangs up. Then he texts, asking for questions in writing. The reporter mails 11 pages of questions.
\n
\nBrunner responds by fax. Some questions he addresses. Some he does not. \u201cTo the best of my knowledge,\u201d he writes, he never knew about Belen\u2019s lawsuit against him. Of his arrest on federal fraud charges, he says police broke down his door before his family could answer. Of his battery conviction, he says rescue workers strapped him down against his wishes: \u201cThey had no right to do that and in my opinion, they should have been charged.\u201d
\n
\nFiguring out what Brunner owns, and how he\u2019s faring financially, has long been a challenge, even for law enforcement. Years ago, when creditors seized Brunner\u2019s possessions after he was denied bankruptcy protection, a police detective interviewed Brunner as part of the joint task force investigation.
\n
\nBrunner told the detective he\u2019d managed to borrow money from friends, and secure a new bank loan, and with that infusion, he\u2019d bought back \u201cmost of his property\u201d that had been put up for auction, according to the detective\u2019s interview notes. That 30-foot catamaran? Brunner tells the detective he bought it back for $26,000.
\n
\nAs for rental properties, Brunner may no longer be the owner of title, but that doesn\u2019t mean he\u2019s out of the real estate business.
\n
\nIn 2017, when Milwaukee receives a complaint of leaking pipes and loose wires at a house on North 36th Street owned by Shawn Brunner, an inspector for the Department of Neighborhood Services writes, \u201cTalked with Todd Brunner.\u201d In 2019, when Milwaukee receives a complaint about no hot water at another house of Shawn Brunner\u2019s, an inspector writes, \u201cCalled owner Todd \u2014 said he drove down there today and they wouldn\u2019t let him in so he turned off gas because they said they smelled gas.\u201d
\n
\nThis year, Milwaukee gets a complaint of no heat at an apartment on West Sheridan Avenue owned by Shawn Brunner.
\n
\nAn inspector writes, \u201cCalled Todd Brunner, who identifies as the property manager.\u201d
\n
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\n

How We Reported This Story<\/h3>\nThis story, a partnership between the Milwaukee Journal Sentinel and ProPublica, is the product of nine months of reporting. <\/a>I love that you included this section, which gives the reader a comprehensive glimpse into what went into this investigation. I imagine that the reporting process for an investigative piece of this sprawl can appear opaque or mystifying to readers. Do you often do this for stories?<\/span>For me (this is Ken), this kind of lengthy source box has become pretty standard for investigative narratives. Here are three other examples, from 2021<\/a>, 2018<\/a> and 2015<\/a>. And same for us at the Milwaukee Journal Sentinel. (Raquel here.) We do it in many of our investigations to help readers understand our sources for all of our facts. (See here<\/a>, here<\/a> and here<\/a> for examples.) It\u2019s especially useful when writing a narrative to avoid having to attribute in places that would detract from the scene. And it might be worth noting: While we didn\u2019t plug into the story one of those paragraphs numbering the people we interviewed and the records we reviewed, we did, within the framework of the narrative, give readers cues to our sources. We start Chapter 23, the first of several chapters featuring dialogue between police detectives and Belen, with this sentence: \u201cDetective Thomas Kulinski turns on the tape recorder and waits for Angelica Belen.\u201d That reference tells readers this was taped. There\u2019s a record of what was said from which verbatim exchanges can be pulled. In other instances we refer to voluminous documentation, starting Chapter 12, for example, with this: \u201cTodd Brunner files for bankruptcy, again, declaring, in court records, that he owes more than $18 million to creditors listed across 60-plus pages.\u201d<\/span><\/span>
\n
\nWe obtained records from at least 18 local, state and federal agencies, and from eight different municipal, circuit and federal courts. The records include notes of police detectives, code inspectors and process servers; emails among Milwaukee police and federal agents; autopsies; deeds; fire reports from the West Allis, Brookfield and Milwaukee fire departments, the Wisconsin Division of Criminal Investigation, the U.S. Fire Administration and the U.S. Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives; building-maintenance reports in Milwaukee and West Allis; Angelica Belen\u2019s state Department of Corrections file; and more than 100 photographs of the fire scene in West Allis.
