{"id":2456,"date":"2023-08-25T12:00:47","date_gmt":"2023-08-25T12:00:47","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2023\/08\/25\/gun-violence-narrative-structure-sensitive-interviews\/"},"modified":"2025-02-04T15:44:02","modified_gmt":"2025-02-04T15:44:02","slug":"gun-violence-narrative-structure-sensitive-interviews","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/niemanstoryboard.org\/2023\/08\/25\/gun-violence-narrative-structure-sensitive-interviews\/","title":{"rendered":"How a 9\/11 narrative guided a gun violence narrative 22 years later"},"content":{"rendered":"    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p class=\"has-drop-cap\">Before our first meeting about how to tackle a tick-tock of the mass shooting at an outlet mall in Allen, Texas, this spring, Kelley Benham French sent over an annotated copy of&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.washingtonpost.com\/wp-srv\/opinions\/articles\/sept_11_2001.html?fbclid=IwAR0YAyJKWOUiqRMSXqfX3SkDY-U-eJ_C4aIoRxH6VxoEwaTCKfCm9YSrhJc\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">David Maraniss\u2019 9\/11 Washington Post narrative<\/a>, published five days after the attacks. She said we could use it as a model for our story.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>At first, I felt almost like I was set up to fail. How could I even come close to writing something like&nbsp;<em>that?!?<\/em>&nbsp;Then I realized&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/mediaschool.indiana.edu\/people\/profile.html?p=kbfrench\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Kelley, the senior editor for storytelling<\/a>&nbsp;at The Dallas Morning News, was providing me a roadmap for how to tell a sprawling story with multiple characters, about a day that starts off aggressively normal and ends with life imploding. We didn\u2019t have to reinvent the wheel here. We just had to follow the steps laid out by other writers.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We followed that map and Kelley\u2019s guidance to a narrative published not quite two weeks after the shooting:&nbsp;<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.dallasnews.com\/news\/2023\/05\/18\/its-real-we-need-to-hide-how-the-allen-mall-shooting-unfolded\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u201c\u2019This is real. We need to hide\u2019: How the Allen mall shooting unfolded\u201d<\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>To get there, we knew the&nbsp;<em>normal<\/em>&nbsp;aspects of life before&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/apnews.com\/article\/shooting-outlet-mall-allen-texas-200f1ffadf7daefa42cfbe45510b083f\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">3:36 p.m. that Saturday, May 6<\/a>, would be essential. That\u2019s how we could best capture the feeling that this kind of random gun violence can happen anywhere, at any time, to anyone. Here\u2019s the opening:<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>The Cho family settled around a table near the kitchen at Eddie\u2019s Diner, not far from the giant American flag on the wall. The chocolate chip pancakes, dusted with powdered sugar, were their weekend ritual. They opened a pack of crayons for William, who\u2019d just turned 6.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Some 25 miles away, Mikael Garces needed to help her fianc\u00e9 buy an all-white outfit for a destination wedding. Mikael was excited for Greece, but she knew she\u2019d have to take him shopping if he was going to find the right thing to wear. He\u2019d be too indecisive on his own.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>At home in Sachse, 8-year-old Sofia Mendoza started working on a new story:&nbsp;<em>The Twins That Didn\u2019t Think Like Twins<\/em>. She wanted to be an author when she grew up. Maybe even win a Pulitzer Prize. Sofia was going shopping with her parents and her big sister, Daniela. She\u2019d keep writing when she got back.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>In McKinney, Joseph Adams and his 12-year-old son stood up from the bleachers after watching the Wylie high schoolers lose the baseball playoffs on a heartbreaking walk-off. On the way home, they figured, why not stop for some new shoes? Garrett had a $50 Nike gift card from the Easter Bunny.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Reporters throughout the newsroom were assigned victim profiles, which Kelley also edited. As she worked with other writers, she plucked key details that we could also use for the narrative story.&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.dallasnews.com\/author\/claire-ballor\/\">Claire Ballor<\/a>, for example, learned that on the morning before three members of the Cho family were killed, they celebrated their oldest son\u2019s 6th birthday at a diner where they were regulars. The owner told Claire that staffers had brought the little boy a cinnamon roll with a candle and sang to him. We needed to build that into a scene. Kelley told me I needed to go eat a cinnamon roll at the diner.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>So I went there on a Saturday morning to see what the family would\u2019ve heard and smelled and seen and tasted. I saw that every family with children was given crayons to draw with and that cinnamon rolls arrived at tables absolutely overflowing with glaze. These little details helped us paint a picture of a real life.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>We also had a rule: No traditional quotes, dialogue only.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-heading   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">A delicate but direct interview process<\/h2>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Eight people were killed and another seven injured in five minutes of shooting before police killed the shooter. Our narrative rebuilt the time before, after and during those five minutes through the experiences of survivors.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>When interviewing survivors, I was upfront about what the story was setting out to do and what I would need to hear. I explained why little details were so important and how every bit of digital evidence they could share would help me stitch together a definitive story about what happened, in a way that made readers understand that they could\u2019ve been there, too.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Mikael Garces, in particular, was an incredible person to interview because she immediately understood what we were going for and how to be helpful. She was introspective and really able to let me into her thought processes \u2014 like how she noticed her fiance\u2019s eyes during the shooting and how similar they looked when he was proposing to her.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>After talking with her the first time (we did three interviews), I left her with a notebook so that if she had any extra thoughts between our talks, she had a way to capture them. This was a tip from one of Kelley\u2019s newsroom writing workshops and I thought it was a genius way to empower sources and keep the conversation going. Mikael adapted that idea by making a shared note in her phone\u2019s Notes app. As memories came to her, or as she found screenshots of her store receipts or texts, she would upload them for me to see. I\u2019d get a notification every time she edited the note, which happened at all hours of the day.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Not everyone I interviewed was as upfront and open as Mikael. We knew we\u2019d have a lot of people coming in and out of the story, and chose to only include those interviews that brought a unique perspective. We didn\u2019t want to overwhelm the reader, but we wanted the story to feel cinematic in scope. We zeroed in on seven survivor stories, tracking their before, during and after. We tried to provide establishing details for everyone to help readers member them as the story unfolded. In addition, our online story included maps showing where every person was located in the mall.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>As much as possible, we interviewed people in places they felt comfortable. I talked to Joseph Adams and his son, Garrett, in their living room. Garrett\u2019s mom is never mentioned in the story, but she was essential. As the guys talked, she would chime in with such granular levels of detail. She was the one who mentioned off-hand that Garrett\u2019s gift card came from the Easter Bunny. When Joseph talked about getting clothes out of his trunk to plug wounds, his wife asked him: \u201cOh, which ones?\u201d (Kelley pointed to this as further proof that we should never interview a guy when a woman is available).<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-heading   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Writing and editing in scenes and takes<\/h2>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>After each interview with a survivor, I\u2019d write up a feed immediately. I always wrote in chronological order so I knew where every person was as the timeline of the shooting unfolded. I\u2019d then share the feed with Kelley, who was working with me via Google docs from Bloomington, Indiana, where she lives and teaches at the university. She would go through and add tons of great questions that forced me to return for details and slow down the action.&nbsp;<em>How many shoes had Garrett tried on? What shoe size is he? What is Alf doing in the Fatburger kitchen to prepare for the day? What does it smell like in there? Where is the American flag on the diner wall?<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Getting this kind of nearly simultaneous editor feedback was essential since we were doing this story on a relatively tight turnaround and I began to think differently about telling details, too. Also, because we had chronological feeds written of Joseph\/Garrett, Alf Gonzales, Mikael and Irvin Walker to pull from, the draft of the story came together pretty quickly. It was a bunch of copy\/pasting the most essential bits from across different Google Docs. We made a separate timeline of the 911 call transcripts, which we could intersperse. We then pulled in small sketches of different people that helped move the action. The general facts of the shooting were already established in breaking news coverage (the newspaper published more than 80 stories about the mall shooting in the immediate aftermath), so we were looking for details that felt tangible and real-life: the police officer talking about seatbelt safety in the mall parking lot right before hearing the first gunshot; the trauma director racing to the hospital straight from a wedding reception.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>I also interviewed other reporters who were some of the first on the scene to get a sense of what it felt like to them immediate after the shooting. They were the ones who could describe how it smelled like sweat as so many scared people huddled together in the sun and waited for information. Before this story, I had never thought so much about reporting for the smell, but Kelley talked about how this type of detail can really transport the reader.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>After the shooting, horrific videos and photos of the victims went viral on social media. We used these images to describe the scene but absolutely did not want to include any gratuitous descriptions of the bodies. We weren\u2019t writing trauma porn.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Still, the story was going to be devastating. Kelley emphasized that we wanted to end with hope after giving readers so much heartbreak. She immediately knew that Irvin singing was the kicker. It just took a lot of back-and-forth to get there. Irvin was still hospitalized when the story came out and not up for intensive interviews. The information about him was from a combination of his GoFundMe page, interviews with his lawyer and daughter and a short press conference he did from the hospital. I then ran everything by his appointed PR person to try and squeeze out detail. Here\u2019s how we got the ending:<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-list mb-4 list max-w-screen-full mx-auto pl-5 \">\n            \n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>The organizer of Irvin\u2019s GoFundMe posted an update to the page two days after the shooting:\u00a0<em>Irvin\u2019s surgery was successful and came out of recovery SINGING\u2026.LOL #goodmeds<\/em><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Reporter Sarah Bahari, who was the point person for writing about the wounded, talked to Irvin\u2019s daughter and found out that the song he was singing was, \u201cOh Happy Day.\u201d<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>His PR rep replied to my fact-check email by clarifying: He was singing, \u201cOh, Happy Day\u201d because Sister Act 2 was on TV when he came into his room.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>From there, we could build out the scene by watching YouTube videos and weaving in information about Irvin\u2019s gratitude. He is a spiritual man and emphasized his faith anytime he spoke out. Here\u2019s the ending:<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-quote mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>Two days after the shooting, Irvin awoke from surgery. Hospital workers wheeled him back to his hospital room, where Sister Act 2 played on TV. In it, Whoopi Goldberg leads a raw but gifted group of kids through choir practice, her fellow nuns looking on.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cRelax,\u201d she tells them. \u201cTake a deep breath.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>With all he\u2019d been through, Irvin felt grateful. To the officer who helped him. To the God he prayed to. To the doctors who worked to repair his body. To the family who supported him.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>In the movie, the boy with the solo finds his voice. And in his hospital room, Irvin too began to sing.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cOh, happy day.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n\n\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>\u201cOh, happy day.\u201d<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-heading   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Analytics measured by the heart<\/h2>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>There were some really hard moments when writing this article where I felt like,&nbsp;<em>Why am I doing this? Why am I making people relive horrors? Nothing will change, another mass shooting is inevitable. Does this type of work&nbsp;even matter?&nbsp;<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>But Kelley and the rest of us talked a lot about how it\u2019s a disservice to move on without giving people a chance to tell their story, to know that what happened to them belongs on the record. Even if these shootings keep happening, we can\u2019t allow people to shrug them off without confronting what they do to so many shattered communities.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-classic mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n    <div class=\"  core-block\">\n        <div class=\"block block--core block--core-paragraph mb-5   max-w-screen-full mx-auto\">\n            \n<p>After publication, I heard from numerous readers who thanked us for putting together such a vivid account. 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