\n
\nThe story\u2019s dialogue comes mostly from audio records or transcripts. We obtained recordings of the 911 call on April 11, 2013; the police detectives\u2019 five interviews with Belen on April 11 and 12, 2013; and Todd Brunner\u2019s sentencing hearing in federal court in 2017. We gathered transcripts of Dawn Sosa\u2019s sentencing hearing in 1992; a neighbor testifying about Brunner threatening him in 2004; Brunner being questioned by a bank\u2019s lawyer in 2012; Belen\u2019s sentencing in 2013; and Brunner\u2019s sentencing in 2020 on a battery charge.
\n
\nThis article includes accounts of childhood abuse provided by Belen and her sister Rosalie Breckenridge. We spoke with both women, separately, in multiple interviews during which they recalled similar details about their time in foster and adoptive homes. We interviewed Belen in 15-minute phone conversations spanning more than three hours and in dozens of emails and visits to prison. We interviewed Breckenridge over the phone and at her home in Iowa.
\n
\nTo try to verify their accounts, we inspected a voluminous file in Milwaukee County Children\u2019s Court. (Getting access required permission from Belen and Breckenridge, and approval by a Milwaukee Circuit Court judge.) These records provided details about the girls\u2019 biological parents, the girls\u2019 history and health, their movement through foster homes and schools, and assessments by social workers. The documents spelled out abuse the girls endured before being placed in foster care. The records did not include information about abuse by foster parents, saying only that the girls were removed abruptly from the home in Waukesha via an emergency order.
\n
\nDetails about the harm to Belen in the foster and adoptive homes came, in part, from another Children\u2019s Court file, regarding placement of Belen\u2019s son. (Getting access to this file also required a judge\u2019s approval.) In this file, social workers recapped Belen\u2019s history in foster care. Referring to the home in Waukesha, they wrote, \u201cAngelica and her sibling wanted a father and were moved to a two-parent home pending adoption, but were physically abused.\u201d
\n
\nSocial workers also noted that when Angelica was a teenager, living with the mother-daughter duo, they received a referral about marks on her wrists from being grabbed.
\n
\nIn court, Belen\u2019s aunt spoke and wrote of Belen\u2019s abuse in foster care. In addition, a client services specialist in the Office of the State Public Defender wrote a memorandum saying Belen \u201cwas victimized sexually in several foster placements.\u201d
\n
\nWe received limited records from the Wisconsin Department of Children and Families confirming payments to the Waukesha foster parents during the time Belen was with them. The department did not have a complete file on the family as the record retention requirement was 20 years and had expired.
\n
\nWe did not name the foster parents as our investigation did not turn up any court records indicating they were charged with any crime. Records from the Department of Children and Families show payments to the couple ceased at the time the girls were removed from the home, indicating they did not have additional foster children placed with them.
\n
\nWe interviewed the foster father from the Waukesha home. He denied they abused the girls. (We also tried to reach the foster mother. The foster father sent a text in response that he said was on behalf of both of them. \u201cWe Love them Very Much,\u201d the text said of Angelica and Rosalie.)
\n
\nThe daughter and mother who twice took in the two girls \u2014 when Angelica was 5 and 10 \u2014 are no longer alive. We found no records indicating either was charged with any crime relating to the girls\u2019 care.
\n
\nWe contacted Michael Guolee, the judge, now retired, who sentenced Dawn Sosa in 1992. (He\u2019s the judge who told Sosa, \u201cYou are weak.\u201d) He said he didn\u2019t remember the case.
\n
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\nCarly Stern<\/strong> is a freelance reporter based in San Francisco who covers housing, disability policy, urban life and economic inequality.<\/em>\n\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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